Rain beauty MG SS Note: pg35

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Posted: 12 years ago
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It is inspired by the Malayalam movie 'Beautiful'.But I have changed the story.


prologue-pg1
pt1-pg7
pt2;pg12
Pt3:pg17
pt4:pg24
Epilogue:pg29
Introduction:

Maan was a part of his paralysed friend Yash.Yash existed because of his deep friendship with Maan.Maan's music was soothing for him.Yash was happy in his own world with his friend Maan.He was not a weak person who cried through out thinking of his ill health.He believed in enjoying every bit of his life in a funny manner.Yash,the Multi Millionaire could not enjoy his wealth because of his lifeless body.He knew that he was surrounded by his relatives who were his enemies actually.They were his mercy less blood suckers who pretended to be sweet only for his wealth.He knew that at any time they could kill him for that.He knew that if he could trust any of his relatives that was only Dev;his cousin.

Maan was in his own little world which was decorated with Yash's friendship and his music.


Prologue:

A beautiful blue pool'.

A beautiful girl drowned in the pool.Her cry was snatching the beauty of the innocent water pool.Maan jumped into the pool and carried her in his arms.She looked at her savior with gratitude.

He placed her down.He stared at her.

"If you don't know swimming why do you swim?"

"I came here with my friend to learn swimming.He got an urgent call and he left.That's why'"

Before she could complete her sentence he left.

Another day'.

The same girl sank in the sea.To her surprise this time also the same masculine hands saved her.Maan.

She could'nt believe her eyes when he lifted her in his arms.


Maan was irritated:You can't even swim in a swimming pool.Then why did you try to swim in the sea?Are you mad?

She:Sorry'I was just wetting my legs.My leg slipped and I fell down.The waves carried me away.

M:The next time onwards be careful.

She:Ok'and thanks for saving me twice.

M:No mention.

He walked away.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome prologue 😳
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awesome prologue 😳
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Hey jas, thank you so much for starting this SS... 😃🤗
So yash is paralysed and maan is his support. But his relatives are after his money 😡
The prologue is beautiful.
Maan saved geet twice from drowning.
is maan a singer or music director???
Loved the prologue, eagerly waiting for updates 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice start Dear ..

One request .. can you increase size of text dear.. it was hard to read such small letters :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely prologue,story seems interesting.update the nxt part soon.will be waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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New story, congo Jasmine :)
Awesome prologue :)
pics were 😳
Thanx for the PM :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WELCOME BACK . NEW STORY . GOOD GOING ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congratulation for new MG SS
awesome & interesting start
lovely
geet is falling problem every time maan is saving her
beautiful pics
loved them
waiting for more
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats for new ss👏
Amazing prologue⭐️
Eagerly waiting for first part

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