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Heartily thanks to those who read, liked and commented for me 😊

( As i will update this FF almost daily, i could not be able PM for it. so please check yourself every night. Its my sincere request )



Part 44

(Many of you mistook that Maan is paralyzed. No his condition is critical but not paralyzed yet 😆)

"Now you are happy to send Maan in this condition!!!!'' his eyes were spitting fire. He was in tantrum, in aggression, seemed like he was feeling the suffering of his own children. The very first time anyone could watch his state of mind and one, was presented there who was witnessing this agitation of him being paralysed.

"Tell Dev where is Geet!!!'' Madhav was to hit Dev again when Dev caught his hand in mid air.

"Stop it uncle!!!''

He glared Madhav in state of confusion.

"What are you asking I'm not getting anything!!''

"Don't try acting innocent Dev I very well know what you understand and what not! How did you contact Brij that he could come and take Geet away with him!!'' he glared Dev with all his hatred.

"Uncle believe me I don't know anything. I didn't talk him since the time I am with you''

"Do you really think I can believe you" Madhav gave him with the most disgusting look. "The man, who wants to marry his own sister-in-law, the man who hates his own brother to the extreme that can try to kill him!! Huh Dev don't utter that word from your mouth which meaning is unkown for your own. Today you are helping Brij but don't forget that he is the same person who didn't leave his own sister, and one day, he will not leave you too'

'' Now don't waste my time Dev and tell quietly where is he!! What's your planning otherwise I will not leave you anymore!!''

Dev got shock knowing about Maan accident. "What!! Maan got accident but how! Who did this?'' somewhere he did feel bad. Though he hated Maan to the core, had screamed many times in anger about murdering him but never had wanted to kill him in actual. He saw Madhav with question filled eyes "what happened to Bro uncle?'' he became serious.

Madhav smirked. "Not again Dev not again. Not again start your next drama in front of me because now I have seen your real side. Don't act like you felt bad for your brother who is battling for his own life''

"Uncle please tell me how is he? How did it happen? I really don't know anything about it!!''

" if you really don't know anything than it's good for you Dev otherwise you, would see a police officer in front of you rather than your uncle standing here, who is still controlling himself just because of his friend's family whom I accept as my own''

"Don't Bhaisahab!!!!'' a woman voice broke the burning conversation of both men. Both looked shocked to the entrance and found Dadi was there, broadening her eyes and hating Dev to the core of her heart..

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"Geet!!'' Rano came and hugged Geet tight making herself entirely free from those emotions which she had been hiding inward. She was crying clutching her daughter in her motherly warmth, overwhelming Geet in her heart completely.

"Geet puttar tu thik hai na''

Rano was lost capturing her desired moments did not know her daughter was not responding. Geet, who had killed her heart echo, had left her world to come here, to see her mother, was not reacting. She was not in sense to wipe her mother cry because she had sensed that now onward; she had to see only her mother's tears along with hers too.

"I'm fine maa'' she spoke after several minutes of muteness and then, shuts her eyes not wanted to see the glimpse of her past once again'

##

"Dadi!!''

"Don't call me Dadi Dev don't !!!!! you have lost this right !!!!!'' She spoke between tears. She had heard everything. She was more than shocked, had become dead for few minutes when came to know about Dev. It was the most disgusting shock and wicked thought she could ever have. Not in her worst nightmare she could think that her own blood can do anything like this. Her hatred filled gaze was burning Dev in the pits. She was hell furious on him, did not want to bear a single sight of him in front of her eyes. Her own heart was piercing, giving pain.

"Why Dev why.. why you did this!!!!''

Dev was mute. It was unexpected, was not ready for this. He bent his head down could not able to meet her eyes aversion.

"Aap ko humari property chahiye thi!!! Tell Dev did you want property, money, this business that you did not ven think once bfore taking life of your own brother!!!! And Geet' '' she could not even think what Dev wanted to do with her. She was ashamed of her own self that Dev was her own blood.

"Kya bigara tha uss maasoom ne aapka!!! Why you wanted to ruin that innocent girl Dev why!!!!'' she trembled, clutched her heart which was paining in extreame but her mental sore was more painful rather than any physical pain.

"dadima!!'' Dev raised his hand to support her ..

"Stop Dev!!!!! Don't dare to come near me. I don't need of your any fake concern. You are dead for me Dev did you hear!!! You are no more for me!!!! For me I have my Maan and Geet. You are no one to me!!! Chale jaaiye meri aankho ke saamne se go from here!!!'

She was feeling so weak, her voice was strangling but the unknown strength was giving her support. Seemed, need of Maan and Geet from her was not letting her become weak. She saw Dev was leaving quietly.

"One minute Dev''

He turned back had his head down still.

She turned to Madhav. "Bhaiya please call my laywer ''' and she instructed him something..

##

Geet with Rano was sitting in room. Since the time Geet had come she did not speak more than few needed words. She had become like had no sense of any livingness around. When Rano made her settle in her room, when she dearly made her drink water and when she forcefully fed her, Geet did not realize.

Rano who was damn happy finding her daughter back, did not notice her strange state for few hours, thinking may be she had been missing her husband. But when Geet did not show any of her excitement till now she started doubting. When she asked about Maan, Brij made randome excuses saying he was busy n all.

At night Geet was resting in Rano lap.

"Geet what happened Beta"

Rano was lovingly caressing her hairs. She was missing her daughter voice. Geet though wanted to talk normal but she was finding it so difficult. The distance she was feeling from Maan, was making her heart weak and body numb. The only hope she had that Maan would come to take her but now when she knew well that Brij had trapped her, her heart was sinking in prediction of darkness. The fear of future was killing her inside which she could not say to anyone. Not even to her mother who was happy getting her after many days.

"Geet beta, you Maan loves you na' Rano asked

Hearing Maan name Geet face lit up. It brought slight smile on her face. Instantly she sat up and looked Rano happily for the first time in these entire hours. Looking her lighten face Rano understood that her daughter had got her prince. She was so happy knowing this. She hugged Geet feeling so burden free in heart.

"I'm so happy Geet''

They were starting to share their hearts when suddenly heard Brij ordering

"Geet.. Maa you both pack your bags. We are leaving from here right now!!!''


Precap : "Dar lag raha hai Geet'' Maan asked. she nodded, snuggling in his arms like any child, keeping her tearing face on his shoulder.

"If I'm here, still.. ?'' She looked his eyes, tried to read it..


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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me again first yipee!!!

update ke baare main kya kahoo??? first of all i liked that daadi now knows every thing... it was much needed ... i loved how madhav questioned dev... dadis confrontation was too nice... has she called the lawyer to give him his property and money?

geet was too numb to react any thing... when she saw her mom did she realise she was well and may be brij has cheated her??? i love the smile coming on her face just on the mention of maans name... but what is brij upto now? where is he going to take them???

no maan in the update!!!! i missed him... kam se kam batha tho dethi that he is fine... katti

precap is confusing... maan and geet ek saath???? is it dream???
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Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

New Banner .. howz it 😊

muahhh loved it YAYYY😆😆😆
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Superb update. Glad that Dadi knows the truth about Dev. Looking forward to what is in store next and hoping that Geet manages to get out of her situation.

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