Sargoshiyan-Whisper of Love - THREAD 3 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Di tease kr na band kro plz update sn.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
SORRY GUYZZZ
i knw now all vl be angry with my excuse, n i actually understand, as u all r waiting from so long
got the report that day evening, fracture on my hand... n now its plastered...
whenever i vl be able to sit in front of the lappy, will update the part
its already written a long tym earlier, but i have to sit in front of the lappy for an hour, which is totally impossible with this hand now...
SORRY ONCE AGAIn... n dil se sorry guyz :'(
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Posted: 12 years ago
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~...IMPORTANT NOTE...~

Hey Friends,

THERE IS SOMETHING I NEED TO INFORM U ALL.

SAM CANT UPDATE AS SHE GOT PLASTER ON HER LEFT HAND &

LEFT ELBOW IS HURTED DUE TO AN ACCIDENT...

PLSS PRAY FOR HER..Soo She get well soon..

She Shouldnt Stress Herself For now..

PLSS U ALL HAVE TO WAIT STILL HER RECOVERY😊

Take Care Shona...😊❤️


Edited by vanshi_maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg take care dear,take rest.
awesome teaser.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Take care Sam...n plz Dnt bother bout update u just take full rest n get well soon dear...:)
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Part 34

In the whole drive, Maan tried to pacify Geet

By taking her sides against Pinky's comments, taunting her for what he only got angry glares and gulp down the next words

And mostly he was drooling on her cute little nose, which was looking like a small red tomato in anger, and the way she was behaving all cranky, it was making her look damn cute

(sam advising Maan to concentrate on the road now 😆 or else 😕)

Maan and Pinky was discussing about Maan's new music album, when all of a sudden Geet screamed

Geet: stop stop, stop the car

Both Pinky and Maan almost jumped and Maan stopped the car with a hard break and looked at the back

Geet looked and them innocently and asked both

Geet: why you both are looking at me like you guys are watching an alien live

Pinky: why you shouted?

Geet to Maan: stupid, don't you learn to stop the car a lil bit nicely?

Maan greeted his tooth: Geet is this a way to shout all of a sudden?

Geet: Now what I did?

She asked making an innocent face, though she was trying hard to hide her grin. Finally geet wass in peace to made Maan angry, as he was pulling her legs sometimes earlier

Pinky: Geet why you said to stop the car?

Geet: wo I need to buy something

Pinky: now?

Geet: Haan baba, how can we go to Maan's house in empty hand, we are going for the 1st time na?

Maan: Geet stop being this much formal, ok?

Geet: oye its not formality, it's just we are going for the 1st time and we can't go like this

Maan: stop your bakwas, they all know about you too, so no need to be over formal

Geet: but maan

Maan: right now, I'm taking you to my house na? Then you have to listen to me, when you will come by yourself, feel free to buy the whole mall

Maan said mockingly

Geet: But at least some small

Maan: geeettt

Geet: fine then

Geet said making a cute pout. Maan smiled at her baby face,

But you can't melt and let her enter your house maintaining so much formality- Maan's brain said to his heart not to melt on her cute cute faces

After some hours, the car stopped in front of Khurana Mansion, Pinky and Geet looked at the big house in front of them.

Maan gave horn, and two guards opened the big size gate to let the car enter in the Khurana property.

Accoding to Pinky, Maan's house totally looked like a palace in white, in front of the house, some gardeners were watering the plants, whole palace was surrounding with the garden, which Geet liked the most rather than looking at the size of the house like Pinky.

Geet: Maan, why you guys didn't plant any flower plants, all are huge fruit trees here

Maan: hai na, but flower garden is inside the mansion, near my gym

Geet: I will visit there then

Geet said grinning, she loves flowers the most

Maan: accha baba, but first meet with my family na

Pinky: nehi Maan, let's throw her in the garden first

Both laughed together and in return got dagger glares from Geet

They came out from the car, and the front door opened.

There Savitri and Natasha were standing for welcoming them

Trio walked near them

Maan: Mom, Daadi ma, here they are, she's Pinky, n here Geet

Pinky n Geet: Namaste Daadi ma

They kneeled to take blessing from the older lady, but Daadi ma hugged both the girls affectionately

Daadi ma: arre, no need to do all that, I'm not a old fashion lady babies

All laughed all together

But it's really a true fact, a mother's eyes can never failed to understand her child, Natasha could see the extra glittering shine in her son's eyes and also the dazzling broad smile on Maan's face while he was introducing Geet or even looking at Geet.

Pinky: Namaste aunty, I'm Pinky, and ye rahi Geet

Natasha: how are you both?

Geet: I'm fine aunty

Daadi ma: accha, can't we go inside and talk

Natasha: haan maa ji, aao na tum dono, aandar aao

All settled down in the hall room,

Daadi ma: I heard a lot about you both from Maan

Pinky: Daadi ma, he never said anything about you all

Natasha: hawww, maan, chi

Maan: but mom

Pinky started laughing and said

Pinky: waise aunty, he didn't even said his real name

All started laughing

Maan looked at Geet who was sitting quite uncomfortably and looking at Natasha with her doe shape eyes. Maan felt that something was running on her head, neither she is participating in the conversations nor she is actually listening their talking.

So maan tried to make her feel comfortable

Maan: Geet u wanna see the garden?

Geet smiled meekly and said,

Geet: yes, wo I wanted to see that, can I aunty?

Natasha: haan beta, sure

Maan: Pinky you want to join us

Before Pinky could reply Daadima interfered,

Daadi ma: nehi nehi, u both go, and Pinky will go with me, I need to let her check all that chocolates Mrs. Bhatia gave me yesterday

Pinky gave a big grin that reached ear to ear on her round shape face

Pinky: haan Geet, you go with Maan, I don't feel like going now

Daadi ma already had some wicked plan to settle his grandson, and she was already day dreaming geet in Natasha's shaadi ka jora with Maan in sherwani



Maan took geet with him, and both headed towards the garden.

Maan: Geet what happened? Are you still angry with me?

Geet: nehi to, why are you saying this?

Maan: nehi, all of a sudden you are in silence

Geet gave a small smile,

Geet: I'm fine maan, no need to worry about me

Both sat down in the garden, Geet was looking at the garden, it's just awesome in every sense, all her sad feeling flee away just to see the beauty



suddenly her eyes went towards the pink roses, her favorite one




Geet: it's so sweet, it looks like someone took utmost care to grow each and every flower

Maan smiled at her bubbly self,

Maan: yes, mom loves gardening and all these it her hard work

Geet: She is a lovely mother na?

Maan: yes she is, she is the perfect one, perfect daughter in law, perfect wife and best mom, I never saw daadi ma considering her or taking her side as a daughter

Geet: you are a lucky person, you have everyone

Maan looked and her and just cursed himself to say this much. He can easily read her face and the pain for not having her mother near her

Maan cupped her face,

Maan: Geet, don't you think I'm the unlucky one who doesn't have any siblings like you have? And then you have Ria bhabi, who always loves you as her own kid

Geet: you too have daadi ma na? I don't have any

Maan: yes, and I have one hitler dad, you don't have someone like him

Geet slapped him playfully and both started to laugh. Maan just wanted to see this princess happy, and no sadness was allowed anywhere near her, but what they missed was the person who's watching them and smiling

PRECAP: Geet and Maan's mom cute sweet lovely conversation


thnx those who waited for the updates, i actually planned to give a lil more big, but my bad luck, my hand is still in d same condition, n working in one hand is really difficult.hope this size is good enough for u all 😊


May be many of u missed this note, so have a look to know my bad condition 😭


NOTE


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~~S@m~~

Edited by Dipti_Sam - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
after a long time , missed your updates
loved it
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#38
Amazing update but why short one ???
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Aww...realy very cute update.loved it.Hpe u r ok now and thanks fr d pm di.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyc part...
finally geet is in her to-be-sasural...
n meet hr MIL n GMIL...
well both ladies r smart

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