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Originally posted by: Dipti_Sam


yehi ki Geet ke haath se pithai na ho isske karan OutHouse nai gai Ragini ne 😆


Aur nai Toh kya 😡 uss kamini ragini ki toh pura black n white action movie ki tarah pithai honi chahiye..ek maarege toh pura hil jaayegi😆😆
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Hoyyeee oyeee
balle balle ballee
Finally Update Miling 😆

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Thnx a lot Shruthe Diii for this awesome blossom banner... its just what i always tried to portray my story in short 🤗

This update is specially to my Buddhu shona... mere spamming master, mere thread ko update tym to baksh de de baccha... 😆

AND ONE IMPORTANT THING GUYZ, this small update took 4days for me to write,will not give any lame excuses to my readers.but from last few weeks i m facing sum prblms in my personal life... still moving all those prblms in one side, i tried hard to concentrate in writing.now its getting worse. but im a human n i can't run my mind when im hurt emotionally 😭 still i tried and post something today, i hope you guyz vl understand my situation and will motivate me always, ur one sec like n 10sec's comment means a lot for me, n thts y during these prbs, im updating. im not telling u all for getting any pity on me, just to tell u im writing for my loyal readers and plz don't be silent n comment on story, so tht i can feel better and write the next part soon . InshAllah will be back this week... will not make u all wait for long


Part 41

Pinky: geet, you go ahead, I forgot to bring the door key from daadi ma, and I'm coming in 2 minutes

Geet: grrr, tu bhi na, jaldi aaja

Pinky went back while geet started to walk towards the outside while yawning

But before she could complete her yawn, one hand came from behind and closed her mouth, so that she could not able to shout, and in another hand clasped her tightly

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Geet started to fight against the fluffy hand, when Pinky whispered near her ear

Pinky: why are you fighting yaar? It's me

Geet pushed her and almost shouted

Geet: stupid, moron, gaddhe, what the hell is wrong with you? Is it a way to come from behind and clinch my mouth?

Pinky: wo I thought I will seal your mouth so that you will not shout if you get scared?

Geet: is it a way to say don't shout? You could call me rather than following these kind of kidnapping style

Pinky started laughing at Geet

Pinky: so Geet the sherni actually got scared, hehehehehehehehe

Geet: Shut up pinky, and you better stop watching detective movies and yes stop eating that much, you are so tough like a man now

Pinky: aise mat bol, I can't stop eating, it's my hobby yaar

Geet rolled her eyes at her cribbing

Geet: by the way, where is the key?

Pinky: wohi to, you go and take that

Geet: pinkyyy, then where were you?

Pinky: I didn't feel like going all alone in this dark, so came back to tell you to go

Geet: grrr, I hate you

Saying so Geet started to walk towards the Mansion

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Geet entered the mansion and saw the workers switching off the lights after completing their works. Geet asked one of the workers

Geet: bhaia, where's the outhouse key?

Worker: Madam it's on upstairs shelf, near the big balcony, you wait for 5 minutes, I will go and get the keys

Geet: nehi nehi, its ok, I will go and take it, no problem, you do your work, its already late

Saying so Geet started to walk, She went near the shelf and saw the balcony door was slightly open.

It was already cloudy, would start raining any time. Geet thought the servants might forget to close the gate. So geet went to close the gate.

She peeped inside and saw the whole balcony was decorated with red roses, orchids and colorful lights. She went inside totally mesmerized by the gorgeous decoration.

In one corner, there was a small tent type to cover the small table and two chairs from rain. A small bouquet kept on the table along with a card. Geet went near the table and picked up the card.

Kuch ehsaas hone laga hai
kuch dil ye samajhne laga hai...

Wo khubsurat se pal yaad aate hai
Honto pe halki muskan chod jaate hai...

Uski wo baatein dil ko chu jaati hai
Ek choti Muskan uski din bana deti hai...

Kehne ko to sirf Dost hai hum
Rishta hai aisa jo hoga na kabhi khatam...

Geet smiled while reading those lines. It's like she was cherishing the times when she first met with Maan, oppsss their driver Maan

Wo roti hai to mera bhi dil tut ta hai
Uska dard mujhe apna sa kyu lagta hai...

One small smile crept her lips when she remembered Maan punching Piyush and also all the tactics to make her smill that time

Aaj kuch ehsaas dil ne mehsus kiye
Uski ek jhalak ke liye hum taras gaye...

Jab use bina kahe dur ja raha tha
Mano jaise dil ka koi hissa piche chut raha tha...

She remembered how sad she was when she came to know that Maan left Delhi, the way she felt one part of her heart was shattered and only a glimpse of Maan can make everything better

Uske bin har ek din berang sa lagta tha
Usko mere liye waha dekh ye dil naach utha tha...

Kya ye ehsaas hai jo dosti se jyaada hai
Kya ye pyaar hai jo dil ne mehsus kiya hai...

(thnx to Mishtiritu for this awesome writing for this story)


Geet's eyes widened to read those lines, was it for her? She looked around and saw the decorations again.

But Maan always said that she is his best friend, then for whom he wrote these lines, is there someone else in his life? Is it Ragini?

As soon as those thoughts came in her mind, tears clouded in her eyes. She felt like she is going to lose her precious thing.

Her chain of thoughts broke when she heard Maan's voice

Maan: It's really bad to peep in someone's personal things, don't you think the same Geet?

Geet turned behind and saw him standing near the gate with a smirk. Geet felt like she did a very big sin, she wouldn't come here in the first place. It's not her house, nor did she have the right to roam around the house.

Geet: I'm sorry Maan, wo, wo I just ca,,, came to take the,,, the key,,, and ,,, and then,,, I should leave

Saying so Geet started to leave the balcony but Maan caught her hand

Maan: now when you came here, won't you tell how it is?

Geet felt tears coming from her eyes, the mere thought of Maan love Ragini and both together as couple make her weak, but she didn't want to show her weakness in front of Maan. She tried to took off her hand from Maan's grip

Geet: I need to go maan,,, pinky mus,,, must be,,, waiting

Maan heard her chocked voice and turned her slowly to see the tears brimming her eyes

Maan: hey, geet, kya hua?

Geet:sorry,,, I'm,,, I'm sorry,,, I should,,, should not come here

Maan cupped her face totally unsure of what was running inside Geet's dumb brain.

Maan: didn't you like the decoration?

Geet nodded her head negatively

Maan: ohk leave the decoration, didn't you like the writing on the card?

Now that made Geet furious, she snapped and freed herself from Maan's grip.

Geet: why are you asking me, go and ask.,,, ask Ragini

Geet said while controlling her whimper for going out in front of Maan

Now that made Maan startled, he did so much for her, and here why she is talking about Ragini

Maan: why will I go to Ragini, that's bull shits Geet. I mean, if you don't like my plan, and then fine, say no to me, why are you including ragini in all these?

Maan jerked Geet towards him in anger

Geet: Why are you asking me?

Geet asked in same anger

Maan:aab tumhare liye hai to tumhi se nehi to kisse puchunga mai?

Geet looked at Maan in wide eyes, that answer was something Geet never expected in all these.

Maan: now why are you looking at me like this? I didn't hire any ghost here, well may be that would be better rather than all those flowers and lights

Geet: say it again?

Maan: say what? Geet do you seriously want ghost instead of flowers?

Geet wacked him

Maan: ouch, now what was that for?

Geet: tell na? For whom you did all these?

Maan knotted his brow and asked

Maan:now don't tell me you didn't understand that it's all for you

Geet hugged Maan tightly all of a sudden making Maan surprised

Geet: I thought it's for Ragini, as you said I was peeping in someone else's personal thing

Maan broke the hug and gave an angry look to Geet

Maan: seriously Geet? It's too much

Geet touched her ears with her hands and made a puppy face

Geet: sorry

Maan: didn't you find any suitable girl at least, why on earth you got Ragini to think with me?

Geet: aur koi to thi nehi yaha, without pinky and ragini

Maan: I hate you

Geet:hawww, you did all these to say you hate me


Geet wacked him again

Maan: I shouldn't do all these for you

Geet: thik hai, to jarahi hoon mai

Saying so geet started to go, Maan pulled her towards him and brought her close to himself

Maan: aab jake dikhao

Geet felt herself melting in his soft voice

Geet:Maan leave me, koi ajayega

Maan:its midnight geet, all are busy in good night sleep

Maan brought her more closely while talking with her

Geet: pinky is waiting

Geet said while unknowingly snaking her hands around Maan's neck

Maan: she has the keys, I told her to send you here

Geet: what? She knew it? She lied with me

geet said making a sad face

Maan: that's because I wanted to give you a surprise

Maan replied while playing with her curls near her face

It's so natural for both of them. Both of them didn't feel like they are new in this path of starting a new relation with each other.


PRECAP: jana maat, picture abhi baki hai... as propose to kia hi nehi maan ne 😳


by the way, why all of you wanted maan as Geet's kidnapper... good guessing... but bad guessing guyz,,, 😆


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Edited by Dipti_Sam - 12 years ago
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Ab dekte hai Maan Geet ko kaise Manofy kareka :P 😆
geet maaf karegi ya jhoote phekegi 😕😆

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