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me katti wid u dii
jao iss bar aap kuch v kaho nahi maanugi mai
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to jaldi kar na ...😃
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w8 fr the update dear
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u updating ... wow... am waitinggg
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THANKU SO MUCH



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THANKS TO SUHANA FOR SUCH A BEAUTIFUL BANNER



Haq chapter 18

Sorry not to answer you all as I am so busy but I really cherish you every comment with whole hearty.. and less comment always discouraged to a writer.. but I am so happy to see you all with me.

Maan and geet reached where all family is staying with office staff also.. vicky and yash took whole Dharamshala (motel) on rent as there is no hotel.. as usual suhani bua and sasha and annie type people is cribbing about this arrangement but have to adjust without any other choice.

So today maneet with mitu also there and whole environment is fill with laughing mitu is still in maan arms.. and yawning she is just woke up from her beautiful sleep and now little cranky also.


(thanks sumiya for this edit)

All tried to take her but she turned her face and hide herself in maan protective arms.. geet went with meera in the kitchen which is a typical village kitchen with wood chulha (gas) and here people still using some silver and mud pots for cooking its depend on dish.. so right now all are enjoying this typical village unexpected holidays.

"Nene nen nene" mitu squealed suddenly without any reason maybe she is not happy with sounds and all.

"Kya hua isse chotu se bache ko" dadi sooke and kiased mitu cheek who made face with dadi kiss and smacked her head in maan neck.

"See her antics bro abhi se itni naughty hai jab bolne or chalne lage gii tab kya hoga" vicky spoke and attracted mitu who is now little active but yawning continuously.

Geet serves to all some snakes and tea and coffee for maan..

"Geet!!! Beta what are doing?.. come sit here" dadi scold geet very cutely which made everyone smile.. and a free jump and giggled from mitu.

"Dadi vo meera dii working alone so" geet spoke

"Dadi saying right you have to proper rest and sasha will help me" meera spoke with a naughty grin and yash shook his head this is very clear all khurana ladies have some old tiff with sasha... meera made geet sit and gave her some milk

All family gathering is so pleasant.. and relaxing.. but as usual suhani bua is watching geet in disgust.. but dont have guts to say anything in front maan and sasha wants to wipe geet existence from the earth but for her bad luck maan is geet shield.. and breaking him next to impossible.

"Arre you know what is today?" Vicky asked.

"Abbe tu hi bole de kya hai (what is today? Spite it yaar" yash spoke and smacked him on his back.

"Happy mother's day dadi" maan spoke and touched dadi feet and vicky is watching him with open mouth.. suhani also wished dadi as she is her mother but dadi is reluctance.. as she still remembered her not so decent word for her own blood.

"Bro this is wrong I want to wish dadi first but you always spoiled my plan" vicky started his blabber sometimes maan thought he is some long lost brother of geet.. he saw this bubbly geet inside of this simple and silent geet.

All took blessing from dadi with meera and geet..

"Hold on guys there is one more bacha waiting to wish her mom haina mitu" vicky spoke and made her giggles but she is not ready to come to anyone.. she is so moody.

Maan went near geet and made mitu lips touch to geet cheek first than said as mimicked like mitu

"Happy mother's day mumma.. abhi I am small to dadaa se hi kaam chala lol" maan spoke in animated tone and made all amazed by seeing him like that all playfull.. even vicky was acting like fainting.

Geet had tears in her almond eye a motherly feeling is beyond imagination.. this is a proud of all women

*****

(Below para is not related to story so I am writing in hindi for my words of all mothers)

Maa!!! Shayad bhagwaan ka hi dusra naam hai.. ya vidhta ka hi roop jo dharti per palankarta hone ka farz nibha raha hai.. maa khud bhuki rahe kar bacho ka pet palti hai isse koi fark nahi padta vo janwer hai insaan.. yaa koi bhagwaan ..maa ka ahsaas ek jaisa hai isse jag mai tabhi shayad usse bhagwaan ka darza diya hai logo nahi.. we all are young soul here.. just dont hurt your mom.. because you also going to be old and your children also watching you... every senior citizens is our responsibility.

*****

Maan gave a beautiful and elegant watch to dadi and yash gave a necklace.. and vicky just as usual take his place in between with his guitar.. and sand a song for dadi other side geet gave so many kisses to mitu who is still in maan arms and geet also went to maan arms.. today first time suhani bua eye num for her son who is no more.. she loves him but his running away from home for a girl.. made her bitter but she also wants to listen all this from her son.. but her astonishment she saw prathvi who just appear in front of her with mist eye and saw his mitu who is right now on right place.. he laughed on her mom.

"You lost again mom.. you lost again" prathvi voice starts to echoing in her ear and she shut them

"Bas!!! Chup hu jao" suhani shouted.. and she left from there.

"Yaar continue.. arre bro give bhahi gift also naa from mitu side" yash spoke and settled himself on couch.

"I forget!!! Will take her out in the evening and buy with her choice" maan spoke and kissed mitu cheek as she is pulling his tie like anything.

All dismissed to their rooms for a small nap

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Geet woke up after one hour and saw maan and mitu is still sleeping so she placed pillow on her side and secure mitu in bed and left from there outside.. to see ..what others are doing?..

"bhabi you woke up.. mitu nahi aayi" annie asked.. she want to play with her but this small girl has so many antics.

"She is still sleeping annie (vo so rahi hai annie.. travel se thak gayi hai)" geet spoke and sat with others to piles peas (mater chilne) as they decided to make peas rice in dinner light and easy.. even pinky.. and other girls and ladies also sitting their and having a gala time with all gossips.. even some village ladies also join them everything is so heart touching there far away from city life.. they are talking about their children and husband no one is less here meera even dadi is telling them all old stories about dada jii.

"geet hum jaa kar mitu ko check karte hai.. aise chote bache ko nahi chodte if she wake up than she will just search you" dadi patted geet cheek.

"hum jate hai naa dadi" geet spoke.

"ok app bhi chaliye"



Both enter into the room and find mitu is wide awake and playing in herself.. specially blabbering don't know what and maan hands securely wrapped around her.. even in his deep sleep also.. this is a inner feeling which make a father or mother conscious even in their sleep.. and mitu like a good girl not making much sound just throwing her leg and hands in air and maybe taking with pigeons who are sitting on window.. but with her face she is having gala time.

Dadi and geet smiled to see this small monkey and dadi smiled to see her hard and tough grandson soft side for a small child who is just turn out his life line.. mitu startled to see them and starts to call geet.

"ahhah rhrh bdbddb"

This made maan stirred in his sleep and he opened his eye.. dadi maa went to his side and starts creasing his head and he also placed his head on dadi lap.. and geet took mitu who is bending for going to maan and sat with them.. maan smile and took her from geet and made her stand on his chest carefully.. geet went and unpacked mitu beg for new dress as this dress is dirty now..

"she is just small bundle of joy.. didn't she?" dadi spoke.

Maan smiled and made mitu lay on his chest and mitu is busy with his eye and nose lips.

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In evening all request geet so much to come with them for small outing.. and she had to say yes but the problem is mitu is sleeping and outside is so chilled and sleeping child catch cold so soon.

"Left her here geet I am here and you are just going out for half hour.. if she needs you i will send Vicky to call you" maan made her assure and send her with others.

Geet left mitu with maan and went for a pure girly outing.. she really likes meera company.. annie is also good but she is really a city girl with all morden qualities and she hates to be here in a backward village and otherside she and meera is exploring it with so much curiosity.. maybe this is first and last time they are roaming in village.. which made them feel they come 100 yrs back and maybe more but here is life exist and more over they are more happy compare to us in their small world.

Here in motel maan got a call but did find proper signals..

"Vicky go and sit in my room mitu is sleeping there and I am going to out for 10 minute as there is a call but you know signals here" maan sighed and went out to received call and Vicky went in maan,s room.. but to his bad luck mitu wake up and starts cry and made Vicky panicked.. this is his first time all alone with a toddler and more over who is holing on top of her lungs.. he run and took her small form in his long hand with so much care and tried to swing her but no use.. he is shivering as what will he do now?.. and mitu hiccups making her more and more nervous.. in all this he starts to blabber what come into in his mouth..

"sona!!! Be quite naa we will eat pizza today" he is actually saying this to a 3 month old baby.. tension do this to a 6 ft man.. god bless him.

"arre haa i saw that day bhabi sang a lullaby and she slept without put more hurdle but i don't know any lullaby.. Chill dude you are Vicky singh khurana and how mitu understand words so just sing whatever you want" Vicky thought and smiled proudly on himself.

He started..


"Baba baba black ship"
(mitu cried more laudly with his without rhythm music)

"Ye nahi ok accha next achi wali"
(mitu saw him for 1 second after seeing he is making faces)

"Twinkle twinkle little star
Aage ka humko nahi aata yaar
"
(again she holing top of her and vicky is try all methods to make her calm)

"Accha aur achi deshbhakti"
(mitu hit him with small hand and wiggled to come out from his arms)

Saare jaha se accha hindusita humara

"Ye bhi nahi Accha"

"Hum sab bhartiye hai"

"Accha baba now chachu will sing a homemade poem"

(Mitu is really watching him confusion but again end up a cry)

Chup hu jaa meri cutiepie
Chachu will marry to a sweetpie
My sweetpie will love my cutiepie
And chachu give kiss to his both pie
"Accha haa humari mitu tu kitni small hai chachu will sing in hindi English nahi aati naa abhi chutku ko"

Chup ho jaa meri gudia rani
Chachu tu tajhko kubh gumhaye ge
Naye naye gude aur khilone laye ge
Phir meri nani pari has ke dikhaye gii
Or kabhi naa rone payi gii

Ek chachi bhi sewa ko laye ge
Din mai teri raat mai meri vo hogi
Khub saari usse dishes ban waye ge
Phir hum dono milker khaye gee
Abb tu main rishwat mai lori bhi suna dii
Abb tu chup hu meri nani
Warna tere papa nai hai meri watt lagni
Meri soni abb no more roni roni.
(Right mitu face not understanding what to do but her expression saying she is going to burst in ear breaking cry.. her eye watching like she is going to bite him and crunched her nose)

**************

Outside a car come and a beautiful yet sexy girl come out from the car.. and to all ladies wonder who is coming back from other side along with geet.. maan himself open the door for him and she hugged maan with a baby like enthusiasm.. She is really pretty and hugging maan even maan reciprocate her hug with a smile.. Don't know but geet felt a burning session in heart, brain and eye at same time.







Precap: nisha roy is here.. and maan find mitu all drenched with tears and other side Vicky making wired faces.

Words: 2250

Thanks for likes and comment this ss again reached to 250 likes and i am so happy for it...

Dulhan reader if you want next update which is almost done than complete 320 likes there is only 270 still now it's up to you.. Maybe some of you don't know i updated chap 26 on 12 may.

DULHAN CHAPTER 26 MAY 12




Edited by BULBUL.A - 12 years ago
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Lovely update
😃

Loved the family moments
Geet and Mitu finally have their family
😊

All notice Mitu- Maan's attachment
Geet too feels blessed
😳

Mother's day moments and your verse was truly touching😃

Vicky is just too much😆 😆 😆
Poor Mitu kahan phas gayi

New entry🤔
Geet jealous
and Maan😕

Continue soon
😃
Edited by heytal - 12 years ago

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