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actually i wrote this os 3 month back and made valli dii and ruby read it but didnt complete it yet as this is really big chap i thought to post it today as i am not posting any other chap today.. i am so sad today so here it is.

chapter 1

ADHOORI DASTAN

Kabhi kabhi kyu aisa hota hai

Pyaar zindgi leta hai

Naa kisi ki khata naa kisi kaa gunhaa

Phir bhi rahe gayi ye

ADHOORI DASTAN

mere ishq ki adhoori dastaan

.teri wafa ki adhoori dastan

Ye khani nahi hai

Kisi ki zindgi ki ghuaar hai

Do asso bhi naa girana isse par

Bas itni darkaar hai

Vo wefaa nahi majboor hai

Mujhe se nafart kar lena

Use nafart naa karne ki darkaar hai

Bebasi ki gutan mai gute gaya humara pyar

Abb dard mai marne ki darkaar hai

Life is not better then which is nowadays for "GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA'. Geet is recording her voice in her little tape recorder today after four month as Maan is out on his one business trip and geet is alone in their room so thought to complete her recording today. Geet had a habit to record her voice from childhood. Which recorder is only having tears after marriage now going to fill with geet smile.

Geet took out her little tape-recorder from locker and lie on her bed on her stomach and place tape recorder in front of her and start to write.

Hey my secrete friend,

Hmm I am here to tell you that my husband is best husband in the world what happened?... oh are you shocked hmm . :P I know . I know you always think my husband is worst husband in the world but but but hell no. I know he is so rude with me in starting 3 month but he is hurt for something .. but L sadly he didn't not tell me why is he upset earlier so I can't tell you also my jaan chalo chodo hmm so where am I? . Yes I am telling you how lovely my husband is haa haa I am telling you naa don't be impatience to listen my hubby bee love dove talks oyee don't make this teasing face. I am feeling all blushy blushy haa so my hubby is cutest person in the world hehe J THE GREAT MSK and cute. If he comes to know I called him cute then he will take me now and punish me all night in his unique style .uff Shameless hubby oye friend close your ear this is private ok hmm but he is so romantic if he is not have kc then he will be with me 24*7 on bed only ;). You know what he starts to like me so much nowadays he said he wants little time for love but he is really can't live without me uff in starting how much he was try to make me run back to mumma papa house now see he can't send me for one day also dusht danav how many time I called him I want to go to meet papa but possessive hubby ji don't want to leave. Hmm uff how much you talk my jaan now let me start my hubby tale. He was soo kharudsarrogant and attitude just don't ask but dadi always said he is like coconut just show how arrogant he is but he cares for me always but L never show as he never wants I will attached with him but now he really like he wants I will do his all work just like good wife and he is so passionate with me also now you know he confess he starts to falling for me and I teach him how to smile in any condition hmm I were so sad when he said to me he didn't wants to marry with me but dadi force him so do not expect anything from him you know naa I cried so much on our first night but you know he also cried he tell me now because he thought he broke all my dream and who give him right to break my heart but he said he was helpless dadi blackmailed him with her melodrama just like always heheh I love dadi. She perfectly knew how to make the great msk bend on his knees emotional attyachaar you know ;) hmm so where am I haa I felt so bad when I come to know all forced him and I were really mad that why I thought he was not thinking I was worth of him L but now he told me he was in his own guilty world where was broken slowly to see my sad face but what was my mistake I didn't know naa why was he behaving like that so I thought what my wired mind told me :/ but that day you know naa his birthday .(she completely go in past and stop recording and start to think turning point of her marriage life).






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Edited by -Mitu- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yipeee me first🥳🤗

nice dear😊

maan married geet only fr dadimaa

maan slap geet😲

maan loves geet but can nt accpet hr😕
Edited by dhakdhak22 - 12 years ago
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Wow mohi that was truely ossum
EVery thing was perfect
Emotional anger love care.
Geet is cutely cribbing her secrets to taperecorder.
Superb
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: valli22

Wow mohi that was truely ossum
EVery thing was perfect
Emotional anger love care.
Geet is cutely cribbing her secrets to taperecorder.

Superb


you are first one

so happy u like it

and thanku nahi boling but hugs for you

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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
That was really awesome
maaneet married and maan is not accepting it
and he slapped geet and when he saw her lying down he realized her importance in his life

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