MG- Her first word! Thread2 added..on pg152.

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chhavi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
<font color="#cc00cc">hi thanks 4 da pm n superb sweet update! Aarav is like Maan! wants to b like him! Maan embarrased! update soon ! well written </font>

thank u so much for ur lovely comment dear:)
happy that u liked jr msk!

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chhavi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: SweetestPari
Wonderful story yar...
Lovely...
Liked it very much...
Awesome concept...
Waitinggg for next part already... Hehehe... ;-)
Do pm me too yar :-)

thank u dear:)
will pm u for sure!

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chhavi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: shah10
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thanks😊

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chhavi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

that was really cute...marry a girl , jiska naam mishty ho... !

😆 haan, thats a must quality for aaru's would be bride!

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chhavi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: spvd
part 1
awesome...
so i was right even Aarav is in the competition...
lovely part dear...
my God his replies were too good...
only he can embarrass Maan...
cont soon dear...

yes deeps ur guess abt that "bhaiya" thing was also right..

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chhavi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Ash1991
amazing update...
loved it...arav is so cute...

ya he is cute:)

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.OneDirection.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

awww so cute 😆 Just lovely cutie aarav 😃 all insisting princess to speak thre name 😆 and arav said i want to be papa 😆 😆 wonderful cute story 😊

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dreamymishti88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

awesome

fabulous part

very nicely written

liked a lot

continue soon

waiting for next

waiting

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Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Congratulations on a new story Shona.🥳

I loved the prologue and the first part.

Loved the introduction of Maan and his chota sa aashiyan of 6.

I also liked how with a few sentences you have characterized, each character completely.

Aarav is adorable and so is his Maani😃

So Aarav wants to be a Papa when he grows up. What a tall ambition for the little brat😆

Goes to show how much he adores his Papa.

I can totally see MSK, as a overly posessive father, with a daughter being the apple of his eye.😳

Well now, this is an age old question isn't it, whom is the baby going to call out to first.😆

I have friend's who've made bets that whomsover the baby calls first would get an ipad from the other. Guess who qualified for the the ipad? Ace, their dog🤣

Yet another friend's daughter's first word, after being trained day and night to be called mommy or daddy, was poopie, because everytime she pooped they called her, you poopie girl😆

So in Maansi's case I wonder who is going to win the race.

Or I'm wondering if she is going to have some problems

Jo bhi hoga, I'm loving this sweet story.😃

Edited by Susegad - 12 years ago