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Posted: 12 years ago
Emotional update 😭
Finlly Geet is back 😳
But where is Maan 😕
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wow
what an update!
geet's back to herself
but where's maan?
i just hope geet finds him soon
would love to see the dream wedding of our beloved wedding soon
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awesome update
finally geet is back...
she is imagining maan everywhere...
where is maan????
hope geet finds him soon
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Very emotional update ...
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Indeed one of the best! I always used to wonder senstive love would be more dangerous n devastating even than an obsessive love! But u did had the damn power to proove all my thoughts were so damn right! Owsome update! Just loved how the story was written! Spcly the part where Geet helucinate him everywhere it was shown as it was portyed the feelings of her when Maan was trying to do alll this but she was lost in her own termoil, like the dance! She dint responded then! But she did now! And everything else! *I dont know u inteded to show it or not but it was depected the same way* indeed one of the best work! Update! Emotions! Termoils! Everything was just in a perfect blend to be worth called one of the very best work I read till date!
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nice dear😊

it is so emotional

Continue soon

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waiting for the next part

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such a lovely os... it was so painful...

hope maan is fine n mishti finds him
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PART 6




She engulfed as much as air she could inside her as she was breathless. It was not tat she feared to die but seeing her life sitting on the edge she wanted to live.. live for him but a fear tat she would have lost him if she would have not remembered about this place. It was not far but just about 30 minutes distance from their college and if not Vicky she would have never been able to know it. The moment she realized tat Maan was indeed not there her whole life came crashing down while she broke into tears. It was hard enough for everyone to control her while she turned violent fighting to go out to Maan. Vicky who was quite early to Handa Haveli so tat he could seek an apology for his act but was stunned to see Geet in tat state. He ran to her and pulled her closer thinking tat she was still thinking tat she was going to marry him but the moment Geet saw Vicky she remembered her past.. their past in college. she instantly remembered tat once she had heard Maan and Vicky speak about something, something tat she now realized was concerned with her and she had forgotten tat but today as everything was clear his love for her every other memory was getting clear. She looked at Vicky and without her own will words came out of her mouth tat shocked everyone Vicky Maan kaha hain.. where is my Maan., Vicky.


Vicky was himself shocked when he heard tat as he was clueless about his whereabouts. He looked at Geet who was only shaking him but next words made him realize wat she meant Vicky ush jagah ka naam bolo.. tell me where he hides himself when he is lonely.. tell me Vicky.. I cant remember the place Vicky..I need to save him V icky and the realization stuck to him tat she was talking about tat hill. The hill tat Maan used as his hide out when he used to feel lonely and depressed. Bolo Vicky.. he hides there for me na.. he used to go there when he used to feel tat his love does not love him.. maine sunna tha Vicky.. college mein sunna tha yeh sab.. bolo Vicky.. where is tat place and Vicky's lips said all he knew while she ran out without waiting for anyone. Vicky ran after her and pulled her inside the car driving in jet speed as he himself was scared knowing Maan how much he loved Geet. Vicky was Maan's best friend and though Maan never said anything Vicky knew tat he loved Geet and always prayed tat he gets his love and today he was scared tat his one prank would make them loose everything. And now she stood looking at his back while he stared at the sky tat was slowly engulfing the sun in it.


She walked slowly but she knew tat he had felt her presence seeing the way he was hitting his hands on the stones tat was now covered with his blood. Her heart ached while her mouth wanted to scream for him but she could not. She was lost of words while her legs started to give up. She held herself and walked faster before she could collapse on the ground but the moment she reached him she fell on him throwing herself on his back holding him loosely by his neck wrapping her hands around him while a soft murmur left her lips Aapki..Mishty.. ne dhoondh.. liya.. Mishty jeet.. gayi..Maan. and he closed his eyes shedding his tears tat had been shedding since he was here. Mishty.. ki.. shaadi hain.. aaj..aur.. Mishty...ko shaadi karni hain... apne Maan se.



She said letting her tears wet his shirt from behind while he kept quite. He did not have the serene heart to see into her eyes as his heart tat belonged to her from ages only cursed him for playing with his sensitive Mishty and their most sensitive serene love. He could not see her breaking down as she always did for him but hearing her he died My Maan promised.. he promised saying... Tat.. Mishty ki shaadi hogi..Maan se.... Mishty ne sunna.. Maan.. ne haldi bhi lagayi.. Mishty ko.. pir.. Maan.. promise bhool gaya...he left.... His Mishty. His heart cried hearing her words realizing tat she must have dreamt of him all the day but still he did not turn but again she said with pain tat she always ached to say in her life Mishty Loves Maan... Mishty Loves her Maan.. I love Maan and she wrapped her hands hard pulling him closer to her body while he cried loud hearing wat he died for. Her confession the three words tat he had said when he had confessed his love for her but she never did and now when she did he would not be happy as it was due to fear she said.. a fear to lose him again.. but he knew she said it from her heart and soul and next second he just turned and pulled her into his lap hugging her tight crying out his heart and pain he gave her I love you Mishty.. I always loved you.. m sorry.. m sorry.. I love you.. I will die without you Mishty... Maan mar jayega apni Mishty ke bina.



He sobbed hugging her while she cried pushing herself more into him. This beautiful union was seen not only by Vicky but the Khuranna's and Handa's who had followed Vicky. Their eyes were teary while a cute smile adored their lips seeing their children finally confessing their love tat was always theirs but time and destiny always played with them. Though the confession was painful but it was god who had planned this way for them where Maan did learn a lesson tat all pranks are not good while Geet learnt tat being silent was not good. They would not have mind hugging and staying like tat but it was Vicky who broke their moment saying Agar shaadi nahi karni than say it Maan.



Maan looked up still hugging Geet when he saw everyone looking at them with happiness Kya hain na agar aaj ka muharat chala gaya than you will have to wait for another 1 year which I suppose you would not and Vicky chuckled seeing Maan's changing expressions. Maan parted a bit and unknowing filled Geet's mang with his own blood when he slowly caressed her forehead with love while Naina screamed in excitement seeing it Dekho Maa.. babaji ne tho inki shaadi kar bhi daali.. see there Maa.. Maan jiju ne Di ki Mang apne khoon se bhar di and than Maan saw tat his Mishty's mang was filled with his blood while Geet smiled hearing it. She looked up at Maan and hugged him tight feeling her with his feel and love. Maan stood up holding her in his arms and walked carrying his Mishti towards the waiting Mandap where he would finally claim his Mishty as his in front of the whole world.


He pinched the red vermillon to feel his Mishty's mang when he saw tat her mang was still adored with his dried blood. She smiled seeing him looking at her. She blinked her eyes while he filled her mang with the sacred vermillion when a bit fell on her nose. She giggled feeling the red color on her nose filling Maan's heart with her smile tat he always died for. He slowly cleaned her nose while she just kept looking at him when suddenly the panditji asked him to tie the mangalsutra. He looked at Geet holding the mangalsutra in front of her while her tears clearly showing him tat how happy she was but there was a deep pain in him. He smiled seeing her smile with tears but now Geet could read those eyes tat looked at her. He tied the mangalsutra completing half of the rituals and then stood for the pheras. He held her hand tight in his and took the first three pheras promising her all his love for lifetime and even for the next seven births. The next four pheras were lead by Geet where she promised him and herself tat she was his and he was hers and their love was their treasure. The marriage was done finally announcing them as man and wife while they took the blessing from everyone who showered all on them. The bidaai was filled with tears but tears of happiness tat their Geet got her love back and so was the grah pravesh of the newly wedded couple into KM was full with love.


Her eyes scanned the room while she moved all over feeling this room and the essence of it after years. She was here in his room.. now their room after years and instead of sitting on the bed waiting for her Maan to come she was walking and feeling their sweet moments in this room when they were kids. She did not mind the heavy weight of her lehanga nor was the itching jewelry tat turning her skin red as she was lost in those sweet memories. Her eyes reached on the side wall halting her gaze tat were filled with all hers and his photos of their childhood. Each memory they shared together was captured and hanged here for her by him. She traced her fingers on it feeling every bit of love they had. She turned and her eyes glistered with tears seeing the big bunny sitting on the chair looking at her. She walked and dropped herself on her knees touching the soft bunny and the touch took her to her past where Maan had purchased this bunny for her on her 12th birthday but she was lost tat time. Lost in the fear tat she refused to take anything from him and had thrown tat bunny out of her room but her heart ached seeing the same bunny here sitting in his room. She pulled and hugged it crying out saying sorry to it unknown tat her Maan had been watching her each move. He had been standing there and seeing her but he could not move near her. His sin was making him to die and he did not have the heart and eyes to go and love her. He cried seeing her cursing himself tat he never understood her fear when she only loved him and wanted to protect him and this was adding to his sins.



Don't love me so much Mishty.. nahi hoon main ish pyar ke layak he said breaking himself on the closed door while his legs left his body making him collapse on the floor don't love a sinner so much who took you to your death.. mat karo mujhse itna pyar jo tumhe kabhi samjh nahi paaya.. nahi samjh saka tumare ish darr ko.. nahi dekh paya tumare ish pyar ko.. don't love a sinner Mishty he said closing his eyes while his tears wetted his cheeks. Geet looked up holding the bunny tight in her. Apni jaan gava sakthi hoon... can stop this heart from beating but I cant stop myself from loving my Maan.. na kal kar paayi na aaj kar sakthi hoon nahi kabhi kar sakthi hoon.. maut bhi aayi tho yeh pyar kabhi kam nahi ho saktha.. isliye tho apni jaan dene chali thi main.. na aapko samjh paayi nahi aapke pyar ko.. darr itna tha ki apne Maan ko khone ke darr se.. itna darr gayi ki Maan ki Mishty bhool gayi ki uska Maan sirf Mishty ka tha.. hain aur humesha rahega.. bhool gayi ki Maan aur Geet chahiye kitna bhi durr rahe par hain tho sirf ek duje ke liye. Geet said wiping her tears and walked towards him still holding the bunny and without a second thought plunged herself into his lap the way she used to do when she was small and as a reflex his hands wrapped around her small waist holding her securely.




Mishty... Tho nasamjh thi na.. she never understood tat the fear she had was meaningless.. she never understood tat her Maan would never love anyone else.. pir bhi Mishty ne aisa socha.. aur dekho na.. ush darr ne kya kiya.. Mishty ko abhi bhi dard ho raha hain.. aur aap ne abhi tak ishe kiss nahi kiya.. you know na.. how you used to kiss my wounds when I used to get hurt when I was small. She cutely complained showing her hand while Maan smiled with tears kissing her wrist tat still had the white bandage. He looked in her eyes saying Why do you love me so much Mishty.. maine tho tumhe sirf dukh aur dard diya na.. then why do you love me so much Kyu ki Mishty chahiye darr ke saaye main rahe ya pyar ke saaye mein woh tho apne Maan se pyar karna band nahi kar sakthi na.. how can she forget to love her Maan. I can leave my breadth Maan but cant stop loving you.. jish din bandh kar dungi ush din jaan chod dungi she said looking straight into his eyes and he could only cry hiding his face into her neck Will you ever forgive me for wat I did.. can you make me feel free of this sin tat is eating me Mishty.. I want to love you.. hold you in my arms.. kiss you but I cant do it Mishty.. My heart and soul curses me saying tat I tried killing you.. they mock at me tat I killed my Mishty .




Who dares to say this.. Haan.. Mishty ko gussa aa gaya tho unki khair nahi.. jaanthe nahi kya its only Mishty who can punish her Maan not even god can punish my Maan she warned his heart touching it and softly kissing him over his sherwani while Maan smiled seeing his old bubbly Mishty back sitting on his lap. He now realized tat it was only his love and touch tat would get her back to him and he took years to understand tat. He looked up at babaji and thanked him to give him his Mishty back when he suddenly heard her tone tat was filled with angerHow dare you leave me and go.. aapki himmat kaisi hui tat you try to kill yourself.. haan.. agar Mishty nahi aati tho she said hitting and pulling his hair with one hand while the other hand held the bunny tight.




Darr gaya tha.. I feared tat I would never get you back.. Tum tho baat bhi nahi kar rahi thi.. and I needed to punish myself when you were not ready to punish me.. my heart only blamed saying tat I was the reason to kill you so I wanted to kill myself.. nahi jeena tha mujhe.. but I could not kill myself..nahi maar saka apne aap ko he confessed while Geet got more angry on him and she hit him hard punching his face while he just kept taking her anger. He knew tat he was wrong and now she had all the rights on him even if she wanted to kill him. Mishty m sorry he said only to get another slap from her while she looked at the bunny sayingMaan don't love Mishty na.. tats why he left me and went.. Maan knew na tat Mishty was scared than why he did his heart cried but he instantly hugged her saying Don't ever say tat I don't love you Mishty.. Maan tho sirf Mishty ka hain na.. and he can never stop loving Mishty and I promise I will never do such thing again Mishty he looked at her while she asked showing her hand for a promise Pakka promise.. Mishty wala and his heart swelled with happiness knowing tat finally his Mishty was back. He placed his hand on hers like they did when they were small Mishty wala pakka promise.



They hugged each other but soon Maan was feeling restless with her hand moving on his back while her lips gazing his skin near his neck. He tried to make some space between them but she would pull him closer making it impossible for him to stay stiff. He knew tat this was not the time for taking any step ahead in their relation when they specially she had suffered so much but his Mishty was hell bend on making him cross all his limits and next her words made him to realize wat she felt Maan.. love Mishty na she said looking into her eyes and he could still feel tat pinch of fear in her. He knew tat she still had a bit of fear in her and it was only he who would take tat away. He softly placed his lips on her forehead kissing her and stood carrying her all over to their bed tat awaited to witness their union. Geet looked at him and than at the bunny tat was in her hand questioning him yeh bunny sab dekh lega na Maan he smiled placing her on the bed taking tat bunny from her Nai dekhega.. let him sleep knowing tat my Mishty his owner is in this room with him and he kept in back on the chair tat was specially made for him while Maan walked back to his Mishty to claim her as his while she claimed him as hers making love to her with such soft touches tat all her fear and inhibitions were thrown out from her life making her feel tat her Maan would only love her for all lives while she reciprocated his love with same passion tat she held for him deep inside her heart and the moment he touched he deep inside she felt the bliss to be loved by her Maan.. only Her Maan.. Mishty's Maan.



Epilogue


Maan dekho na.. see m so fat she complained seeing Maan enter inside the Mansion. He looked at his Mishty who was holding her swollen tummy while Naina teased her with her words. His own parents and her parents saw Geet walking towards Maan complaining about her being fat. Yes, she was six months pregnant and it was strange shock for everyone to learn tat Geet was carrying their first child just after 3 months of their marriage. They never felt tat Maan and Geet would go for a family so soon but they were blessed with the biggest happiness in their life and now Naina was hell bent on teasing his Mishty. He looked at Naina who smirked knowing tat it would be tough for him to calm her down. See na Maan.. everyone is saying m getting fatter.. bolo na.. yeh sab jhoot bol rahe hain.



Maan side hugged Geet throwing his bag and car keys on the sofa while wiping the lone tear tat was trying to escape his mishty's eyes. Mishty you know na.. you are not fat than why do you listen to Naina and others. You know Naina is much much fatter..He said trying to calm her down but Naina was all ready with her words. Jiju.. aap na.. don't lie to Di ok.. see na she is so fat tat she cant wear her old clothes.. aur saari tho bhool hi jaaye.. don't you remember last week you had bought a silver saari for her to wear in tat party and she could not wear it Naina said eyeing Geet and than Maan. Dekha Maan.. see everyone says tat m fat and Naina is right na.. I cant wear saari also.. I look so ugly with it. She cried hiding her face in his neck while Naina teased Maan who only gave her a glare. It was a routine for them now as Geet was so high on her pregnancy hormones tat Naina enjoyed making Maan's life hell. Their marriage had changed everything, though they were together but her sensitiveness was still there with her and Maan had left all his pranks behind promising himself tat he would never do tat but Naina would simply make it impossible for him to stay calm.



Mishty.. see if you be a cry baby than our baby will also be a cry baby and this worked on Geet. she instantly wiped her tears giving Maan her big smile saying No our baby will never be cry baby.. but haan I will make our baby hitler so tat she can beat up this moron Naina.. haan na Maan. Maan smiled nodding his for a yes while Naina looked at them with a big smile seeing their love for each other. The rest of the members only prayed to god tat they always stay happy and smile like this.




Maan how will our baby look. You know Maa and Mom says tat if I keep your photo always near to my eyes our Baby will be just like you and see na.. maine tho sab jagah sirf aapke photo lagaye hain.. even under my pillow and she showed him his photo tat was under her pillow. Maan smiled seeing her smile while she continued with her talks bolo na Maan.. Maan slowly settled his Mishty on the bed while he pulled the sleeve of her loose nighty down revealing her skin to him. Geet felt tickled with his soft kisses while her hand reached to his hair caressing them. Our baby will just be like my Mishty.. you know na.. I want another sweet Mishty.. just like you Maan replied kissing Geet all over her shoulder biting and licking the same to soothe her. His one hand slowly reached her thigh and pulled the dress up so tat he could reach her inner core and feel her. Geet shuddered with the feel of his soft touches on her core while a moan escaped her lips calling for him. Maan looked up to see her all drowned in his love while he totally bared themselves from any clothes and made love to her ever so carefully taking care tat she was with him all the time. After a long passionate round of love he pulled her closer to him covering them with the soft cover. Mishty.. you know na.. in another few days you will be in your seven month and than your godbharai.Haan.. aaj Mom aur Maa keh rahi thi.. they have even talked to panditji about this Geet replied him while her hands reached to his heart feeling him.Than you know na..you will be going to Handa Haveli for the delivery.. I mean soon after the godbharai and with his words she jerked out of his hold sitting on the bed forgetting tat she was all bare. Maan looked at her stake naked body but more than his arousal he admired his mishty as she was just looking like a cute doll with her sweet baby bump. He smiled but soon his smile vanished seeing her in tears I will not go anywhere. I want to stay with my Maan.. so Mishty not going anywhere . Maan too sat as he was and pulled her into his lap caressing her back pagali.. it's a ritual and this is our first baby na.. so you will be at HH and who said I will not be with you... Maine tho Sabse kaha hain.. ki once Mishty's godbharai is over I will shift with her to HH.. and not only me but even Dad and Mom is going to stay with us. His words lightened her and she moved closer showering her love on Maan while Maan took her to his world of love making her forget everything else while she willing gave into him.



And here me signing off from SENSITIVE LOVE'.

Sensitive love does exist in world and I tried to portray this with my own version on Maaneet. Sensitive love can be for anyone like for your parents or your siblings and I showed it in a couple who were in love with my imagination. But yeah we need to be very careful when we come across such sensitive people.

HARIKA.. this story was for you.. as I feel great to be loved by a sweet girl like you. I may not know you personally but as much as I know you I feel honored tat you shower so much love for me tat you don't even think before fighting for your Shoba Di once.. and you know na tat I love you..

Hope you all like and comment.. An appeal tat all silent readers please do like and comment for the last time on my SENSITIVE LOVE.

Thanks to all those you have supported me with my SENSITIVE LOVE..

Edited by sdlife19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read from the beginning
loved it
how much fear Geet suppressed on her
the prank what snatched everything from them caused pain, fear
maan is trying hard to ease out the pain , ease out the fear reduce it
emotional, beautiful painful heart wrenching story
Let them rejoin

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