**FLAMES OF DESIRE** MG FF #16 IMP NOTE ON PG-146

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preethia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#681

finally they r married

waiting for their sr to know how far geet knows and how maan is gonna make her understand things

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preeti.1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#682

ye dil maange more ...

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Angel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#683

Awesome update

loved the way maan teasing geet

and annie teaching geet what to do

the bidaai was very painful for geet and her parents

and maan also felt very sad

waiting for their suhagraat

please update soon

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

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singh24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#685

Waiting...

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mahimaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#686

~TEASER~

Maan looked down at his mobile, frustrated with the intruder...He was already irritated with aniee's demands...and now the continuous incoming messages pissed him off...

"bhai aaj kanjusi nahi chalegi...I want 10 lakhs...warna andar jaane nahi dungi" annie stubbornly exclaimed, screaming into maan's ear, who looked quite stunned reading the first message that popped up on his mobile screen...which was from geet...

~what are you wearing honey~

He read and re-read again, then went back to confirm the sender...Poor guy in shock, literally looked down at himself, checking out what was he actually wearing...then again nervously checked the mobile screen, if he read it correct..."yeh toh sach mai geet ne bheja hai" poor guy gulped down his saliva, then looked up at annie's face...who was now poking on his arm..."bhai aap pehale aise toh na the...aapki shadi kya ho gayi, aap behan ko bhool gaye na" annie pouted making a fake baby sad face, then pretended as if wiping her tears...while all the girls shook their head in sympathy...

"maan sir aap yeh thik nahi kar rahe annie ke saath" pinky caressed annie's cheek, then gave maan her disapproving look...while boys argued with girls, accusing them for showing crocodile tears...

"bhai inko ek futi kaudi mat dena...nautanki hai sab" vicky pulled maan sideways, then slowly whispered in his ear..."bhai instead you give us money...hum inn chipakaliyo ko sambhal lenge...aur aapko puri raat security denge, jab tak aap suhagraat ache se na mala le" he shamelessly winked at maan, then grinned, naughtily raising his eyebrows...

Maan sighed and looked at his both devil siblings, seriously thinking of whom to murder first...then shrugging off his all evil plans, he thought to better concentrate on his bride and try to have a sensible suhagraat...

Poor guy with no option left, gritted his teeth and pulled out his cheque book and signed two cheques for both annie and vicky...and angrily handed it over to them..."now both of you take this...and don't show me your faces till next morning" he dangerously threatened and almost pushed them away...making his way into his bedroom...

"ufff...yeh bhai kitne desperate hai" annie shook her head in disapproval, then looked at vicky...who was grinning with the blank cheque in his hand...Both of them giggled, highfiving eachother...then ran off taking all the girls and boys with them...

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Let me know how is the teaser😳

Edited by mahimaneet - 12 years ago

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