**FLAMES OF DESIRE** MG FF #16 IMP NOTE ON PG-146 - Page 33

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ON UPDATE ... 😃😃

kya boloon from the beginning i was reading with pauses ..gosh these two devils are soo un predictable ...n Aniee ..really she is one true mischief filled girl .. 😆

."annie mujhe kuch samjha nahi aa raha" she pouted

no wonder she can make anyone fall for her innocence ...kahan se dhunda itni cutie sweetie geet ko ...

"tu kya dekh rahi hai" geet jerked annie from her trance

lo gi ...madam yeh woh dekh rahi hai jo aapko samajhna hai ..🤣..but ..

"mujhe sona hai" she cribbed again and tried closing the laptop

U R HOPELESS CASE ...😛😛

"ewww inhone ne toh kuch bhi nahi pehna" she screamed...

well to think about ...mere dimag mien abhi aya ..did maan ever got shirtless in thr cozy moments over here other than that HP cottage scene ..
me wondering ...
yaad aya washroom romance be4 1st kiss ...😉 😳😳 😆
poor geet almost lost her self in that scene ...😳😳

"geet dekh na, this guy is so manly" annie screamed in excitement...

aniee beta uss ko kya dekha rahi hai 😆😆 😛😛...she has seen n felt the most sexiest person ALREADY ...😳😳

chi chi babaji...mujhe yeh nahi dekhana...yeh ladka toh nangu pangu hai" she cried and closed the laptop...

u can't even think how much i laughed over this one dialogue .. gosh she is such a sweetheart ...😳

"geet woh...shadi ke baad couples aise hi sote hai" she hesistantly spoke,

arre nahi kabhi kabhi shadi ke pehle bhi 😆😆...but MAANEET case mien cloths are onn 😉😉...humara munda buhat shareef haii ...😳😳 😃😃
hai na varsha di ...😛😛

Poor girl pouted and tried jerking geet out of her sleep, but in return, felt geet's soft arms slowly cuddling her to lay besides her...So giving in, annie laid back and kissed geet on her forehead,

ehehehe ...aniee madam gi ki neend urana tou sirf MSK ki bas ki baat hai 😳😳...par kabhi kabhi woh bhi fail hujate hain 😛😛...tou fir tum tou ... NO CHANCE ..😆

He knew his relatives will be here soon for haldi ceremony...so he wanted to rush out quickly before they could catch him, sneeking out of the mansion...

rolf .. i am seeing that lover boy tint here soo visibly in MSK ..
u really said it correct in CS ...he indeed have three different personalities ...😳

"kahi geet ko neeche toh nahi le gaye" he sadly sighed, closing his eyes in frustration...Poor guy wanted to apply haldi on his bride's cheek, before anyone else would..."I should have informed geet about my plan" he rubbed his forehead in defeat

awww .. poor guy ..
DIL KE ARMAAN AANSOON MIEN BEH GAYE ...😆😆
koi baat nahi janab ... haldi nahi lagyi tou kya madam ji tou poori ki poori aapke pyaar mien rangi hain ...😳😳

annie and geet pushed open the door, and ran into the room in hurry...

loo ..aap ne yaad kiya aur hugayi hazar aapki geet ...😆
but ek devil bodyguard bhi hai ..
funny na ..THE maan khurana world fears him n here he is fearing to go in front of his own lil sis ..for he knows she will tease him till umpth level ...😆😆
sis are sis ...aur bhai ki shaddi mien nahi tease kiya tou kab karengi ...😉 😛😛

"geet, sinces we have time till your haldi ceremony starts...so can we watch those videos simran di bookmarked for us" annie sheepishly grinned in the washroom,

ufff ..i was shocked beyond words to just think about what maan will do listening to what this devil was persuading geet for ..😆😆
but u had ur own unique way ...😳

chi chi mujhe nahi dekhana woh sab" she uttered, while maan narrowed his eyebrows, thinking what this devils were talking about..

lol ..maan babu they are planning to make u dead on ur SR with geet's innocent seducing attempts ...wondering if geet will actually send those flirty sms to maan be4 SR ...🤣
MAAN TERA KYA HUGA ..(sorry can't say kaalia tou my handsome hunk 😉😉)

.He was on fire, her ravishing beauty was alluring him...Maan suddenly felt that urge to pin her right against his body...but his little insane mind warned him about annie's presence...

oyeee hoyyeee ...abhi se body set on fire ..😳😳
wedding attire mien dekhoge tou mandap par hi faint tou nahi hujaoge na maan babu ...😆😆

grow up kiddo...annie sighed, while geet snorted her angry nose..."I am not a kid samjhi" she spoke in irritation,

u know what was the first thought after reading this line was ..how drastically the whole meaning of this sentence could be changed if maan have had said this to geet after marriage ..

"unko sab aata hai" and blushed...

trust me my eyes were popped out over here ...🤣 🤣 🤣
kya kya dialogue likhte hu di ..
sach mien kisi din marwaoge ...😛😛

"kaun hai waha" she stammered in fear, as she heard heavy breaths coming from the curtains...while maan smirked and played along, making hissing sounds to intimidate her further...

lo finally mam'e got to notice ..but yeh kya khud hi musibat ko invitation ...aur darao would-be Mrs.MSK ko ...maan babu ..😆

Geet got hell scared and grabbed the flower vase and next moment hit on the curtain...screaming, "bhoot bhoot" and ran to the door, trying to open it...

mil gaya nateja badmashi ...nahi nahi shaitaani ka ...

"calm down jaan...it's me" he huskily spoke in her ear and next moment naughtily squeezed her to face him...

hmm ..thora kam chikho geet sab agaye tou bichare ki itni sab mehnat par pani fir jayega ...

"aap kab aaye" she asked him, while maan hugged her back..."umm bas abhi aaya hu" he moaned and pushed her on the door behind...

haayeee ..bechara kitni dair se intezaar kar raha tha ...😳😳😳

"maine kya kiya" she softly moaned, pouting with her swollen juicy lips...as maan went to her bed, and sat their rubbing his forehead...He was literally not hurt, but pretended to gain some lascivious sympathy from his love...

ehehe ..devil khurana ..geet ko tang kar rahe hu
shaddi ke baad apke tang hone ki bari hai ...😉😆😆

aapko sach mai lagi" she slowly caressed his head,

aww ..meri innocent angel took it seriously ...

chodo mujhe...aap bohat bure ho" geet pouted, as maan laid back on her bed, with geet on top of him...

abb geet jaisa bhi hai ...iss ko life time jhelna hai ...
iss se better Allah ne banaya nahi na ..😉😉

utho...aap bohat bhari ho" geet pushed him but he grabbed her down,
are you calling me fat" he gritted his teeth, while geet giggled
abhi batata hu" maan graoned and forced his complete weight on hers...

aweee ..me in my maaneet land .. di itni cutie sweetie si update BH aur SBL mien bhi dee doo ... mien bichari bachi thak gayi SBL mien rote rote ...

hum waise shadi ke baad soyenge na?" she suddenly moaned with her closed eyes...
kya kaha tumne" maan jerked his head up from the hollow of her neck and looked at her in amazement...
"hum kya" maan smirked, slightly getting some hint out of her words...

loo ..ussko khud poora samajh nahi aaya n here he is questioning her ... di sach mien ek hi piece hai yeh aapki geet aur maan ki jodi ...😳😳

"woh simran di and annie..."...she hesistated..."woh video, waha laptop mai..." she bit her lips and blushed..."aap khud dekh lo na"...and hided her face in his chest...
Maan was stunned, some what getting her hint...Did they watched any po*n? Is his shy angel hinting about s*x?...His eyes grew bigger, as he looked down at her blushing form...He was literally shocked, with the fact that his little sister and his would be wife are into enjoying po*n...He softly pulled himself up

tou what else u expect from that devil sis of urs ...😛😛
n in any case koi bhi larki shaddi ke ek din pehle holy verse recite nahi karegi that too with such naughty company ...😆😆

"geet woh...did you and annie saw any thing last night" he nervously asked, looking at his innocent doll..."I mean any video of a girl and boy" he fumbled with his words...while geet looked at him blinking her lashes and quickly nodded in no...

arree ..humari angel abhi bhi buhat innocent hai maan babu ..😃

"good girl" he teasingly exclaimed and pulled her even closer...and geet blushed hiding her face into his chest...

hmm .. good girl ..what should i get with this good girl thing han maan babu .. apni childish wifey ko pehle khud hi bara nahi hone dete hu aur fir baad mien khud hi aasmaan jitni unchi expection rakhoge ...

aise mat karo na" she tried praying off his teasing hands, and maan protested naughtily squeezing her more...

haayeee ..the ending effect ...😳😳
i just loved it so much ..

precap is soo much more cute ..😆
dadi maa n her ever so sweet teasing ..maan all cornered ..😆😆😆

thnxxx for this beautiful extra romantically sweet update
enjoyed the maaneet moments n aniee's scene to the bits

plsss plsss plsss plsss
update next soon ..along with FOL SBL n BH
really waiting for it ...
mera last week hai be4 exams here ...😭
fir tou will come only for few minutes mom se permi lekar
pluueeejjj ..😳😳

luv ya
sobia

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Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

hhaaayeee hottiee ...😳😳


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Posted: 12 years ago

KOI TOU ROK LO ...😆 😉😉


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Posted: 12 years ago

di geet ko yaqeen nahi huraha ..

aap sach mien uss ki shaddi karane ko maan gayi MSK se ...🤣





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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sobia4maaneet


KOI TOU ROK LO ...😆 😉😉


yeh expression ke baad ab koi nahi rok payega mujhe😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sobia4maaneet


di geet ko yaqeen nahi huraha ..

aap sach mien uss ki shaddi karane ko maan gayi MSK se ...🤣





poor soul shadi ke baad band bajane wali hai meri angel ki...u know how much demanding maan is😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mahimaneet

yeh expression ke baad ab koi nahi rok payega mujhe😉


rolf ..
kitne din hugaye na di ..
pic spamming kiye huye ...😭

i am seriously cursing my studies now ...🤢🤢


chalo me bhaging along with geet .. aapne shaddi tou karayi nahi ...😛😛


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mahimaneet

poor soul shadi ke baad band bajane wali hai meri angel ki...u know how much demanding maan is😉


yeah yeah ..demanding commanding ...woh tou sab hi kuch hai ...😆😆 😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sobia4maaneet


yeah yeah ..demanding commanding ...woh tou sab hi kuch hai ...😆😆 😳😳

umm SR mai sab samjh aayega kitna demanding hai😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mahimaneet

umm SR mai sab samjh aayega kitna demanding hai😉



or yeh SR kab hoga yaar😉 yeh to tum pe depend karta hain🤣🤣
😉update kab milegee😆😆

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