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laksu jaani yeh kya kar rehi ho???
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



tho phir iska kya khayaal hai???


☺️ shy shy feeling ,sharif bachi hun na...😉😆
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Originally posted by: LILY111144

☺️ shy shy feeling ,sharif bachi hun na...😉😆



haha jaanthi hoo kithni shareef hai... mona tu bhi jaanthi hai na?😉
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Part 34

Maan was shocked seeing her open expressions of dominance on him and upon this house for the first time. She never had shown this much unrestricted appearance before. Always a fear a scare of Dadima used to give glimpse from her every act but today it was no there. Not even a little bit of hesitation she was having, it was exhibiting clearly but "how! What happen suddenly!'' Maan was thinking with super confused mind. And when she stepped in his room without having a bit of fright of the member of this mansion, his confused mind become more mystified that he could not reply of her any of question.

"Maan!! ''

Geet looked him stood puzzled. She rocked her hand before his face "Maan!!''

"uh.. oh haa Geet .. what were you saying?''

"What happened you? And did you have your food?''

"hmm.. yea I had!!'' he replied. "Geet are you okay? I mean is everything alright with you?''

"What!!'' she gave jerked reply making a posture with keeping hands on her waist. " why you asking this haan!!

"Nothing.. nothing at all.. In fact I am so happy to see you here'' his lost sense came back and now teases were stirring to pop out.

"Matlab?''

"Matlab Geet..'' He crossed hand on chest "Welcome in our room Misty!!''

Geet did not understand first but when saw his teasing smirk her eyes popped out, heart wanted to do same but her skin was blocking it to explode in nervousness which now, she was feeling like never before. Startling she looked around, where she had come in her nonstop talk and when it been cleared she was in Maan's room.. Her hand automatically started twisted and turning door knob but it was closed.

"It's locked Geet!!''

"Why!!'' her eyes shaped in bigger together with marveling expression.

"That because..'' Maan slowly stepped to her "I don't like if someone disturb us'' he was alike husking.

"M-Maan w-why you a-are coming further..'' she walked back automatically.

He did not reply, his hand reached to loosen his tie while continuing his steps toward her.

"W-what a-are you d-doing..'' her voice skipped words when saw him unbuttoning his vest-coat.

His mouth had loped sided smile with teasing eyes which were staring her only carrying marveling yearns in it. He threw his vest-coat and tie and now hands lifted to his shirt buttons. Geet eyes went biggest round in shock. She instantly shut her eyes and turned. "No!!'' she runes to door again for one more try.

But she did not reach beacuse Maan hold on her wrist and he pulled her in jerk to him. She stopped close to him looked in shock.

The thin smooth lines of her fairy face caught Maans engrossment to the extreme level that he could not keep himself away for caressing it. His finger started to drew invisible random lines on her skin which made her pause her continuing breaths. Her every cell stopped working and body becomes paralyzed like powerless. The weight of her body felt so light that she was not feeling any stately in her. Her shut eyes she pressed tighter in reflex.

Maan enjoyed so much her state near him with having a winning smile on lips. His eyes were not ready to stop gazing her beautiful texture of skin which had not flaw of nature even. He was so full of eager to savor it fully and bend his head nearer to her. Her rose pink colored lips were captivating his attention. With a soft impact his lips touched her lips and she shivered, clutched his shirt so tight …

"Maan!!'' she moaned, lost completely in moment. Her came out word brought back his sense and he raised head to look her who had a scarlet shy all over. He smiled and moved back.

For few minutes Geet did not think anything over which happened and been lost in passed moments. Her breath was still not normal and heartbeats were trying to compose themselves. When she felt chillness opened eyes still in doze and found him already gone.

Maan!!'' she called.. Then heard shower sound from inside washroom.

"Geet.. what were you doing?'' she chided herself. "Have you completely lost!!!''

"Geet!!! don't shout on my Mishty okay!!!'' Maan shouted from inside.

"J-ji..' she replied instantly then "what are you doing jhalli'' she self talked.

"Before Maan comes out I should find keys and runs out from here!!!'' Geet started to search for keys but could not. After so much effort she finally sat on bed tired keeping her hand on chin, in leg crossed pose. "What to do now!!'' she thought

Finally getting no other work, she stood up and walked to his wardrobe, opened it and brought out some casual wear for him and kept them on bed neatly. While closing wardrobe door her eyes caught something red and shining. Curiously she bring it out and shocked, it was her bridal dress which she was searching in hotel and after the day, forgot completely. Holding it in arm her hand lovingly started caressing it with utmost sentiments.

She yanked when felt Maan presence from behind and paused her doing. "This is what you were searching that day Geet?'' he asked keeping his hand on her who was clutching dress tight.

She nodded. "It is very precious to me Maan'' after getting encouragement from his gesture she spoke further.

"You know, Maa had made this dress with her own hands. Every embroideries every stitch she had carved herself especially for my wedding. My marriage was her dream which… ''

She stopped suddenly, feeling overwhelmed.

"Which could not complete'' Maan completed her left sentence turning her to him. She was looking down seems was settling her overcoming emotions. Maan felt a pain seeing her like this. He wanted to see her in joy every time and could do anything for it. Without giving her any clue he lifted her in arms and started to go toward a little open place attached to room.

Geet shocked suddenly finding herself in his arms like this. "Maan ye aap..''

"Shh Geet'' He kept her down on foot and shut her lips with his palm. "Shh!! Don't say anything'' he whispered. With a slow move he turned her facing her back to him and kept left palm on her eyes, did it close.

"Ab chalo''

He made her walk with support of him and stopped reaching on about ten steps. Slowly he removed hand from her eyes and let her adjust, see the view and when she saw.. She was highly surprised.

"Welcome Geet in our room.. our place.. our new home'' Maan whispered in her ear and peaked her cheeks.

Geet who was surprised, was looking at the beautifully written WELCOME GEET.. MY MISTY'' on white marble floor with different colors of flowers. She could not express her found emotion and hugged him tight, giving all her held back feeling to him completely, with no suppress now.

"I Love you Maan!!!!!.. I love you..i love you so much…!!! '' she spoke countless times. He clutched her tighter. Submerge her in him leaving no space for anything.. Not even for dirt of air.

They remained same for few minutes.

"When did you make this?'' She asked

"When you were selecting my cloths'' he replied and pointed to a door which was connected to washroom. She smiled, hugged him back.

"Maan we should go down Dadimaa will be waiting for us'' Geet said.

He nodded and both came back.. Down in hall.. and Maan went to see Dadi.

At night before dinner time, Geet was in kitchen when Nakul informed some guests have come to see dadima. Geet hurriedly prepared tea and snacks and rushed to Dadi's room. As she appeared seeing Maan was also there. She kept tray on table and turned to go when heard some whispers

"Savitri she is still here?? Did not she find her husband yet?''

She was same lady which had seen Geet before and had alerted Dadi. The words fell in Maan ears too and he could not sit back. In anger he stood up fisting hands tight. Geet feared seeing his anger and looked to Dadi expecting for doing something but she was also having same fear.

Maan anger was rising on highest when Dadi held his hand to stop him doing something which would not be any good for anyone. Maan stared her hold and then Dadi and thought that she thinks same for Geet. He thought that Dadi yet doesn't like Geet and it could not be tolerable now.

Geet saw that Dadi was controlling him and so she thought to leave and turned.

"Stop Geet!!!!!''

Everyone shocked to hear Maan roared voice and Geet stopped in step, turned back looked him, having uncontrolled anticipation.

Looking Maan attitude Dadi removed her hold from his. Maan who was now free from her hold, walked to Geet which was a strange sight for all presented there. He stopped near Geet and looked to everyone then held her hand. He showed their mingled hands to all and stated

"Geet is my wife''

Everyone got the biggest shock hearing this even Geet was shocked but one, was very happy and had smile on face. Dadi was trying not to show her happiness, seeing the complete dominance of her grandson and was blessing them from heart.

"And if anyone dare to say her a word, he will see the wrath of Maan Singh Khurana'' he stared those guests who were now gulping their paused saliva in fear.

They stood up due to fear but outward showed they are very angry and left without saying a word.

Maan and Geet were alone front of Dadi who was making a blank face but was almost dancing inward. As Geet knew that Dadi had accept their relation she had all blush due to what Maan said but Maan had anticipation for her reply.

"Dadima I want to marry with Geet'' finally he spoke his heart when now could not hold back more about publishing their relation all over. He was expecting some drama from Dadi side and was ready to answer back when heard

"Hume manjoor hai''

"What!!!'' his lips instantly uttered.

Seeing his confused and surprised and shocked face Dadi could not hide more and started laughing out loud and then followed by Geet. Seeing both all laughing Maan frown become double and now he was super surprised seeing both ladies so much happy and being no strain between them.

"Maan beta I already have accepted Geet'' Dadi said seeing him all making big eyes with shocked face. "And very soon I will arrange a big wedding ceremony for you Beta''

Geet blushed hearing about their wedding and wanted to run away. She moved back and tried to leave when Maan held her hand and pulled toward him and hugged….

And now it was Dadi's turn to be shocked…


Precap : "Dev i know about what you are doing'' Madhav said


"I'm sorry uncle.. i'm so sorry please dont say anything to bro please'' Dev cried before him

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hayeee dreamy couple..
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Posted: 12 years ago
dreamyyy part...


i just loved it yaar... i just wanted it to continue on and on...

now i understood y maan was shocked😉... kiss bhi kar liya😉... i love this teasing romantic sa maan behind the angry young man...

i loved maans shocked face when he heard dadis agreeing for marriage...

he HUGGED her in front of dadi... yipeee maan jeet gaya...

but wanna more ... will be waiting for tom dhamaka part...

Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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Awesome Update

Maan declaring to the guest present in leaving Room of KM as Geet as his wife

Dadi agreed to Maan proposal of marriage with which was surprised for him
Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago

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