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sweetkj

@sweetkj

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

updated my comment on page 1.!!

i am writing this line for the first time.!! 😆

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Congrast On new thread dear...May u hv many more...🥳
Coming to da upate..That ws fab n long too...loved it very muvch!!👏
first think i don't like that ayush beiing so frndly wit geet n giving her comliment n all..i mean how dear he..that ws My Maans right😉 n sec. me confused wit Ananya😕whom she like M/A?😕
hhiiyyyee me so happy that geet also compliment Maan😳..hyee hyee he is on cloud 9😛
maan save geet frm goons..akeli ladki dekhi nahi to pad gaye peeche kamine😡
Maaneet getting little comfortable with eachother..i like that😉
hyeee algebra scene were too gud...geet staring at maan..oye hoye😳
so geet s maans mon frnd...hyeee maan to nikal padi😆
woww!! finally geet cum to Maan s home..maan in only vest n track..hyeee😳
can't wait for the next chapter..continue super soon
Thank u for PM😊

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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

haa mariam u made us fool..😆
we all thought that it will be geet.. but it was geeta..😆😆😆😆
nice update.. ayush and ananya -- heading for a heartbreak??????

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640638

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Geeta, yeh kaun hai?

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640638

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Main toh Geet ko bas dekhta reh gaya!!!!

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640638

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Phir se agar dress ko compliment kiya aur Geet ko nahi toh dekh lena Maan!!!!

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CrabbyEntity

@CrabbyEntity

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

it was just wow... i thoroughly enjoyed myself reading this...maan deliberating on how to praise geet was so sweet...and later his shocked self when geet approached him for help i can feel as if i hv been watching all this from far...the bonding maan and his mom shares z just so beautiful...and that glimpse of angry maan being all authorotative was smthng i had luvd d most in the update...in the end its not only maan who z dissappointed not finding d girl to b geet but me also...it was a complete package and a long update more then enough to b satisfied with the proceedings!!! thnk u sooo much for the update and continue soon!!!! :)