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hey guys i am back with part 42

thanks all for your support







PART 42






thank you to all those readers who read and commented...

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added music in update too...

The guys were getting ready for something that was planned by their friends ..maan was already dressed well he didn't took much time well offcourse a handsome like him doesn't need time he is naturally drop dead handsome.. well the other mr khurana was also quite excited ..they knew that it was all planned by dhruv and their college mates ..

Maan : so ready bhai to eanjoy the last day of bacherlorhood ..kal se toh you will be having your ring master to tame my brother…

Arjun came sweetly towards his brother and gave him the same gyan as he did…

Arjun: same for you chote…

The place was quite full of life it was having the intoxication and a kind of excitement..

Maan and arjun meet their friends.. this was the last day of their free life so they were bound to enjoy it… drinks and lost of masrti..

Arjun had a drink and he tossed it …

Arjun: this is for the love of my life..arohi…

Dhruv whispered to maan who was equally enjoying the whole atmosphere of arjun making everyone enjoy…

Dhruv: yar ye toh bina piye hi gaya.. we are here to celebrate tum dodo ka suli pe chadne se pehle ka din and look at mr romeo he is in his would be 's thoughts..

Maan: he wont be changed…let us enjoy..maan too tossed and in some second dhruv came in the middle…

Dhruv : hey guys..as you know that our handsome hunks are going to get married tomorrow by the love of their lives so lets celebrate their last day with all our wishes and give them some tips for a healty married life .. without any biwi issues …

Maan was looking at the guy "LOVE OF HIS LIFE'well he didn't even know if she is or will be the love of his life..not that he is having any one In his life but still they will definitely need time for their realtion and then who knows that she will the love of his life.. no matter how they are going to have their relation ut he willgive his hundred percent in that relation….

Dhruv brought maan out of his reverie…

Dhruv: so lets welcome.. miss SHARARA..she is specially for our US returned maan..

The lights were off in the already dark pub.. maan was looking at the proceedings when the soft music started piercing his ears..it was soft and melodious …

The group of girls were there..she was called just to entertain them..

The song started..

Lehraake Balkhaake Lehraake Balkhaake Balkhaake Balkhaake

Lehraake Balkhaake Lehraake Balkhaake Balkhaake Balkhaake

the main dancer was in the centre she was swaying herself with the music..dressed in a sexy and revelaing dress..but her moves were gracious she was looking at the guys with a attitude that was visible in her moves…

Aag Laga Ke Dilo Ko Jala Ke Karoon Main Ishaara
Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Main Hoon Ek Sharara
Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Main Hoon Ek Sharara

the atmosphere was suddenly too energetic their was a enthusiasm in the atmosphere..the girl looked at dhruv and he pointed at arjun and maan she smirked and gave him a n assurance from her eyes ..

Shola Hai Yeh Tan Mera Are Dehko Tum Paas Na Aana
Shama Ke Jo Pass Aaya Are Jalta Hai WohiParwana

when the guys tried to come towards her she just carefully dodged them and made her way towards arjun who was just standing and looking at the proceedings enjoying everything…while maan actually payed no attention..he was having his drink a simple wine.. he smirked when he saw arjun was being approached by her…


Oh Mere Deewano Baat Ko Samjho Door Se Dekho Mera Yeh Nazara
Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Main Hoon Ek rara Sh
arara Sharara Main Hoon Ek Sharara

Sharara
Sharara Sharara Sharara Sha

she came towards maan too and hold arjun's one hand and didn't let him go too..she dragged them to the dance floor and they just without any further ados went with her .. they were dancing with her..maan held her from her waist and twirled her and arjun held her.


Bijli Banke Girti Hoon Main Nagin Banke Dasti Hoon
Cheene Hosh Jo Sab Ke Main Hi To Aisi Masti Hoon

maan was about to leave and go when she came towards him and dance stopping him … maan looked at her and she smiled asking him to enjoy..well how can maan deny this pretty lady..he started enjoying

Rang Jalka Doon Saas Mehka Doon Pal Mein Zadka Doon Main Yeh Dil Tumhara
Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Main Hoon Ek Sharara
Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Main Hoon Ek Sharara
Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Main Hoon Ek Sharara




(ignore arohi)

The guys gang came and all were dancing and the dance was actually full of fun.. the lights were off again and the next moment they were all alone again..

Arjun: are wo kahan gayi…

Dhruv: ruk jao yar.. thoda desi tadka bhi ho jaye…now lets have a desi miss ..

Suddenly the decoration went changed and a girl was approached on the khat (charpaai) she was dressed in a legengha choli.. and the music was too funky and looking folk..

Aa a a...
Angadaiyaan leti hoon
main jab zor zor se

All the eyes popped ut seeing the desi and bold avatar ..this was too much and this can be only arranged by dhruv..he winked at his two of the friends who were looking at him ..well maan tried to keep himself away from all this he will now enjoy this rather then performing ….


uff angadaiyaan leti hoon main jab zor zor se
Ooh aah ki awaaz hai aati har aur se
Main toh chalun is kadar
Ki mach jaaye r
e gadar

she was looking really too bold and was making every heart to beat fast fast… arjun looked away thinking arohi's reaction that if she came to know about this and her reaction he was sure that he will be a dead meat..he looked at maan if he was doing any kind of recording ..since his brother can be the reason of his own death..


Hosh wale bhi madhosh aaye re nazar
Mere photo ko mere photo ko seene se yaar
Chipka le saiyan Fevicol se
Mere photo ko mere photo ko seene se yaar
Chipka le saiyan Fevicol
se

The girl came and dance with so much fun and attitude with dhruv who was equally enjoying..he glared at his two friends they were actually like a darpok ..when its for them…

Fevicol se fevicol se
Main toh kab se...
Haaye main toh kab se hoon ready taiyar
Pata le saiyan miss call se
Mere photo ko seene se yaar
Chipka le saiyan Fevicol se..

She was asked to indulge the guys who were getting married and this was her task …next she went towards arjun first since he was looking kind of petrified…

Jhoom jhoom jhoom barabar jhoom jhoom jhoom
Jhoom jhoom jhoom barabar jhoom jhoom jhoom
Jhhom le jhoom le maze me jhoom le
Jhhom le jhoom le nashe me jhoom le

The rest of the troop was dancing..dhruv came and make the scared guys aware of their postion…

Hmmm pyar karle tu aaj angur ki daughter se

He hold a bottle of the whisky.. or it would be better if he had any Indian arrack but his guys didn't arranged this…

He gulped a little and gave the rest to maan who denied telling him I am already having but doing jabardasti with arjun it worked….

Pyar karle tu aaj angur ki daughter se
Naseeyat bhool jayega tu ek gotar se
Peene wale ko bhi jeene ka maza aayega
Ye woh daru hai jo chadh jaaye sirf water se



Aaja mere raja tujhe jannat dikhaaun main
Barfeele paani me fire lagaun main

The girl came and she hold arjun's hand amking him twirl….the whisky did its work and he was all nashe me dhut dancing on the tunes….

Sare India...
Ho Saare India ko tune gulam kiya re

The guys were having a nice time..

Dhruv: one down one more to go …

Main to tanduri main to tanduri murgi hoon yaar

Gatkale saiyan alcohol se oh yeah.
Mere photo ko seene se yaar
Chipka le saiyan Fevicol se


maan was looking at the all the eyecontacts he was sure that next was him but does he need any kind of alcohol ..he was all drowned without any kind of alcohol..may be it was her nasha..well somewhere maan was also having a fear that what will she think if she came to know about this bachelor's party…

Log kehate hain mujhe main to hun namkin butter
Log kehate hain mujhe main to hun namkin butter
Kaat dungi main dil ko meri jawani hai cutter
Mera jalwa jo dekh le woh faint ho jaye
Close karke tu rakh le apne nainon ka shutter

The girl came towards maan and she hold his wine glass spreading it on the wire that she had set up..she hold his hand but he jerked just waiting for her reaction.. this was definitely getting interesting…

She now kind of challenged him and he himself came on the dance floor…

Public shehar ki kare hai tera wait re
Arey thumke jo kamariya hile zilla kya state re?

Dhruv and arjun came and supported the girl… and she smirked at maan….next maan took his scarf that was till now with his tuxedo..he took out his coat and the next moment.. he smiled and danced…

Par kahaani...
Ho par kahaani o rani purani hai teri
Phir bhi photo ko tere photo ko seene me yaar
Chipka lunga main Fevicol se

Maan took her hand and he twirled her around him catching her..he winked at her and she just danced in all masti…

My gypsy with siren taiyar
Bhaga le isey petrol se, petrol se petrol se
Mere photo ko seene se yaar
Chipka le saiyan hoye hoye...
Chipka le saiyan Fevicol se


The next all were having quite fun they were all indulged with the party..the guys were having the time of their lifetime after all bachelor's party will only occur once only…


Fevi Fevicol se Fevicol se
Nain hum ladayenge baby doll se
Ho laundiya patayenge miss call se
Bat-ball se, Cinema hall se
Are marriage-hall se, Overall se
Tere photo ko seene me yaar
Chipka lunga main Fevicol se

Mere photo ko seene se yaar
Chipka le saiyan

Chipka le saiyan Fevicol se



continued here...


part 42 rest of the part


Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
again after a long time

hope to see some of the positive response
with a long update

do tell me how is it..

just after one more part no song sequence will be there...

next is wedding

suhana

Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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PART 42(contd)






thank you to all those readers who read and commented...

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added music in update too...

where one side the guys were enjoying the girls were also no less in having the last night at their maayka this was bound be a emotional affair and the dull atmosphere which was there as geet was all crying well she was most attached to her parents and family and she was having a bit difficulty '

divya and disha were at the handa residence they were all in the living room where it was a atmosphere of all teasing and emotional due to geet she was sitting close to her mum..actually rano was sitting in the middle and her two grown up girls one was on the left and other one on right'

disha switched on the music and she took divya with her '

jhoomka gira re
haai
jhoomka gira re bareli ke bazaar mein
jhoomka gira jhoomka gira jhoomka gira
haai haai haai jhoomka gira r
e...

disha took divya 's hand and they danced as pretending they were kind of serious' they looked at arohi and cracked up dancing who was too shy..she looked away ' geet smiled and divya made her stand..she tied her dupaata on her waist and started dancing'


disha : saiyya aaye nain jhukaaye ghar mein chori chori

saiyya aaye nain jhukaaye ghar mein chori chori

divya: bole jhumka main pehna doon, aaja baanki chhori

geet: main boli na na na baba, na kar jora jori

the three danced and they took arohi too..who was now equally participating..

geet: laakh manaya, saiyya ne kalaiyya naahi chhodi
haai kalaiyya naahi chhodi

disha hold geet's hand geet pretended and danced..making all the things visible the way arjun and arohi always remain with each other


all: Phir kya huaan

geet : dramatically..HAYEE'.

geet: phir? phir jhoomka gira re ham donon ki takraar mein
jhoomka gira re.
...

geet took her place when the song changed . now it was aru's turn she smirked wickedly and took her place'

divya: Kajra mohabbat wala ankhiyo me aisa dala Kajre ne le lee meree jan, hai re mai teree kurban

Arohi and disha was doing the steps and were just portraying the hale e dil of maan and geet..it was true that there story with her eyes..since they met first time..

Duneeya hai mere pichhe, lekin mai tere pichhe Apna bana le meree jan, hai re mai tere kurban

Disha moved with her all actions depicting maan .. she looked at geet who was hiding herself she was totally flushed'

Arohi dramatically fall on disha and she gave a fly kiss to disha which made geet to glare at her'

Kajra mohabbat wala ankhiyo me aisa dala Kajre ne le lee meree jan, hai re mai teree kurban

Arohi : Aayee ho kaha se goree aankho me pyar leke
Chadhatee javanee kee pehle bahar leke

Divya: Dehli shaher ka sara mina bajar leke - (2)

Disha: Jhumka barelee wala kaano me aisa dala Jhumke ne le lee meree jan, hai re mai tere kurban

They all surrounded geet and danced who too without any apprehension matched with their steps'

Arohi: Duneeya hai mere pichhe, lekin mai tere pichhe


Pretending as maan'

Geet: Apna bana le meree jan, hai re mai tere kurban

day ended with a masti and lots of fun and fare..the next day will be the last day of their as arohi and geet handa ..they will be khurana's from tomorrow' tension nervousness and all kinds of jitters were pretty visible'


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Next: most awaited wedding

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Tried to portray each and every ting don't know how it came..

Added music in threads to listen and enjoy'






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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I AM TYPING AND ITS GETTING PRETTY LONG
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part
All boys had lot of masti...arjun n maan enjoying the last day of bachelorhood
Girls masti was ...sweet
Eagerly waiting for the wedding
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous parts bioys enjoyed their night out and made a sensual dance and the girls also had their fun in their own style
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow its really amazing and awesome
I enjd a bachelors party a lot than geet's party
but the songs u r selected are rly vey superb
waiting 4 wedding and more maaneet scenes
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum parts...loved the way u described the bachelors party, their dances, maan and arjuns mind and also their enjoying it...also the hen party in simple desi style the girls enjoyed tooo...waiting eagerly fr the marriage...continue sooon

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