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Posted: 12 years ago
oh dear jaldi jaldi exploring truth yar we want to know actully wat happn so pls update soon nice part bulbul
waiting for next part
thanks for update and pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
ok so the summary did help but i am still confused but i think all the confusion will be cleared once the mystery is unveiled
can't wait for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum style of writing the summary...sure tha doubts of thoose who were confused cleared...loving the flow of the story...continue sooon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update
need to know the truth soon
its getting more mysterious by every update
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Posted: 12 years ago
cheating kia mohi dii ne 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
what confuse me is how Priya know Geet. And how she is related to geet...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the summary
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
thnx for summary .. but how Priya know Geet
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Posted: 12 years ago



Chapter 19


summary

important to read for understanding all mystery



  1. maan and geet met only 15 days ago.
  2. priya is maan first wife elder sister and now second wife of maan
  3. priya is a widow and lost her husband and 7 month child in same accident where maan lost his first wife.
  4. maan dada jii forced him to marry priya as priya and his sister are his responsibility already he lost maan wife but now wants atleast priya will be happy
  5. dadi wants priya to feed mansi so she wants that maan marry priya.
  6. geet father munshi jii is maan father right hand now he send a letter due to his bad health and ask to take geet with him so i will die in peace.
  7. maan come on right time and save geet as her tyai and bhai want to sale her in the name of marriage
  8. maan took geet with him and gave a job and flat.
  9. both knew each other from only 15 days
  10. mansi is just one month old when her mother died now she is 9 month old

"You are only my geet... did you get that?" maan is talking like a wounded devil his voice is so dangerous and made geet heart sink in fear.. just like she was scared from her bro and tyai jii when they wants to sold her.

"Dare you go out from this room.. till I come back from office" maan ordered now without any misery.

"I am going home" geet again protest and tried to come out from his embrace but maan once again pulled her harshly and plastered her to his chest.. and his eye spiting fire.

"Don't make me do the things which I don't want" maan spoke in hoarsely voice and made geet shivered with his intensity.

Geet pushed maan with a unknown force which maybe every girl had.. whenever she felt herself respect is going to be thrashed by other.. geet tears rolling down continuously first all this questions and confusion now maan intimacy act.. Cross all limit now.. for god sake she is not a slave here to quench his thirst.. who the hell is he?.. they just met 15 days ago and this second time when he is getting physical with her.. first time she thought that he is thinking her as his wife but now to see his behavior he is doubting his every act.. now he is just a lusty business tycoon for her.. who just saved her to cherish her whole life only.

"Leave me!!! *sob* Dont touched me.. *sob* do you get that.. and *sob* what right you have on me haa that you kissed me.. just *sob* like I am your private property. . *sob* Ohh I think *sob* you are taking your pay back as *sob* you save me from to be *sob* sale.. what a billarnt idea mr.khuran *sob* what did you think she is a village girl so you can tame her very easily.. this is your motive naa.. bolo" geet hold maan collar and shook him hard where she is crying her lungs out her throat is choking her hiccup is nowhere to stop.. her eye turned like a volcano which will consume maan on the spot.. but she didnt notice one thing that maan is standing on his spot like statue like someone snatched earth under his feet.. there is no reaction from his side only his stone eye is watching geet like reading her soul.

Maan advert his gaze and compose himself not to say anything which will get everything worst.. he wants a appropriate answer even after every accusation of geet.. right now his main concern is to make geet stay here by hook or crook as priya will kill her if she will go out from km security.

"Think whatever you want.. I don't care.. did you get that.. and now listen to me carefully.. you are not going out from km boundaries and if you tried I will cage you in this room only.. so better behave without making any fuss" maan voice is so dangerous which made geet shiver and she took one step back in fear.. maan closed his eye to see her all scared like kitten.

He hold her hand and made her sit on his bed and sat in front of him.. and took his both hand in his big large palms and rubbed them little.

"geett!!!! Just believe some more days' and don't ask any questions.. I will tell you everything.. but right now I am really really helpless.. please stay here play with mansi.. chat with meera and dadi but don't try to go out.. or else that witch try to kill you" maan spoke in heavy voice he hold her eye with his eye and talk with her like one soul talking with another soul.

"mager" but maan kept his finger on her lips and stopped her to ask anything further.. his eye pleading her not to ask anything.. even geet is also lost in him.. she not even remember anything.. nor his kiss nor her protest.. maan made her lay in bed when her eye watching him motionless and searching something.

Maan left from there and inform meera to come in his room and sit with geet.

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Maan set in his office isolate from everyone.. for some peace.. when he planned everything it was looking so simple but to live it is a heart wrenching task.. where only every piece of memories piercing his lonely soul.. which already wounded by time now again.. he has to wear a mask to be strong but in reality he is broking every minute from 15 days.. life is far better than this without hopes.

7 month ago after his first wife death


2 month old mansi





I am the great MSK who didn't even able to save my wife.. mother of my child my mansi.. whenever I saw in mirror.. I heared my mansi crying in hunger.. in the anticipation that my mishty will come and engulfed her in his arm.. when I saw my eye in mirror I can able to see my mishty.. whose eye are always filled with tears like she is watching her princess her mansi crying in hunger.. for the warmth of her mother.. but I felt helpless with my mishty.. who is just caged in the mirror and watching us.. Wriggling there to touch her baby but not able to.. her eye pleaded me all time to take her out from this caged and give her.. her baby who is hungry and searching her mother only.. but her sobbed died after sometime and I glued her from my chest so she feel little piece but my mishty teary eyed hunted me.. every day.. every moment.. she left us but I felt her every single day beside me to enjoy our rabbit moments.. every time when I feed mansi with cotton ball after dipping it milk.. I can hear her sobbed from somewhere.. I can feel her rubbing her breast in anxiety.. how much she enjoyed when first time she feed mansi.. she wants to dance but I embrace her and chide her.. that she is just newly mom now.. not a free butterfly.. I teased her but her reaction amazed me.. she said she is agreed to a life time prisoner if her baby and me with her.. I kissed her tightly on her cheek.. but our princess starts crying as I disturbed her feed.. and we both laughed.. that day I never thought that my princess going to be a without mother child.. who will just searched her mother in whole room but when she was not able to she start crying and I sang lullaby just like mishty and wrapped her in one of my mishty duppta.

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Maan is all lost in past days.. which are so painful for them.. for him for his princess.. his hand is continuously playing with paper weight.. he just don't want to go home and interact with geet again and give her answer of her questions.. if he go there than he will surely create some blunder but mansi.. he sighed.. she is not able to live without him.. even in night whenever he is late.. she slept with meera but come to him whenever she woke up that's why he shift meera and yash bedroom on same floor as one day mansi crawl in whole house to search him.. when he didn't found to her she sobbed and sobbed.. that night meera slept her in her doll house tent as she is not ready to come out even eat also there.. she had her owns way to come out and nobody know how she come out and roamed in hall than slept but fortunately maan came for water and find her in half sleep.. she shirked in happiness to see maan and maan hugged her with teary eye that day maan shift them on first floor.. so she will come to him and appoint his bodyguard angad there for her.

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His thought once again went to that dreadful day

His mishty asked permission to went with her jija jii means priya's husband as they held a small pooja in their kuldevi mandir for their son but priya have to leave for a modeling project urgently.. so she request mishty to go with them.. this is only some hours but his husband will not able to keep his son on his own.. and priya husband is like a brother to mishty so she agreed happily as her dii wants a help from her.. so she come to maan for asking permission.

"No mishty you are not going' and what about mansi" maan asked with a heavy glare.

"maan please this only about 3 hours naa.. ek kaam karti hu mansi ko bhi ghuma lati hu" she patted her back mentally.

"nooo!!!!! My princess is so little and fragile.. Don't take her out in that forest area" maan spoke and closed his eye he indirectly give her permission and she jumped and kissed him on his cheek.. maan smile to saw helping and caring nature of his mishty.

mishty left with dev (priya husband) and his son and said bye to maan and mansi from car window.. no one know that day this was their last conversation last interaction with his wife.. this is last kiss which his daughter received from her.. this is last shirked of her in his maa arms.. she left but her eye showing longing for her child as this is first time she is going to leave her alone even for some hours.

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mishty pic



Maan took his mishty photo in his hands and hugged it and some tears dropped from his eye as remembered when he got that dreadful news.

A police man suddenly come into in km and demand to meet me.

"sir I am sorry!!!"

I watched him in confusion when mansi is still in my arms and playing with my shirt tie and everything which she can hold.

"Sir there is blast in the ****** number car and car fell into the river no one is safe.. we just got crushed car from river nothing else than we come to know this is your special allotted number car"

I felt like everything stopped for and turned black n white this is same car.. which took my mishty away from me for 3 hours but now for whole life.. I sat there numb when mansi slapped me on my cheek to catch my attention but how I meet my eye with her.. what will I say to her.. where is her mother.. what will happen when she cried for my mishy.. how will my mishty leave in heaven without us.. I know she will cry and cry for us than why she leave us.. mansi innocent eye taking my breath I can't even cry.. there is no tear in my eye.. only I am trying to think about if this is a dream or reality.. is really my mishty leave us.. leave her baby like that.

Precap: more past and geet past also.

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Edited by BULBUL.A - 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
😭😭 sachii rula dia aaapne dii 😭😭😭
maan ka past bht saddy h..jarur us priya ne hi accident karwaya hoga m sure about it
n yeh v ki geet hi maan ki mishty h
starting me jo maan ki thinking describe ki woh super thi diii...full of emotion
n then past was tooo painfulll
a small child lost her mother in very small age or say after her birth hiii
aww my angel is carving for a mothers love
hope geet will give her ,...mothers love

n geet is also ri8 at place koi v larki aese hi react karegi na when any man will kiss haer ...but at last baat maan gae h ghar me reh gae

no maansi 😭
but koi nahi
waiting for more past of maan
n geet ki v past
next part jaldi dena😡
Edited by geetsmile - 12 years ago

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