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Originally posted by: Blushingqueen

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Originally posted by: drrose31

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hmm... you know what this is a very interesting and unique idea ...

oh i so much in love with psychology...

am even studying that right now after my medicals ...

it was my wish to study psyche ... well hopefully i would get more and more info abt that through your ss..

the start itself was quite interesting i mean the prologue part

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part 1 was again scary...

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Part 2

She quickly moved towards the figure who is sitting in the corner… her heart is beating at rapid speed… she is totally confused who could that be in this abandon house that to in the basement… she felt something is not right but on the other side her heart kept on saying that the person might be in trouble…. With struggle between mind and heart she took the courage and moved quickly…the intensity of the cry started to increase….
She reached near that figure… That figure was a girl… she was sitting with her hair open crying in a low tone… Her skin was pale and her head was facing down geet could not clearly see her face… Slowly geet reached that girl and jerked her to get up….the cry stopped but she was still in the same position….geet again tried… she jerked her… but still she did not look at her….After jerking several times that girl slowly moved her head and looked directly into geet eyes… Geet was shocked to see her face…. It was pale white and her eyes were dark with blackness around them…. The girl slowly stood up marching towards geet… Geet moved back fearing what she will do to her… now she realized that this is not normal… that girl is a ghost…. She cursed herself for waking her up…. Geet tried to run from that place… she ran clutching her things in her hands…. When she reached the basement door was closed….She tried to open it but it was no use…. "God please save me…." She murmured to herself praying to god…. She looked around to find the girl missing… she sigh in relief but to her bad luck that girl was standing next to her looking at her with her blood shot eyes….
Geet bagged the door several times but no use… with a fraction of second that girl held geet's neck in her hand and lifted her up in the mid air….her grip on geet's neck was very hard… geet was chocking and trying her level best to get out of the grip…but no use….she was strangling her to death…..
Girl was looking at geet with her bloodshed furious eyes… geet was trying hard to get out of the grip.. but the grip was very strong….Not able to struggle anymore she gave up and felt her eyes getting closed… her rate of breathing was reducing…she felt like that's it… this is the end of her life… For last time she remembered all her precious moments of her life which is spent with her mother and her father….for the last time she prayed to god to keep her mom and dad happy….Finally she left her last breath… her lungs stopped working.. Her heartbeat stopped… Blood was oozing out of corner of her lips….but still it was not enough for that girl she threw the lifeless body of geet in the far corner...
With a sudden jerk geet woke up hearing her alarm ring….she sweating very badly….wiping the sweat beats she looked at the time it was 7 in the morning…
"Why I am getting dreams like this for past few days…?"
She thought to herself… For the past one week every night is getting dreams like this… her dream was always going to an unknown place and seeing a ghost and getting killed by it… because of this she is not able to complete her work for the project…. She wanted to concentrate more on her subject… But may be because of that concentration and interest she is getting dreams like this… she is not having any clue of it….she wiped her sweat and go off the bed to get ready for her work…
After completing her college, she works for a famous Magazine for publishing articles as she has to survive in this city… and also she thought that this is the best job for her to explore places….she got two best friends Meera and Yash from her college days and now they work together….They help her in finding the abandon places to do her research…..
Shrugging off the horrible dream she went inside the washroom to get herself cool down….After getting dressed up in her cotton salwar kameez she had her breakfast… after that she got inside the car and drove to her work place….
"What? You're getting dreams like this? Why you didn't tell us before geet?…"
Asked Meera with a shocking tone… Geet , Yash and Meera were having their lunch in the canteen and geet told them about the dreams that she is getting…
"Meera I thought this is not a serious issue but now I am feeling something bad is going to happen…. I don't know why I am getting such dreams….?"
Geet herself is confused about her situation even her friends…
"Geet I think you should meet a psychologist regarding this… this is maybe due to your stress…"
Yash suggested as he was very concern seeing geet so tensed… she was like this for past few days… he never seen her like this… she is always a sunshine… smiling and making everyone smile.. But for past few days she is much tensed and also becoming weak…
"Yes geet I think yash is right… you should meet… and one more thing geet I always said that I don't like you doing research on this paranormal stuff… I think you're involved so much in this and that's why you're getting such dreams…geet please change your decision on writing novel on such dangerous topic which is making you weak…."
Meera said with a concern she always believes such things will disturb peoples mind…and geet is very sensitive and she can get easily affected by such things…. Meera always asked her to change topic on this but geet always refused…. Now also meera heard the same answer from geet… giving up Yash and Meera asked Geet to meet the psychologist as soon as possible and yash suggested geet that he knows the most famous psychologist who is his brother…. None other than Maan Singh Khurana….
Geet asked time that she will think about the decision of going to the doctor… the trio left the place and went back to their work….

Precap: Something dangerous in store for geet... what is it?

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Edited by bubblygal1711 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous Part
geet getting weird dreams
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Posted: 12 years ago
welcome back dear
amazing update
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