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Sia

@lovesia

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#261

it was going so smooth sweet lovey dovey romantic

but at the end u gave the dhamaka vicky killed nikki

no it's impossible

but now about update

haye maan is fulfilling geet every wish

whatever may it maybe

but her wish is his command

love their romantic moments

their time with each other

nd geet pouting that maan didn't fulfill her wish

haayee i just love them

update soon

want to know raaz behind nikki's murder

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#262

amezing update ..maan loves geet so much he fullfill geet 's all dream whatever she want ...loved geet innocence and maan teasing ...TWISt is shocking i never expected this ..but i m happy that nikki is out finally from maaneet lives ...but eager to know y vicky did this ..

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#263

What????? Maar diya as in maar diya she is dead?????? But why... But anyways i m glad she died...

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Sindhu

@sree10

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#264

GReat update, and what a twist. When will u update next?

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#265

thanx for a lovely update... even in dreams i have not visualised a scene of maan waiting in disney world to meet princess!!! so cudos to ur imagination!!!!

maan here is such a dreamy man who fulfills all wishes of his wife, how ever weird, childish it may be!!! standing in that line where all r waiting for their kids sake, how weird he may have felt to stand there with just his wife... but still he didnt had any problem... he is such a cutiepie...

maan and his rasmalai moments were tooo romantic...but the best was ofcourse maan watching his rasmalai in hot shower!!!

did u write this part feeling hungry??? i asked because u have given the details to how to make french toast too... but u didnt tempt me!! am pure veggy, so no eggs too😉...

meri TWISY RANI in action... and what a twist yaar!!! but am happy that nikki is no more ... evil me but u only made me like this... but ab vicky ka kya hoga???

yipeee... thanx a ton for noticing me and liking my comments... it really means a lot...am happy that i made u smile... this is the least i can do for the hardwork and time u put in for us... tanya tum tho antaryaami ban gayi... when i read an ff of my choice, i was going for apna... anyways let me team up with sonu... we need to let out different wishes na... nahi tho ek wish bekaar ho jaayegi... yes am evil... waise its been long since i read EB...

Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago

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alekhika

@alekhika20

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#266

Wow,nyc update but shocking precap.

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#267

nice update

it was full of maaneet

but did really vicky kill nikki

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#268

wow lovely cute innocent update.. te way my maan taking his geet to disney land oh god only my maan ki geet can make like tis.. 2mor headlines MSK TAKING HIS WIFE TO DISNEY LAND FOR HM.. te way geet is happy and tew ya my maan is happy seeing his geet was so lovely.. te way maaneet ki passion and te way geet is cribbing and te way my maan controlling himself for not want to take her childish nature was so lovely cute.. te way my maaneet cuddling and feeling each other and living for themselves was so lovely cute scenes.. oh god vicky killed nikki..i love te update

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Kitsin

@Kitsin

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#269

Hi, A great story, just caught up with this one. what a twist in the last chapter, am wondering how it happened. Poor Vicky... Loved the cutesy moments of Maan and Geet 😊 So sweet. Hmm... now whats gonna happen next...?

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#270

wow!!! MSK waiting in queue for seeing some unknown princess, for his own princess!!
And my sweet maan already booked the table... i m telling u di... aap mere liye bhi aisa ladkha doondo.. k? mein aapko treat doongi.. sachi..
Rasmalai!! haye i m loving ds name..
"And you're sweet and I always have you for desert" sirf dessert? maan ka whole khaana package toh hain geet!!😆
if geet is rasmalai, then maan is ? maan ko bhi ek naam de do na.. ek sweet and chatpati si.. kurkure?😆
Day by day their love is getting intense.. and also their unbreakable bond...
oops!! woh kya twist thi!! vicky killed nikki? kyun?? kya?? what?? when????

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