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sonu4ever

@sonu4ever

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#601

Brilliant part.
Beautifully written.
Poor geet. Unaware of what will happen to her on this so called SR of hers.
Maan was thinking how to make the night special but it ended up being the most horrible night for him.
Maan stole geet's first kiss.
Both are shaken now. Cant wait for more.

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seemamary

@seemamary

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Posted: 12 years ago

#602

I hope geet will be able to cope up with this new life.

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neha512

@neha512

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#603

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
will comment later... lil busy...btw awesome part...

will edit later

edited:

me firstt... yahooo...

aaj kya baat hai update jaldi kar di? i thought i had to wait till past midnite ... but thanx for updating soon ...

this will be the first ff where every one will be thinking "kahi kuch na ho inke beech" on their suhaagraat...

again superb portray of emotions... a 16 yr old gal on a suhaagraat who barely knows any thing about intimacy... where as an excited groom having a lot of dreams for that day... their collission was best shown...

i loved maans disappointment on seeing geet asleep... and the hurt and anger he felt on her rejection was truly justified... her outburst made me feel more sad for her... how is she going to bear the future like this... really waana truth to come out soon and maan to support her...

am so eager now to know how u have planned to reveal the truth before maan and his family...

ummm quota shota rakh diya... is it an indirect warning for me not ask for an update before that???

lakshmi ji aap mere mana karne se maan jaengi kya...

nhi na so why to think like that...

waise i am just trying to know the number of my actual readers you see😆

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#604

awesome update
poor maan
his all feelings are crushed
continue soon

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mehak173

@mehak173

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Posted: 12 years ago

#605

loved the update ...hope they understands each other soon

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Makpie

@Makpie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#606

bechara Maan cheat ho rahihai, bt hope ki wo Geet ko samajh paye, I want ki jaldi sabko pata chale ki Geet s so young.

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#607

POOR MAAN AND GEET

FOR GEET SR IS JUST A WORD SHE HAS HEARD AND DOESNT KNOW WHAT IT MEANS

NO ONE HAS EVER TOUCHED HER AND FOR A STRANGER TO COME AND KISS HER WAS UNBEARABLE

SHALINI SHOULD HAVE PREPARED HER A LITTLE FOR IT

AND MAAN - HIS DISAPPOINTMENT WAS VISIBLE

HE HAD SO MANY DREAMS ABOUT IT

AND FIRST TO FIND HER ASLEEP - THAT CAN STILL BE EXPLAINED

BUT HER REACTION TO HIS TOUCH SHATTERED HIM

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pingu-tingu

@pingu-tingu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#608

Superb update :) loved it poor maaneet hope maan become little understanding which is quite impossible i think you will take time to disclose age truth.