DIVINE LOVE MG SS Epilouge Page 161 27/6/2013 - Page 32

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update Richu..
Hhaayyeee...Maan cares for Geet ssoo much...
Loved the way Geet lives her life without much help of anyone..
Her confedence is really praiseworthy..
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Posted: 12 years ago
I like this story
this story have something magical
love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww superb awesomeee update <3, caring maan n courageous geet loved it <3 .. waiting for the next <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART - 6

Geet was in turmoil. Many thoughts bang her head badly. Her body is trembling dreadfuly and heart throbbed pacefuly. Maan came inside and took her with him. In whole route she dosent even utter a single word. She needs to find out many things about this stranger coming in their life like a strong stroam. Maan break the car and she was about to hit the dash board but Maan's hand proved protective shield for her.

'are you ok?'i m sorry if.my fault mujhe thoda aram se drive krna chahiye tha',His voice is very soft and gentle. Everytime he talk to her,his concerned showed clearly. But she is disturbed so only nodded.

Maan came out and opnd her side door. He held her hand gently and help to come out of the car. As he was about to enter in the home,door opnd from inside. He saw an old lady around in her 60s coming worridly. As soon she saw Geet she hugged her instantly and kissed on her whole face. She getting more worried when she noticed bandage on her head.

'kaha cali gai thi meri bachhi.aaj subah aai to ghar khula pada tha or tu...or beta ye chot kaise lag gai?',her tremblig voice and teary eyes tells him,that she is none other than her Daima.

'aap hi Daima hogi?',he asked curiously.

'ha main Geet ki daima hu?par beta aap kon?maine apko pehchana nahi.or Geet ko chot kaise lagi?',she confirmed his doubts,but dont also wants to know aboy his identity. Her heart is still thumping due to motherly affection she had for Geet.

'Daima i m fine dont worry.ye bas 1 mamuli si chot hai kal mera balance bigad gaya or main seediyo se gir gai thi.wo to achha hua ye time pe aa gaye to mujhe hospital le gaye. Daima ye Viraj k dost hai.',Geet explain her evrything to calm down her uneven breath.

'naam mat le us namurad ka',Daima's tone shower anger after hearing Viraj's name. Maan confirmed that Viraj is good for nothing. He is only a self centred person. The one who dosent even care for his own sister then how he can respect other's emotions.

Maan's fist tighten and blood boiled in anger everytime he hear his name.

'Daima pls aap gussa mat hoiye. Wo chala gaya to isme uski kya galti hai.or kitne dinn uthata mera bojh',Geet dont even want to curse her useless brother. She never ever trying to thing anybody's harm.

Geet's word needled him badly. His fists loosen at sudden.

'tu chahe kuchh b bol par main use kabi maaf nai karungi.khair jane de chal ander or aram kar le. Beta aap b andr aao.',Daima was hell angry on Viraj,but she wont forgot her duties. He even invite Maan to come in.

'nai Daima main to bas Geet ko drop karne aaya tha.ab chalta hu.',Maan leave heavy heartdly. His all plan backfires. Now he has to search him again at any cost.

Maan reached to home and stand in front of Shreya's pic hanging on wall with garland on it. Maan caress his fingers on pic.'i m sorry gudiya main abi tak tera badla nai le paya. Tera mujrim abi tak azad ghum raha hai. Socha tha i pay him back by doing the same with his sister then he can only understood the meaning of pain. But gudiya Geet is very innocent like you,having no fault at all. I cant do anything wrong with her. Thank god i stopped myself on that night or else i cant able to face u anymore.but you dont worry,i promise you sinner will pay for what he done with you.',Maan talking to his sis's pic. His eyes turn red with remorse of not doing justice with her. Her culprit is yet so far away from his reach. He is only thinking how he get him.

While Geet was analysing about him only. Next day Maan went to meet Geet. Daima welcomd him warmly. She shored her motherly love on him too. Geet came down,hearing his voice.

'aap yaha itni subah?',she wants to know the reson behind his moves.

'ha wo kal apki reports mere hi pas reh gai thi wo hi dene aaya tha.i m sorry apko subah 2 disturb kar dia.',Maan covered himself.

'koi bat nai beta achha kiya jo aa gaye.kal to tume theek se shukriya b nahi keh pai.tum dono baith k bate karo main nashta leke ati hu.',Daima felt happiness to see him again. She left both alone.

'how r u feeling now?',Maan gazing her and analysing her condition.

'i m fine.',she ans quickly and turn silent.

Maan thinking how he can ask abot Viraj from her,coz he coming here for some clue may she know where he is now? Insipte of all this stuff one more thing which he wants to know is why she is liying yesterday to her daima about her accident.

'Geet main Viraj se milna chahta tha.have u any idea where he is?',he cant found any idea so asked directly. But before she ans him Daima came with breakfast and ans his que.

'gaya hoga apni us chudail k pas.',Daima ans angrily and him confused.

'Daima aap kiski bt kar rai hai?',he cant get her point.

'wahi Natasha or kon?jab se uski zindagi me aai hai sab kuch bhul gaya hai. Uske baap ne kaha ki ya to Geet ya Natasha.or wo aisa nalayak us ladki k liye sare riste bhul k chala gaya.',she gritted while tolding about him.

CONTINUE IN NEXT COMMENT
Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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CONTINUE...

Maan was in shock. He never imagined that viraj is stooping so low. He not only cheated his sister bt also playing with many lifes.

'Daima ye Natasha kon hai?',He carry on his investigation.

'Mr.Singhania bade rich man hai usi ki beti hai,jisse shadi karne k liye usne hum sabko chhod ddia hai.',Daima eyes emmitting fire remembring all the things. Maan now stop his trail as he knows much he asked about him,much they hurt.

Maan change the topic and start talking casualy. Both do breakfast and then he left. He again hired dectative in his search. In meantime, he daily visits to Geet house to meet her. Both talk for sevral hours. Daima also love his coming bcoz she senced in his company Geet feels good. Slowly slowly Maan start smiling. A smile which almost he lost after Shreya's death but now he again drowning in the sea of new developed emotions inside his heart. His courage to live life is coming back. Bot talk,laugh and share their feeling with each other. He told her about Shreya also.

'Geet you know somthing Shreya also love roses like you.',while talling he told her about Shreya. Hearing a girl name from his mouth,suddnly Geet's face turn pale. As some1 needled her badly.

'Shreya kon?',her voice is broken and lips droddle.

'meri chhoti behan',seeing her face Maan quickly clerified it.

'to aap usko kyu nai leke aate kabi apne sath?',Geet now wants to meet her,being unaware of the truth. Her worde unknowingly needled him most.

'1 dinn jaruru milwaunga',he said in a low voice.

Geet get up and went to kitchen to made coffee for her as today Daima not availble at home.

'Geet what r u doing?',he asked seeing her struggling in kitchen.

'apke liye coffee bana rai hu.Daima ko pata nai kitna waqt lagega.',she said softly.

'no need to do it ok. Main waise b ja hi raha hu,sirf tumhari tabiyat puchne aaya tha.',he scared for her. What if she hurt herself?

'aap tension mat lo main kar skti hu.',she said confidently. She searched the necessary things with the help of her hands. She opnd the drawer and count the bottles. Then she pick some bottles out. Maan was so amused seeing her picking the right bottles. Then she searched the pan and in few mins,she actualy made coffee for him,and that without taking any1's help. Maan just cant believe on his eyes.

'Maan is it ok?',she enquired as he was mute completly.

'its just perfect like Shreya made for me.',he speak without thinking.

'ab to mujhe or b mann hai Shreya hai se milne ka.ap pls next time usko b sath leke aana.',she req with a sweet smile on her lips.

'Geet tum bina dekhe apne kafi kr leti ho kaise?',Maan's every fibre praised her courage and self dependent attitude.

'u forgot this my house and i m useto of everything daima never changes the order of the bottles and other things. I keep their order no in my mind and do it comfortably.',her words are siple but her courage inspired Maan too. He forced to think about life again. When a blind girl live her life with such an courage then how he can give up being an soldier. He also motivated and change his gloomy attitute towrds life. Now he again start liking the things around him. The sun light, bright shiny day,fregnances of flowers again pleasured him like before the death of Shreya.

After sipping his coffee he is all set to leave. Geet also came outside to see off him. They were indulge in talking while exchanging smile.

'Geet now i m leaving so locked the doors carefully.',he instructs her and reached to main door after crossing the small path between the entrance and main gate. Geet nvr leave the entrance door until his foot tapping is hear to her. 2 women of neighbourhood start gossping about Maaneet. They accuse him,that he take advantage of bieng her blind and absence of Viraj. Their taunting talk hurts Geet's soft heart. Maan too listen their nonsence and glared both furiously. They shut their mouth and turn to other side. Meanwhile Daima also come. Maan touched her feet and se blessed him. She offered him to come inside but he annyed and leave from there. Whole night Geet was thinking about those women's accuqusations and cant able to slept for a moment. She cried silently. Her heart wrenched.

Sun dawn with full shine. Its a new day. Maan's foot automatically moved to her house. No he dont even think so much before going to meet her. He doesnt care any1's only do what his heart demands and now a days his heart only wants to stay in her company. He just enterd in the house when she threw bomb on him.

'Maan pls apse 1 req hai aap roz 2 yaha mat aa ya keejiye. B main bilkul theek hu or Daima hai mera khyal rakhne k liye.apko chinta karne ki koi zarurat nai hai',she said coldly. But she forgot that she is is blind not Maan,who is very much able to read the pain in her eyes which are the window ofher soul.


PRECAP:-
GEET:MAAN I KNOW YOU ARE THE ONE WHO ATTACKS ME ON THAT NIGHT.
Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update

Maan now hate Viraj after knowing abt his deed towards

Maan get motivated by Geet seeing how she is doing her work perfectly without even seeing it

Maan does not care if anyone say anything but Geet is now hurt, hope Maan will be able to make her understand

Precap- hmm Geet is aware of her attacker still she is quiet, continue soon, waiting for Maan reaction to it
Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update

maan knowing about viraj

maan you are falling in love thats why your leg carry you to geets house automatically

precap is really interesting

continue soon😛😛😛😛😛😛😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: preeti555

awesome update

maan knowing about viraj

maan you are falling in love thats why your leg carry you to geets house automatically

precap is really interesting

continue soon😛
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Sure dear 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
geet got hurt by neighbour words and said all this to maan
precap shows ki geet know who was it
i knew ki she would have sensed his touch

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