Waiting For You#3 (Thread 4 Link @ Pg 142) - Page 75

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

aree kabka de diya.. pg 134 dekho 😆

dekha... patha... like kiya... aur comment bhi kiya...😛

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

aur meine

first time first comment res. kar diya😉😆😆

lucky u... but i made a sandwich with ur comment and ur awesome poem...

lovly updt.maan s hlping geet.hope dadi may like hr surprise nd accept geet nd mneet dev brij ki dhulai kare...hapy velentines dy mona...😊

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

lucky u... but i made a sandwich with ur comment and ur awesome poem...

i lov dis sandwich😉😆

awesome update
love maaneet bonding n love
love it

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

seems like above i res for first comment

so here is my few lines

try to be few

mere is dil ko mujhe se

bin pucche churaaya aapne

pahli nazar mein hi

bin kuch bole

mujhe apna banaaya aapne

ab to har pal

aapke deedar ko tarasta hai yeh dil

aap dil se ruh tak meri hogi

uss ek pal ke liye,tadapta hai yeh dil

kya karu mein iss pagal dil ka

jo hai to mere seene mein

par har pal aakpo yaad karke dhadkta hai

yeh dil

still more...

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

how was ur day??

me did a lot of shoping..nd urs???

Originally posted by: LILY111144

osm ...

Originally posted by: LILY111144

me did a lot of shoping..nd urs???

shopping... umm... kya kya shopping ki???

mine... boring than the usual days...😭

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

Awww so sweet of u Nishu.. beautiful lines...

these from my side ... aarz kiya hai Ahem '

Iis dil ki tamannaye toh bahut thi

ki sabse chupaa ke rakhu mai isse

iis saare zamaane ki nazaroon se bachha kar rakhu mai isse

fir bhi aapke ek isshaare pe

sine se nikaalne ko ji chahta hai iss dil ko

bas ek nazar hi kaafi hai aapki

iis dil ke dharkne pe bandishe bhi laga du mai

ki kahi kisi aur ke kaanon me iiski awaz tak na jaane paaye

har ek aahat pe isski bas aap ka naam likhana chahta hu mai

kyuki har pal aakpo yaad karke dhadkta hai ye dil 😳😳