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Part 21
"What are you doing here.. Chup chup ke ghar ki baante sun rahi ho!!!!'' Dadi and Maan both heard Dev was shouting on someone. Both rushed out thinking on whom, Dev is yelling like this and went numb seeing Geet stood on door, bowing her head down before him..
"Dev!!! Whar are you doing here??'' Maan spoke compressing his raising temper.
"I'm nothing Bro but I guess someone was sure trying to do something!'' Dev tone had hidden taunt which Dadi could not understand. She looked Geet stood timidly and asked...
"Aap yaha kya kar rahi hai Beta.. kuch chahiye ..do you need something?''
"No Dadima wo.. mai.. !!''
"Yes Geet tell us why were you here?? I guess you wanted to hear what bro and Dadi were talking right!''
"Nahi..'' Geet tried to clear..
"Really!! Then why don't you tell us why you were here when it's time for sleeping for all.. Don't tell me you wanted to talk Dadima but I saw you standing over here from long!!!''
"DEV!!! Don't cross your limit!!! '' Maan roared. Geet and Dadi look rose up to him hearing his loud tone. Especially Dadi who never had heard him shouts on his own brother.
"What I did bro? Don't you think that an outsider should not interfere in family??"
Maan temper was increasing highest with the every word of Dev where Geet started to worry for Dadi. She watched her who was hell shocked with all this happening in front of her old eyes and it started to effect on her heart.
"She is not outsider!!!'' Maan wanted to shout scream that what relation they share.. "Hear you!!! She is not outsider!!!! ''
Dadi shock reached to its extreme. Maan was exclaiming about a stranger girl shouting on his own brother was beyond her imagination. Her weak heart started to pace faster, dangerously. Geet watched her change of expression which was becoming pale to paler with every passing second. She tried to catch Maan attention but he was mad. His eyes were burning. He wanted to scream and yell on all wanted to claim that Geet is his wife ..
"If she is not stranger bro then WHO IS SHE!!!!!'' Dev yelled from top of his lungs which broke entire composure of Maan..
"YOU WANT TO KNOW WHO IS SHE!!! '' '
"Nahi Maan chup ho jaaiye'' Geet got alarmed.. Thought it would not be good to bring out this truth like this.. Dadimaa sah nahi payengi.. She was hell fearful..
"Yes bro tell us.. Who is this girl!!! ''
Maan eyes turned to Geet. She was quiet mute aloof.. but her mind was screaming yelling no Maan don't'' she tried to made him look to Dadi who was becoming weaker paler yet was waiting for his reply "Who is this girl?''her failing mind wanted to know. But it was really mere chance that she could be able to bear this truth acceptably, without any harm. Geet unsaid words were not reaching Maan. He was looking her sallow face which had agony.. Torment.. Anguish. "Geet bas ab bahut ho gaya. I can't see you suffering, I will tell everyone what are you for me.. who are we' what relation we keep. And he stated..
"Geet is my wife'.''
"Maan!!!!! '' Geet screamed holding an unconscious body of Dadi . "Dadima.. Dadi..'' she patted her cheek to bring her back in conscious. Maan runs to her shocked' "Dadi!!!!'' he carried her in his arms .. run.. kept inside car.. "Driver jaldi hospital!!!'' he yelled keeping Dadi body in his lap .. Patting her face again n again "Dadi open eyes please!!'' he was dying.. Verge of heart explode.. "Fastt!!!!!'' 'his mind was numb.. body was numb.. moment became numb. Seeing his most valuable person like this unconscious his heart cried.
He reached hospital. "Doctor!!!!'' he shouted.. yelled. Dadi got admitted and Maan had to wait outside. He was mad.. he was insane.. he was cursing himself to lose his temper in front of her when he knew very well Dadi would not be able to tolerate all those. It was only few days back she had got attack and now again.. his heart sank.. could not sit at one place .. Started walking restlessly.. Pushed his hair back in distress. "Agar Dadi ko kuch ho gaya.. mai khud ko kabhi maaf nahi kar paaunga..'' he cried out'
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Geet was pacing restless in Mansion was hell worried for Dadi. She could not believe what had happened. It all was terrifying. She cursed herself why went to hear what Maan was saying to Dadi about their marriage. She wanted to know what Dadi will reply would accept her or not. She had no patience to stay n wait and circumstance changed everything within just minutes!! "Babaji Mehar karna" her hand jointed in beg and she pleaded to her Babaji to keep Dadi safe.. she could not forgive herself if anything bad happens to her. 'pata nahi kasi hongi wo.. aur Maan!!'' imagining his state she shivered. "Kaise baat karu unse kase unke pass jaau.. '' she rushed outside .. "Perhaps driver should know'' she rushed to driver and was to ask when..
"Where are you going!!!''
She turned back n see Dev was standing behind her.. filling an strange expression in eyes was looking her gravely..
Precap : "I'm sorry Bro.. please I'm sorry '' Dev cried before Maan
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