For Dr. Khurana, with love, MG SS, pg 177,178

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

oops pura nhi parha par Doc Khurana ki Black Striped shirt ne kaha k Avi ko batao He's looking irresistable 😆 ☺️

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Updated my comment on page 1. 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

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^ I know I shouldnt be dhakal andaazi deiying magar Nisha's request has majboorified me... avi tu aur koi gaane me likh kyun ki maine uss gaane ke pure haqdaar hoon.. aur mere maaneet bhi homes sweet home mein 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Maaneet099
^ I know I shouldnt be dhakal andaazi deiying magar Nisha's request has majboorified me... avi tu aur koi gaane me likh kyun ki maine uss gaane ke pure haqdaar hoon.. aur mere maaneet bhi 😳

Humare, Madhu...

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: mayyo13
Updated my comment on page 1. 😳

Main padhne se darr rahi hoon...

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: had2bu

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Main padhne se darr rahi hoon...
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Aur main padhaane se! 😆

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Originally posted by: mayyo13

Aur main padhaane se! 😆

Hide with me. Mera sar blanket mein hai... After the second part I am going to get banned...

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: had2bu

</div><div>Hide with me. Mera sar blanket mein hai... After the second part I am going to get banned...
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I'm already hiding! Mera bhi sar blanket mein hi hai! 😆

To prove you right or wrong about banning, next part post karna padega! 😃

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Originally posted by: mayyo13
If I find commenting on something hard, it has to be on romantic blushy blushy stuff! No wonder I enjoyed reading this but talking about it is way too hard for me. I can imagine it would've been harder for you to write and share this one! 😳

One thing which I really wish to mention her Avi, is how you've given an OS earlier which made the readers emotional and this OS has the readers all dreamy and flustered; both of which are opposites to each other and it takes sheer talent and ability to take the readers on the ride with your words. You gave that talent, that ability. So if I now say that you've made it to one of my most favourite writers, it won't be exaggeration! 😊

Over here, it was fun reading the way Dr. Khurana is so naughty and has that oomph in him to make his wife melt into puddle even if she's angry. I loved the code word talks Maan did in front of his MIL and the aankhon ki baatein he did with his wife. The blend of innocence and feistiness in Geet matches Maan's bold and naughty self; a combination I can never resist loving! 😳

Looking forward to the badla! 😃
And by the way, no need to thank. Doston ke liye toh kuch bhi karna banta hai! 🤗

Teri comments padh ke mera dil khush ho jaata hai, whether it is here or anyone else's story.🤗

I am teetering on the balance of an emotional issue with the reality of love and passion in a young couple's life. Somehow fingers are crossed that it will not come out as too fluffy or juvenile.

The next chapter is long but hope the story keeps you loving these two as much as I do.

Thanks Mariam for reading it and for being there.

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