MG OS : EK PAL part 1,2 pg 1,10 march 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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~~EK PAL~~


zindagi me kabhi ek pal kuch aise rishte jod deta hai jinhe chahkar bhi nahi toda ja sakta

wo sirf ek pal tha jisne do ajnabee insaano ko ek atooth rishte me jodh diya


IT WAS JUST A GET TOGETHER THAT ACTUALLY MADE THEM WITH THE DIVINE RELATION OF A HUSBAND AND WIFE



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i know again a new OS...
but this one is a new thing i wanted to write

updating most probably today

suhaana


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Posted: 12 years ago
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do wirte it would love to read more of it
hey as long as its maneet i dont mind at all
see ya soon then
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Posted: 12 years ago
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~~EK PAL~~


zindagi me kabhi ek pal kuch aise rishte jod deta hai jinhe chahkar bhi nahi toda ja sakta

wo sirf ek pal tha jisne do ajnabee insaano ko ek atooth rishte me jodh diya


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PART 1


The hall was well decorated .. sounds and noises of some prestigious occasion going on… there were guests all around… the bright red and white roses were decorated all over white satin curtains all over , shimmering light … everything was in its place …. Nothing was wrong….

She entered the hall… there were many guests some of them she was well acquainted with… some were looking at telling her that what are you doing… but

she didn't even care…it was like she was well aware of her sole purpose of coming here…. And she won't go without completing it….

The bride and groom were sitting on the mandap… the priest was enchanting the mantras.. she was looking ravishing in her cherry red saree .. her sikly hair cascading till her waist….

The crowd started whispering…. Making the priest and the respective bride and groom to stop on their places…. He was amazed shocked anger towered over him.. what is she doing here .. isn't it all over … or is she here to make his life a mess again….

She was smirking.. her smile was having a charm that could make anyone loose its sanity.. the devilious smile was just for him… telling him.. " HOW DARE YOU PLAY WITH ME…"

The family members.. technically her FATHER IN LAW AND MOTHER IN LAW saw her with no emotions… she knew that today it is the time just to seek the reven ge from this man rather than searching for a known warmth or affection….

For once she close her eyes … and observed an unknown pricking sensation with someone's touch… she didn't .. she won't let anyone touch her anyone… what if today they are having their ways parted .. she glared at the person.. and a loud sound echoed in the whole celebration…

" SLAP…."

It was loud enough to make him hear knowing he is having all his right eyes and senses towards her rather than his newly wed wife…. She turned towards the person and caressed his cheek where she gave a warm and loud award just for touching her and aplogise….

Geet : you see tushar BHAIYAA… I won't let anyone touch me except those who I want …. So it will be better to keep your dearest possession with yourself unless and until you want it to be fed to the hungry dogs that I have specially kept for this purpose in my farm….

A smirk adorned his lips.. he always knew that she was hard to manage and could make anyone to let himself pray to be buried inside the deep earth… but today he didn't thought that she will actually entertain him and his guests like this…

The anger that you can see in her eyes was for him.. that was unleashed on the spineless creature that TUSHAR…

The guest smirk seeing her.. it was like they have forgotten the main purpose of coming here…they ought to attend a wedding , the grand celebration of MAAN SINGH KHURANA , most eligible bachelor… but here they were thoroughly enjoying this DRAMA….

Before maan could come.. his younger brother jay came… he still knew the insights of his bhabhi… it doesn't matter to him that today their relation was ended and here she is attending her Ex HUSBAND second wedding.. but she is still a cute and innocent girl whom his brother married when both of them were in school…

Jay came towards geet in order to stop her from creating further fuss but a look from her eyes made him to stop in his track… .. he didn't even took a further step forward …. And gave her an assurance to continue what she wanted too….

Geet : panditji… there is no need to stop the pheras you see I am one of the guest of Mr khurana .. so please start " KAHIN SHUBH MUHURAT NIKAL NA JAAYE…".. are panditji please start kariye…chahiye main hi karti hun…

She started.." MANGALAM BHAGWAN VISHNU MANGALAM GRAUTNATUAJA….

All were amazed .. the girl was no less who was marrying MSK… she tried to stop geet when geet hold her wrist very tightly .. and piercing her long point sharp nails side by side…. The girl was withering in pain but to her bad luck she couldn't voice out ….. and the people over there were thinking that geet herself was making her sit side to her own husband..

Geet : MISS TANVI KAPOOR you think I am just a innocent and bechari geet.. then you are utterly wrong … start counting your good days sweetheart I can bet they wont last long now come My .. oops I am sorry your would be husband is waiting for you….

The girl was seething in anger.. geet's grip loosened and she made he sit….

She did the gathbandan… it was actually a totally unique wedding… she herself parted tanvi's parting for him… for a time being she encountered with the time they were married….

The bride and groom were married…

Geet came towards her and handed some papers to tanvi….

Geet: this is your wedding gift tanvi… I hope both of you will enjoy and cherish it in this lifetime….

Her smirk was confusing ..making her to eagerly open the envelope immediately… tanvi was shocked … she immediately retorted….

Tanvi: what the hell is this geet…

Geet : sweetheart congrats for being a mother of the child of your dearest husband…..

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So here is part one….

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Posted: 12 years ago
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ME CONFUSE...CONFUSINGSTART BUT LOOKING FORWARD FOR STORY...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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huh okay that was confusing
maan married someone else
and that too geet made him do that
and it seems geet is pregnant with maan's child
whats going on here
well whatever it is am confused for sure
but love it nonetheless
please do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was very confusing di
maan married to someone else
when geet is his wife
i mean first wife
n she slapped her bhaiyya
y what did he do
n why is maan not saying anything
geet just made maan marry someone else
n now pregnancy
is geet pregnant ??
it was all so confusing
her bhaiyya
the slap
tanvi kapoor
the marriage
update soon di
or else i will really go insane
waiting eagerly
muahhh
luvvv yaaa
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi der..intense update! I am so confused!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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suhaana..
for the first time i am really confused really with ur parts..
pls do some alteration to get it more clear..
after full part i got some clear..
maaneet married at small age..
n must have been seperated..
n why she slaps tushar..
is he her own bro..
y did not she try 2 stop the marriage b4 too..
n why maan is silent
did he loves geet or not..
geet herself made tanvi married 2 maan..
y?
n the paper to become a mother..
is geet pregnant..
or tanvi cheated maan..
cant believe maan married someone else..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amezing geet ne khud maan aur tanvi ki shaadi karwa di ...
what had happend in the past ...ye OS rakhna taki jaldi finish ho jaaye coz i know u r so busy now days ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congratulation for new MG os
awesome, shocking part
me is full confused
continue soon

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