The parent, NEW THREAD-PAGE 1,MAY 1,2013 - Page 82

Originally posted by: muskanp

Oh tht was so beautiful explaination required to tht innocent mind

Sad even today's world parent lack tht maturity{At certain age,A mother should make her daughter understand all this but It does not happen..Even my mum never told me,though I kept on bugging her with my questions...😆..May be we never grow that much for our mothers..}

But u did a wonderful job👏{Thank you....😃}

Originally posted by: dqno1

I had to stop and look at the chapter number just to realize that in 7 short chapters you have traversed a long path. From my little sparrow to the girl who is a popular teacher and now taking her first steps out of the nest, the journey has been incredible.{ "Leaps" help alot..Now I am understanding why "Ekta Kapoor" is such big fan of leaps..😆Jokes apart, I am glad you liked Chidi's journey..😊}

This is a sign of a master story teller at work. {Thank you so much dear..Such appreciating words form a "superb writer" like you always motivates me..😊} I absolutely adored each and every thing that you have put in here. Geet takes me back to the innocence of childhood. The story is not only about that, we have greed at work here in Shoki's mother, loss of control that ruined a life by Shoki, the viciousness of false pride in Darji, the bitterness of someone who has lost her prized son from Taiji and the ultimate human qualities of acceptance and love in Mohinder and Rano. {You summarized the qualities of each and every character so perfectly..👏Your comments are always better than the chapters itself...😊}

Today I felt the love surrounding me like a cozy blanket reading Rano and Geet's conversation. The ease and unease with which the topic was explained to the innocent was applause worthy. There is so much depth and love in this relation and as always, your story takes me away with the way you make me feel after reading it. The innocent girl wanting to go play with her friends, is a poignant way of describing the childhood being lost by her.

I am so glad you decided to stay with this.

Thanks for updating.Thank for reading dear..😊

Originally posted by: ddgcmgfan

Hello Palin:
You are an amazing writer. Kudos to you for writing on such a delicate topic with such tenderness. My heart grieves for Chidi. I wish someone had talked to her sooner about pregnancy but I am glad it was Rano and not Pammi. Rano (read YOU) explained it so very well, without which it would have scarred Geet for life. I just have no words to express how touched I am by this story. All words fall short. Great work Palin!👏👏👏

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

sorry for commenting late... {There is always a "waiting" post from you before every chapter and most of the times you are the last one to comment...😆 Its ok yaar.Don't be sorry...}

the words are less with me now to describe ur awesome work...

geet being pregnant was not a shock as it was known before itslef... but the way u described it... how she was looking at the skipping rope and was enthusiastic to carry on with the game not having any tension of the test result was so heart wrenching ... cudos to u for thinking this and also beautifully portraying it too...{Thanks lakshmi...😊}

loved how rano explained geet... the usage of shivlingam in this was so apt...

the innocent chidi has grown to a teacher now...

but where is her daughter????{wait for next chapter..😊}

continue soon
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Originally posted by: singh24

Waiting...

Palin , plzzz start one more FF/SS...

Missing u..