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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shonameet

"Tune dil mera toda...
Kahin ka bhi na chhoda..
Sanam bewafaa..
O sanam bewafaa.."🥺 idhar udhar kya dekh rahi hai pallu? Main tujhe hi bol rahi hoon..😔 u didnt let me enjoy my "coming first" after so many days! Ulta mujhe rula diya!😭
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jaise hi read that line that channi was planning to runaway from her wedding... I was sure ke geet will be secrifiesing for the families name. But maine itna bura expect nahi kiya tha pallu...!
Shadi karna kya kam SAZAA thi??
Why did u let this happen to our chidi pallu?😡
i really dont know what to say about this yaar. Lekin its really horrible! She is a kid yaar..who wanted to save her dii from punishment..aur uski kimat chukani padi usse..wo bhi itni badi ke..she wont be herself anymore.
That innocence of her..which channi wanted to preserv.. Her one step has turnished/snatched it from our chidi brutly!

I am sorry dear...
I think i am going to write this for all the comments I have got for this chapter...😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

aisa kyu kiya palin tumne... mujhe tumpe aaj bahut gussa aa raha hai... it was so emotional ... very hard to handle... if am not wrong geet is just 14 ... right???{hamka maafi de do sarkar...}

the beginning of the part made me happy for the over enthusiastic geet... who was so excited for the new clothes, duppatta and all... and even her readiness to marry soon...

i donno to whom all to blame??? first of all her so called sis... knowing the backward thoughts of her family am so sad that she eloped on her marriage day itself? pehle nahi bhaag sakthi thi???and then she even didntconfided to any one... cant she atleast tell rano about all this and ask her to take care of geet???

then comes the cruelest person of the gang her so called chachi... apart from giving the fantastic idea of marrying off geet she even asked her to abide to her husband.😡😡... i just hate her...

then comes the so called "hero (0)" husband... i hate even his friends to instigate him to such an extent that he didnt even thought to back out even for a second , even after the cries and helplessness of geet...

even the entry of mohinder and rano didnt help to make me rejoice... but yes atleast though very very very late their arrival will be a relief to geet...

once again u r 😈 ... be an ⭐️ (angel ka emoticon nahi mila ... and am busy now so cant search too... star se kaam chala lo) soon and bring super maan ... { agle chapter mein hi aa jayega super maan...abhi toh yehi planning hai,badal jaye toh pata nahi...😛}

waiting for the next



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pingu-tingu

OMG what a update ...ahhh seriously how could they do this ????only for the sake of reputation ???? :/ mummy ahhh hating each n everybody ...Seriously they deserve to rot in jail n also in hell ..all i can say now continue soon ...damn she lost her innocence at such a tender age ...seriously such heartless people still exist in society n we people are still blind ! I love you for bringing such a concept ...you are the most innovative writer i have came across ..lol sorry for so much bak bak kya karoon control nai hota ? :p

@ bold
Thank you for saying this..It brought much needed relief for me..Hope i would be able to do justice with this concept...😊
ps- i love your bak bak...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: moni6262

that was So painful..
Just for his reputation, daarji nd pammi forced poor girl into something..of which she didn't knew even the meaning..
And the guy in his ego..gave so much of pain to geet
hw will rano handle all this with geet's innocence..
Pls update soon

first i will update LP dear...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am really sorry for that..
I know these tears are different from those you have shed for beauty...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: TheBrat

I need to tell you that you did a wonderful job in describing the nightmare in so less words and conveying it properly that you touched a chord. More on this in PM. Cannot comment anything here, I tend to become personal

Thank you bratty...
You know,that part was most difficult to write for me...!!! I have not written "physical romance" till now in any of my stories,then writing "sexual violence" was itself a nightmare for me...!!! I tried to finish it in minimal possible words and feeling quite good to know that you liked it..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

what did you do... why did you do... its so painful... chidi with broken wings... never ever thought the story would take this turn ! a small girl , just to save her sister from punishment... didnot even talk with her rano masi... didnot oppose , the drunked man...how could her chachi do that to her... she even made sure, the girl is isolated, would just allow anything to happen ... why , so that she won't come back... her sister... couldn't she run away before... why, when the baarat arrived... what to talk about drunken man... with all his insecurities... even rano mohinder are late for the rescue... may be better late than never...

I sincerely apologize for that but it was needed for this story..
Please be patient and support me..!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

update left me heart-broken🥺

just for their name sake reputation daarji-pammi destroyed a 14yr old girl life without thinking about her future

u r truly one of d most innovative writer i have ever seen

Thank you saying "update" not "you"...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ramyayuppy

what is this 😲😭
grrr that gurwinder 😡
i hate geets family
wat hell is that how can they do that to a little kid :'(
poor geet how can that brutal beast do that to her
why cant channi tell her NO to her family before only now bcoz of her geet is in this position 😭..
you really made me cry while reading this 😔

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj

let pammi and this shoki and daarji rot in hell..😡

poor geet..😭

Same pinch...

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