FF: Dark Hidden Secrets#1 Pt 1-10 -thread 2 added!

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ammu5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#431

feeling sad for maan... nice update

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Ash1991

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Posted: 12 years ago

#432

interesting update...

hope maan gets out of this problem soon...

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ShineXavier

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Posted: 12 years ago

#433

Awesome update and It was the most expected episode for me.. i was waiting for this part

Poor Maan couldn't digest all those accusations 🤢 .. Who is the witness?? 😲Is that Peter himself or someother??😕 ok wil know it anyhow in next update na 😆

Using all those court terms i can see how much u worked on it to bring it well for ur readers..

But one small advise dear bcos some paras, i was reading it 2 or 3 times to make out what it actually meant.. I felt like i'm reading my subjects 😒 again written by some foreign author 😉 which would be not in simple English.. Pls see to that in next update na

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ainaGURTI

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Posted: 12 years ago

#434

Originally posted by: abinash079
awesome update
i hope maan wins the case
plz can we get more maaneet moments 😉

thaknss abi...

Hopefully he does!!!! 😳

more maaneet moments *hayeee* 😭

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ainaGURTI

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Posted: 12 years ago

#435

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag
Nyc Update,,,But sooo many things r there which r out of my understanding...

oh dear... dnt wory u'll understand as the story moves on :)

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ainaGURTI

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Posted: 12 years ago

#436

Originally posted by: rsusmita
nice update.. but it took time for me to understand

thaks dear! but u couild understand na :)

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ainaGURTI

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Posted: 12 years ago

#437

Originally posted by: love2_soma
darr na maat maan...geet sab thik kar degi...

wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

waiting eagerly...

Lollzzz how true! 😉

thanks dear!!!

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ainaGURTI

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Posted: 12 years ago

#438

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

ok i will try to read it again...really very hard language...but I will try...

ummm!!!! hope u can make it at 2 nd read :P

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#439

part 7
nice...
bechara Maan...
but seriously that man is something...
hope Maan comes out of this in a good state...
cont soon dear...

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ainaGURTI

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Posted: 12 years ago

#440

Originally posted by: spvd
part 7
nice...
bechara Maan...
but seriously that man is something...
hope Maan comes out of this in a good state...
cont soon dear...

lolll deepa di...

keep hoping for d best!!!😆