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HeytzMaaneet

@HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#761

Teaser

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I was 6yrs then. It was my open day I was super excited and happy cos I had again stood first in my class not only in studies but every other co-curricular activity also. I was sitting on my bench but my eyes fixed on the door of my class waiting for my parents to arrive, the open day was just about to begin. Dad had promised me that they would be the first ones to arrive and I will be the first one to receive my report card.

That was the first promise he broke as none arrived and I kept waiting slowly my eyes started brimming with tears as all my friends parents had started arriving they all took their results and left with their parents. Some even teased me as I had announced earlier about the promise my Dad had made to me.

I kept mumbling to myself, "My Dad never breaks his promise"!!!!!

Ready for Maan's past

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Edited by heytal - 12 years ago

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#762

I want to give teh sweety a hugg 😭

But since he is all grown up now...i wud change it into a pappi ☺️

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sona rai

@sona-rai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#763

very painfull teaser yar...

eagerly waiting for update.

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

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Posted: 12 years ago

#764

Aww Lovely Teaser 😊

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#765

what a beautiful and emotional update...

two women - SD and Rano...two women - Ranjit and Mohinder...all praying for some peace, hapiness and love in the lives of the two people who have been living a lonely and trecherous life till now...

I hope their blessing always keep them safe and together now...

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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#766

Daddi I m feeling bad for her too...she is really sad... husband is male but she is woman so much worried ...now what happening with Maan...its really hard to c child in pain...Mohinder why I don know he never had guts...never had courage to take side of his daughter openly...But let it go...wonderful update dear...Loving it sorry for getting late...I responded to no one..Was in bad health...Waiting for next update soon.Hop will get asap...😭

Lov

Sonia

Edited by Jass.KN - 12 years ago

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krati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#767

Originally posted by: Loquacious_Aash
I want to give teh sweety a hugg 😭

But since he is all grown up now...i wud change it into a pappi ☺️

sahi hai...😆

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krati

@krati5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#768

😭 feeling bad for maan

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alwayzzgurti

@alwayzzgurti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#769

Hey!!! Heytal *Sounds Rhymic..lol*

A Veryyy Big Welcome to the World Of Writing!!!

First F All..Today i got the time to read ur SS...and mus sayyy... Yaarrr...

U Write Beautifullyyy... !!! I believe not only Telling about the Story, D Depiction of Emotions Through Writing is Very Difficult and U Nailed it Dear... 👏

Now Coming To the Storyyy... Yes " Humari Prem Kahani " Seems a quite Different Storyyy and I Swear... I Love Thrillers.. and This is sooo Makes U Think and Read each and Every Word Again and Again... Loved the Mystery Quotient in the Storyyy... !!!

Hmm... Now... I Had a Loottt Of Questions Regarding d Storyyy...

Tadaaa... 1. Name d kamina... who is So called Geet's First Husband... 😡 Not only name... m Eager to know..n a lil confused tooo...ki did Geet lived her marital life..or she left immediately with her Priceless Posession...??? Or any kinda.. twists there...??

2.Next is more abt How Maaneet met and How they actually knew each other...??? I know may b thro Annie... But still I could Smell a great Mystery Quotient Here too... 😃

3.I Swear a lot more to be added to Khurana Handa Tiff... as it sounds a lil more Serious with Savitri's Flashbacks...😉

4. Then Maan's Pendulum Mind cos of his Past... I do understand he had a Wrecked past...still Wanted to know.. Wat was Tat , Tat affected him sooo muchhh 😭

Now...If U Try to answer all my Questions, I Know... U hv to Reveal the Whole Story to me😆

Hehehe...!!! So Eagerly Waiting For This Suspense Packed Kahani of Maaneet and all the Mystery to be Solved...!!! and Offcourse... Maaneet Together like Chipkofying with Fevicol Always... I dont Mind..😉

All The Best For Ur Writing Venture and Keep Writing...!!!! and Update Soon (Pls...Dont B a Kaamchor Like Me... lol )

Over all... I loved the Suspense Family Thriller SS...of Urs Very Much,,,,👍🏼...Way To Go...!!!!

P.S: I Cant Comment On all the Updates Dearo... Cos My Lappy Gets Confiscated According to My Health... by My Jamesbond 007 Parents...!! So Whenever I Get Time... I Will Try to Comment... Bt Zaroor I ll read The Updates Then and There...😉

LuV

AG ❤️