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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for the late reply😳

It was quiet a sad but well written chapter. Looks like things aren't going well in this relationship. I wonder if Pammi has called Geet's mother and is going to make her take Geet away. I suppose their separation shouldn't come as a surprise especially considering the way Maan has been treating Geet of late. Thanks for the PM. Update soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

nice teaser

waiting for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update And Lovely Teaser
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 12 years ago


agayi meri pink di kya hua tha??
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PART 42:


read at ur own risk dont be mad at me with the content!!!

Geet!! geet!! a voice shook the whole khurana mansion, she was nowhere in her senses. Even though she got separated from her husband never for once she tried to talk to geet for she knew mohinder will not approve this. And it had been her ambition of life to see geet in her wedding attire as a dulhan and here geet had actually crushed them in just a moment. Mohinder and maan's father yash has been business partners which was always opposed by rano, coz yash is one bad guy of the town a renowed Casanova, mohinder and rano always used to fight for something or the other and yash had been a close friend of mohinder. It would not be wrong to say if geet's parents relation broke coz of yash!! As they constantly used to fight over the topic so much and finally reaching the fatigue point mohinder and rano seprated. Geet was left with mohinder and prem(geet's elder brother) with rano. They had a contract too that they will not meet either of the children without each others approval. Later mohinder shifted to London as his business flourished while yash completely stuck to girls and stopped attending onto his work. Shaan too followed his dad's path he used to flirt with girls while maan had taken over the business neglecting simran completely. With that simran and shaan fell in love, the tag of Casanova did not leave shaan so was the reason rano began to feel maan was too just like his father and brother!! She could never get over the reason of separation from her husband, yash and she hated khurana family the most. Dadima knew this truth still she had always been in touch with mohinder though rano never showed her intrest.


Now this issue of maaneet's marriage struck her so much. The question haunted her ever since she knew was why did not maan marry geet in front of the world?? If he truly loved her he would have definitely did that!! Thinking about it deeper the other thought that hit her was might be maan might have decided to use geet for his desires and leave her. Probably her daughter was innocent and nave to understand the facts, probably maan has trapped her for geet being conservative with her thoughts (uff rano maa you are one specimen nave and geet?? conservative and geet?? God she is one besharam girl sach kehte hai its necessary to bring up a child to know what the child is actually!! right??)


Maan got down to see geet hugging an elderly lady with love and concern, he smiled at the mother and daughter who were crying, shedding tears. But what shocked him next was the lady holding geet's hand and walking out, chal geet ghar chal yeh tera ghar nahi hai.


Mama yeh aap kya keh rahi ho?? this is my house now how can I come with you?? I am married she said steadying herself to move further ... married?? Who knows you are married?? Main toh nahi jaanti?? Stop this drama of marriage geet aur chup chaap ghar chal warna acha nahi hoga she retorted gazing maan


Shaadi chahe kaisa bhi hua ho its true we are married and it would be better if you understand this, maan held geet's other hand dragging her towards him, something which rano did not like.


Oh so you say geet is your wife!! Usse pehle Mr. khurana she is my daughter better remember that she raised her finger warning him.


I very well know the rights you are speaking about and I respect it too lekin you cant take geet with you coz now its me who own her not you!! He said tightening his hold on geet's wrist.


So with these rightful words you trapped my daughter how can I forget what was your dad?? Jaisa baap waise hi beta!! Nobody knows you married her, so it will be easy for you to use and ditch her right?? Aaj geet kal koi aur hoga issi liye shaadi nahi kiya sabke saamne aur meri beti itni bholi hai samajh hi nahi paayi ki you were trapping her all the while!! Your dad was such a b***** ... And then she could continue seeing maan's hand raising on to hit her!!


Maan!! geet froze holding his hand, yes her mother did not raise her but still she is the one who has given birth and now if she is asking maan such questions its just because she loves her daughter. When maan can love his step mother blindly why cant she love her mother?? That hit her looking at pammi who was enjoying the drama that was taking place there. All the rational thoughts left her!! love is blind!! Its indeed right!!


How dare you raise your hand on my mother?? She forced maan's hand down... geet just stay out of this your mom is crossing her limits now mere pita ke baare main aisa baat karne ka unhe koi haq nahi hai, he did not like the way his own wifey saying this to him. He loves his father and this is just not the way rano is supposed to speak about someone who is not in the world. How can he bear someone disrespecting his father?? No never, he is his father!!


So you love your dad!! You love your step mother!! Unke baare mein kuch bhi bolo toh aapka ego beech mein aajata hai lekin you can say anything to my mother!! Unka koi izzat nahi hai that's the reason you raised your hand just now?? Haina?? She finished painfully unable to digest the fact of him acting like a mad person.


Geet she just called my dad a ... ek minute why are we fighting on this now?? Just go to your room hum baad mein baat karenge before that ask your mother to leave the house right now warna acha nahi hoga, geet's eyes turned teary. This was the moment pammi was waiting till now, call the security now and throw this lady out she yelled looking at maaneet.


That was it the control snapped completely for geet, she was about to answer pammi when dadima interfered, bte geet ask your mother to leave the house maan is right she shouldn't have said that word, Yash chahe jaise bhi hai par woh hai mere bte she looked away with anger evident on her face.



Aur main?? Main aapki kuch nahi lagti dadima?? Pehli baar meri mama mujhe milne aayi hai aur aap aisi baat kar rahi hai?? You can tolerate that pammi not my mother?? Aisa bhi kya boldiya unhone??



Geet andar jao right now maan ordered understanding geet has lost her senses but next set of words from geet were something he least expected... kyun andar jaon main?? Maine kuch galat toh nahi kaha na?? Say sorry to my mother right now, she seemed adamant now. Its high time she needed an apology but how can maan ask for forgiveness?? He did not say anything that was wrong so why??



Mujhe koi sorry nahi chahiye isse geet I just don't want you to stay here chal mere saath, she held geet to take her away, I cant let to stay with a son of a b***** rano repeated the same word this time maan's did raise and landed on rano's face... and then geet's world crashed on for the maan did hit her this time truly, her mother was trying to fight for her and she is just letting all that to happen!! She slapped maan returning him what he gave to her mother and held his collar... How dare you?? Aapne apna haath bhi kaise uthaya maan woh bhi mere mama par?? You hit my mother how dare you I HATE YOU!! HATE YOU for this, she looked at her neck, it was because of this relation her mother had to face such humility... SHE UNTIED THE MANGALSUTR AND THREW IT ON MAAN'S FACE... mujhe aap nahi chahiye, mujhe yeh shaadi nahi chahiye nahi jeena ek aise insaan ke saath jo mujhe besharam samjhe!! aapne besharam hi banadiya hai mujhe socha hoga ki kuch bhi karon besharmi ke saath mere saath reh jayegi all she needs is a physical relation aise hi toh shuru hua hamara relation


precap:

Dadima mujhe apni biwi se akele mein baat karni hai I want all you to leave me alone for sometime he said glancing everybody in the hall stressing on the word biwi telling them that he have every right on geet

Kya kaha tumne?? I did not say I love you?? He clenched his fist tightly holding himself back from doing something wrong but still he badly needed to hold geet and vent out his frustration..... tumhe nahi lagta ki our relation had crossed away the path of proposal its beyond love something divine?? Itna sab hone ke baad tum aise bol bhi kaise sakti ho geet??


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Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yay!!! Me First
OMG!!! This part was compleletly unexpected and i am very happy to read that you have brilliently justify their reaction...
No one can ever hear these bad words for their parents and what Maan did it was natural act and Geet reaction was right at her place...!!!

Waiting for next part
Edited by GurtiArti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update

i knw rano was wrong but maan he was more

he slapped a mother who was concerned fr her daughter

and than wat wrong rano said tat he has not declared geet as his wife

there would be a fear na tat he may use her daughter and throw her out but she was wrong too

talking abt his dad was not right but the fear she had tat he still did not accept her as his wife in front of world was making her worried.

and wat maan did .. he hides the truth abt pammi even though its fr geet's safety but with such things he made pammi to succeed in this..

somewhere i feel tat maan is wrong here.. wrong in thinking
Edited by sdlife19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg y her mom came
can understand her fear bt geet
if she cant tolrt her mom insult how can masn
n wt thehell
she broked her mangstr
bs itn apyaar
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very intense update, yaar itna time may liya Karo update keliye, heart fail hojange

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