Toote Hue Khwaab- Relics of a Departed Era - UPDATES LINK on PG 34

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Halema Khan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

As in the samina_halema ID we are still newbies :/

Either add me

halemakhan or Dipti_Sam for PMs as we can't PM you on the shared ID

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Ash1991

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

amazing start...

waiting fr gets entry...

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sona rai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

awesome start dear,loved it a lot.

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Simran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

nice strting👏👏👏

hmm maan n geet partners in crime

he saw geet??? or its jst his illusion???

waiting 4 nxt.

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dreamymishti88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

awesome

fabulous part

very nicely written

liked a lot

continue soon

waiting for next

waiting

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renjini263

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Hey dear awesome start!!!

Loved it veryy much...!!!

Hmm so Maan went away 4m Geet nd nw Geet hs totally changed...

Maan came back... nd while gng home he saw Geet...

plzzz cont soon dear!! w8ng

Edited by renjini263 - 12 years ago

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samina_halema

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: muskanp
That was a nice start
Wonder wat happened to geet
& who is sweetheart 😲

ohhh we r blessed tht u read 😃

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samina_halema

@samina_halema

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: shrutheAjay
I was scared on reading the title...

So i was thinking twice to read... but anyways i gave it a try...

Nice start yaar... So MSK is back from his Masters... He has some sweet heart 😲 already... And Geet is his crime partner from childhood... and something that happened before he left has changed her so much... There are lots of things that are kind of mystery... am anxious as how u r going to proceed...

Jaldi jaldi update karo...

not to worry di

its not a saddy saddy story 😃

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tichPM

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Finally i m Commenting Here.
Ek Baat bolu

Pulleejjj Update Fast

I hate u Guy's Laziness..
Exam finish hote hi Please update karo
or else Tich coming with danda and chappal for u guys...

ok coming on 1st Part
Only family Milap when he will meet Geet

So Maan & Geet are childhood frnds. Interesting, But doesn't He love Geet? he is calling her best frnd...😕

He saw Geet on traffic signal then why he didn't stopped her??and He is making fun of her state, i will kill MAAN... and u both...Something Big happened with Geet and He was away, His study was first priority 😡

n ye last wala

"Sweetheart, I miss you but do not worry, Your Maan is coming to you soon!"

Yeh kiske liye tha???Geet ya aur koi😡