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Just chanced upon this brilliant piece of writing
extraordinary views on such a sensitive issue and what a way to pen it down
first accept my 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
the whole incident was so traumatic and this issue is so very crucial for all the women
yes we have read so much abt this , everyone vented out their anger in finding different ways to punish the criminals
but whenever i read such things in paper one thought comes to my mind first
WHAT DO THE MEN GET BY STOOPING TO THIS LEVEL
Few moments of physical pleasure or ( but how can one even feel pleasure when another human being is screaming , crying and begging )
Or do they find themselves so powerful that they can do anything they want to
dont have any answer for this
Here u have very well portrayed how men not only force themselves on females physically and commit such crimes but even mentally or in work places they do take advantage of women and thus try to prove their powerfulness or satisfy their male ego
though u did not go in details of the ACT but even then u wrote whatever was needed to bring out all emotions involved
and what a line for the city how well it hides the sketleton in its womb... ( so a city is just the opposite of ocean which is so loud and roaring on the surace but calm and composed inside )
very very powerful writing dear
In a short story u have written everything , portrayed the pain , anguish everything so well
splendid and marvellous writing dear
this is the first time i am reading something by u
and i am speechless by ur writing and ur views
never thought abt this view which u depicted in this story and yes how true it is
If only all the male realise the way the narrator in the story did then there wont be such crimes anymore , no explotiation of women in any form
Just a shift in thought and every thing can change
I am amazed that we have such talented writers like u ( and palindrome and ritzy also as i love their works as well ) in this forum
do u write professionally
really curious and in awe of ur writing skills and views
keep writing dear
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