Life partner 4,CH 28-PG135,NEXT THREAD-PG153 - Page 52

Originally posted by: Susegad

Nahiii!! Kasam se Palin, tu padhegi toh I swear I'll get constipation of the thought process.😆 Tu toh meri hero, mera matlab heroine hai.

Ok, if you read, I want an absolute and completely honest feedback as to what you liked and what you didn't.

I was typing my update and I swear, now my mind is frozen😔

Originally posted by: palindrome

I would give an honest feeback parjai ji...kasam se..

and i am sure i am not going to dislike anything in this story..!!!😃

Originally posted by: palindrome

I am so glad to know "muskan" is enjoying my story...😳

Thank you so so so so so so so much dear...😃

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Back from shopping. Koi hain?

Originally posted by: TheBrat

Back from shopping. Koi hain?

Ooh yeah😆 I am formal now 🤣

Originally posted by: TheBrat

Ooh yeah😆 I am formal now 🤣

very lovely update

Rofl. I like my ghar-pe-version. Yaar interview ko aise teep taap kyun jana hain? Shorts pehenke kyu nahi ja sakte? :P

Super late in commenting but I just didn't want to not comment, so pehle nahin toh ab sahi! 😳

This time, I just let myself go with the flow of the chapter and not look very deeper. I let myself feel Kiran's distracted state and Maya's never ending taunts, Aarav's hurt of not being the favourite - or so he thinks - and his subsequent declaration of hating his sister, Geet's self-questioning and the weak moment when she feels bad for not being her husband's first priority, and Maan's subtle care for her, his suppressed naughtiness resurfacing. I let myself feel all of these things very beautifully portrayed by you Palin!

One thing I don't want happening is Aarav hating his sister. But that's the way things usually are in such cases, I guess. So I'll keep my fingers crossed for his redemption before irrevocably damage is done...

Thanks for updating, Palin. Good you decided on once a week updates. Makes life easy for the writer! 😆