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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
awesome
liked a lot
continue soon
waiting for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Jeba.Rahman

seriously I did not get the head and tail



LOLLL .. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The Downpour... Part 2


Maan was about to start his bike when got a call. He answered..

"Hello!! Bhai!!!'' A female voice shouted from other side. Maan had to remove phone from his ears to handle her scream. "Bhai did you find?''

"Annie. .. can you stop shouting pls. You know anyone can hear your loud pitch from a kilometer far even"

"Bhaii !!! .. don't try to make fun me okay! Now tell did you find that driver? Did he return all my things? "

"No Annie he did not. He didn't come today. Still I'm there waiting for him but now I guess he will not come now''

"And what about that girl Bhai.. Could have asked her!''

"Ah! That girl ..'' Maan made mock face. "Annie she is mad you know!! I was going to ask her about him and she,,,, run away like mad like I am some stalker and was going to kidnap her!!!.. she is such a stupid girl ''

"Bhai why don't you let me tell everything to Arjun or at least Dadima. They can get it done easily!!''

"Means you don't trust your brother right!!''

"No Bhai asa nahi hai. But your work n all. And I really don't like you to follow a mere auto driver being a millionaire''

Annie being a millionaire it doesn't mean I can't help my little sister on my own. Bringing your things back is my responsibility only and I can do it myself in a better way. I don't need any one else to protect my family or their belongings. Maan Singh Khurana is enough for that!!!'' Maan stated in attitude and proud made Annie completely speechless. She knew her brother very well and also knew that he can do anything in favor of his family and she had proud of it being a Khuirana's and more, little sister of Maan.

"I know Bhai but I was saying that it's been long days. Why don't you just go to his place and get everything?''

"That because he never been at his place Annie and no one knows where he stays whole day and night. Whenever I sent my men to his home he could not be found. Only the time he carries that girl to her office, he can be seen and I also followed him sometimes. Even for once I waited for him outside of her office building but he escaped someway. And rest in my busy office schedules I missed him. And today when he was called to meet me alone he agreed but again, he escaped I guess. ''

"I'm sorry bhai because of me and my fault you're to bear all this. I was really fool to leave my bags in that auto and all my things, passports and documents went on risk''

"Annie you need not to feel low. It can happen my mistake. And it was not your fault that your car broke down in mid way while coming back from airport and had to take auto at night and in hurry you lost your things!! You just stop thinking about all Okay and yes.. not need to tell anything about it to anyone!! I'm here for you.. ''

"Thank you Bhai.. You know, you're the best brother in this world!!' She said with jumping joy..

"Yes.. I know well''!! He replied with firm attitude together with a little smile.. And they disconnected call.

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Geet, stopped running due to extreme pain in legs. She looked back and found on one, so felt relax. Her breathe was heavy and choking. She looked around. It was empty road with shadowy ambiance due to winter season and she knew, rain can pour down anytime soon. She shiveredwith the thought and started to walk fast reaching somewhere at known but for her dismay, where she was, she had no idea. Due to fast and random run which direction she took and now where had reached, her mind couldn't understand.

"Babaji.. What I do now!!'' she started fearing. She found herself at some desert place surrounded with woods and bushes only. Her eyes welled up. She raised her hand to wipe tear from hand when felt one more drop fell on her cheek, next to previous one tear. She wiped both drops together when some more drops touched her face. Now she knew it were not of hers then whom?.. She guessed.. And looked up. The sky was grayish and hazy. Sky found her looking toward him and in play mood, he started to shower more and more fat drops on her face first and then all over. Geet panicked. Searched around for any safe place but it was like most impossible task for her and till she found one, her dress had already been soaking wet, making her frame very visible.

She was stood under a huge tree covering her body from Dupatta, wore it like shawl. And then remembers she had umbrella. Hurriedly took it out and sheltered herself below it but it started flying like a silk material in storming wind. It was the biggest Downpour she had ever seen or at present, she felt like that. She was hell scared and frightening and it went on highest when heard the loud thunder with blazing light coming from dark thick and black clouds up. It was enough of what she could bear in terror. She found her death very near. But No.. Perhaps Babji had some more ideas to make her complete dead when found a bike, coming toward at same direction of hers.. and thus she felt like counting her last moments on this earth..

Precap: ''Wanna lift??'' Bike Man gazed her from head to toe and asked with his husky voice..

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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
😲😲 ye kya maan ko kya samja kya likla.ye geet kya sochi hay uske muje bhi galat fami ho gaye😆...maan looking for his sis thing that was in geet auto lol..geet maan na waisa nahi hay re😆...precap sound interesting plss update it soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Love it graphics
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Some confusion cleared out

Maan is following the driver of the auto as Aniee had forgot her passport n other documents in the auto

Then who is calling n messaging Geet if not Maan
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update...!!
I wonder who is calling Geet, perhaps it's a psycho stalker...😕
Edited by Fallen Angel - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
awesome update...
geet ne maan ko kya samjhe!!!!!!!!
so much misunderstanding...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lo khoda pahad nikala chooha..😆 Kya kya socha tha Maan ke bare mein... Poor Geet She is so scared...Waiting for next part..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
interesting misunderstanding

now how will maan make her speak about that driver

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