If Only You Saw Me (2) - Page 88

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Kuch hint toh do about where to find it?!

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

of course in ur update😈

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Originally posted by: mayyo13

What? 😕

Originally posted by: had2bu

Zara zara touch me touch me... ki baat toh nahi karring?

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

Now that u are tryin to act alll inoocnet and say i dont know hwat u are talking about😉Typical Mari style👏let me comemnt...😆😆

That's because you talk in riddles. Mujhe samajh hi nahin aata!

U think it over till then😃

First things first...i was like😲when i saw teh lenght...wahh Mari is sudhringg🤗

Waise toh itni lambi length ghalati se ho gayi lekin phir bhi 🤗
Let me warn you. Itni length har baat nahin hogi. 😃

Itna kuch ho gaya...Maan n Geet bondning n tooting

Bonding hui lekin tooting kab?? 😕

Ek dnace to banta hai boss😡and that is NOT a request😡

I don't work on demands. 😛

Mommys frnd is geet i assume😆😆😆 isnt she owrking too many jobs?😕😕

Assumptions aren't good for you or anyone! 😆 There's only one job mentioned. 😕[/I]

Ayush is infattaed wiyh geet it seems...or his he plain bugging maan?😕😕and ananya is a mystery,,,why does Mommy think she has feelings for maan?😕

Patience will be the key to getting these answers. 😆

and i repeat ...i want 3 not 2😭

Elaborate please! 🤔

Originally posted by: glassdoor

😃 You know it and sing it...res waaa

EDIT ~~~~

Phew! That was a long update Mariam. But Maan's adventures were enjoyable. He is just so sweet and cuddly.

The length was actually in intended and I only noticed it was way too long after posting it! 😆
That Maan is, sweet! 😳

Ayush, well I could strangle in a cute way. He is also line maraoing Geet. Cannot blame him. She is just so awesome and self contained. Maan buckle up your gear and just go for it baby. You don't wait for Geet to refuse him! Give Ayush some competition now. Mama's boy nahi tikega bhai.

No no, no strangling Ayush yet! Let's see if Maan actually sees his friend as competition and acts or... 😃

Geet oopsy, she is a little intimidating now. If I were a guy I would be scared to approach her too just like Maan. People who are so independent are hard to impress too. Maan is ticking off boxes in his head on Geet's qualities, that was cute. 😆

Accha? Are they really hard to impress? Maan is trying to increase as much of his knowledge about her as possible. 😆

Ananya part at the beginning was so awesome. Such a friend is so imaginable. She is the tomboy. She is always around and every guy thinks she is one of them. Poor her. Does she secretly like Maan? 😉

And because the guys think she's one of them, they always overlook her when seeking out a companion! Well, well... Maybe she does. 😉

One more question, is this a true story? 😆 It feels like one. It has that feeling of daily humdrum and yet is sweet and gentle. It is so pleasant to read. I can imagine myself in that college. Why cannot folks who spend mega bucks to make crap on TV make something nice and feel good like this? It is not the same story, but this story gives me a deja vu. Of watching a serial on Zee (back in the times when serials were awesome and actually had a storyline.) called 'Tithliya'. It was a story of four girlfriends going to college. Nothing fancy. Just college politics and nothing over the top. It was such an enjoyable watch. This story is like that.

No, the story isn't true. Mostly. 😆
I remember the name of this show but nothing more than that. Though I'm humbled to know you think this way about this story. 😊

A story that looks deceptively simple written by an insightful person. Lo Behold! A new success formula. 😆

Deceptively?? Viola! A recipe squeezed in by Sheesh! 😆

Why am i yapping so much by the way? May be because this story has a journal feel to it and I feel free to add my own views to it. Thanks for throwing me back to the good old times.

Peoples who are fond of serials, have you watched the old serials that used to come on Zee like 'Banegi Apni Baat', 'Shaanti', 'Astitva', 'Alp viram' and of course 'Hum Paanch' etc? They were great with real storylines. I have not watchedthe entire hoopla but as long as i was watching them they were good. They are much better than hero pretending for 250 episodes to love the heroine(Oh ya I hear that is the twist in one of the currently running serials. Believe it or not!).

You're free to yap as much as you want. It's interesting to read the reception you and everybody give to each little thing. 😊
I know which show you're talking about here and trust me, after that, everybody in my house quit the show. I never watched it to begin with! 😆

Ok I have yapped enough. Signing off. Catch you later.

Thanks Sheesh! 🤗

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

hey thanks for the pm..and the update was awesome...love this character of maan...

but i hope anya and ayush doesnt further create any prob btween them...

and i just have a feeling that this girl about whom his mother is talking is no other than geet...lets just wait and see who she is...

pls continue soon!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj

big update..
i wanted to beat ayush ..😆
is the girl maan's mom talking about is geet???
nice update...
awesome job mariam...