If Only You Saw Me (2) - Page 76

Originally posted by: Susegad

AAAHHH!!! Where the hell is Wednesday. Can't we just skip Tuesday for once.

</div><div>Yeh Tuesday toh kabab mein haddi, gale ki haddi, pav ki bedi, waqt mein rukawat, etc etc ban gaya hain

Wednesday mujhse bole, If only you saw me.

Abey Wedney iss Tueday ko beech se hatale.

😆😆

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Mujhe kaise pata chalega tum log kahan ho 🤔

Wednesday 😃

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Aur mere liye abhi Tuesday is a sigh of relief, some more time. 😆

Originally posted by: Susegad

<div>Tumhari relief ki toh aisi ki taisi, how can you be relaxing when tumhari Apa is tarsing and tadping here.

Hmm does emotional kaala daak work on you I wonder.😆

Originally posted by: Susegad

Chalo koi nahi. Me off to bed anyways, will wait for Wednesday😔

Btw, check pg 84 on Avi's thread😉

Originally posted by: TheBrat

Damn it to hell. I love this story. Love love loved the bonding mother-son shared. Oh man can I just go pull his cheeks, when he feels embarrassed like that before his mom? Awwh.
The light banter, the easy going nature, the leg pulling, everything between the friends was so real that I didn't feel for once I was reading fiction.
The simple act of sharing how our day was with mom, sleeping on the couch itself had me remember those good old days when I was a happy soul without exams breathing down my neck like dragons🤣
His sneak and peek a boo session got interrupted eh? And whhaaat! That was so unfair of you to stop at that place.
PS: Do you have a face for Ayush and Anaya?😃

Originally posted by: TheBrat

Disclaimer: Do not look for something sensible in the comment below. It is more of my chapar chapar and running commentry. Read at your own risk.

First of all, Have you ever been to miming show? No? You should come see me some day. Because my expressions changed drastically with the following two lines.

Nope, never been to one but I'd really liked to have seen how your expressions changed!😆

Detective note one: How does she know it was his regular route?
Detective note Two: Special friend?😲

Solution to Detective note one: She isn't as ignorant as everyone thinks she is. She's obviously noticed him sauntering past the corridor, though she doesn't know the intentions behind it.😉

Solution to Detective note two: Not applicable yet!😆

Chauk gayye mohalle waalon wala ad practice kar raha hoga bechara bacha😆

You bet!😆

You got to be kidding me Geet😆

Bahahaha! I bet he would know more than just your name girl.

Now now, she wouldn't know how she's been in the spotlight for a while, would she?😳

Sigh! Dreamy wala sigh!

Oh mannn! I want to half pat his back saying come on cheer up be a man, half of me want to go fetch a bowl of pop corn, for I am already seeing the storm that's gonna come

Is there a storm on its way??😆

Okay this had me grinning like a bleddy phuul😆
Okay now that my stupid dissection is done lemme tell you my darling mayya mayya that this update is ammaazziinng. It is amazing how you had showed the right emotions of a person when his dream turns into reality. Just 24 hours before he was of the opinion she didn't know who he was and see, what's happening now.

It takes but a blink of an eye for everything you've dreamed of to come true at times!😊

Though there's a tiny voice of mine which is misleading me with the various signs that are imbibed in the story. I admit first time when I read it, i got carried away with the beauty of the story and hadn't noticed few things, which on a second read looked conspicuous. 😕 I hope I proved wrong and they get their happy ending. Babaji!

Hmm... Let me think... *holding a flower and plucking its petals one by one*
Give them a happy ending?
Give them a sad ending.
Give them a happy ending?
Give them a sad ending.😆

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Originally posted by: had2bu

I will seriously hunt you down if there is no happy ending...

Coming with Brij ki talwar...

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