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mayyo

@mayyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#741

Originally posted by: NoorFatima

i just love the cutesy thing goin on between maan and geet.. school/ college wala crush/ love type thing.. <3 ..

Glad you're liking it Noor! 😊

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sweetkj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#742

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Koi baat nahin Sweety. Things happen. Don't stress yourself! 😊

with you people around.. how can i feel stressed.! 😊

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mayyo

@mayyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#743

Originally posted by: sweetkj

with you people around.. how can i feel stressed.!😊

So toh hai! The situation is vice versa. Yahan pe aa ke koi stress ya tension yaad hi nahin rehta! 😃

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sweetkj

@sweetkj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#744

Originally posted by: mayyo13

So toh hai! The situation is vice versa. Yahan pe aa ke koi stress ya tension yaad hi nahin rehta! 😃

toh bus mujhe toh koi panga hi nahi hai!!

am stress-free! 😃

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Mishtieeeee <3

@Koolsmile

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Posted: 12 years ago

#745

Chatting everywhere widout me 😭

Khair, update kahan hai larki ? 😛

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mayyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#746

Originally posted by: Koolsmile
Chatting everywhere widout me😭

Khair, update kahan hai larki ? 😛

Hum log jahan milte hain wahan hi shuru ho jaate hain! Tum har thread check kar liya karo! 😆

Update on Wednesday. 😃

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516645

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Posted: 12 years ago

#747

Updated comment in Page 1

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516645

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Posted: 12 years ago

#748

Disclaimer: Do not look for something sensible in the comment below. It is more of my chapar chapar and running commentry. Read at your own risk.

First of all, Have you ever been to miming show? No? You should come see me some day. Because my expressions changed drastically with the following two lines.

Thank goodness he didn't change his regular route. I had started to doubt my chances of meeting him before I have to leave to meet a special friend.

Detective note one: How does she know it was his regular route?
Detective note Two: Special friend?😲

Why isn't he reacting?
Chauk gayye mohalle waalon wala ad practice kar raha hoga bechara bacha😆

Does he even recognise me?
You got to be kidding me Geet😆

Should I say my name before saying something else?
Bahahaha! I bet he would know more than just your name girl.

'And you're Maan.' It isn't a question because there is no point asking him his name when I already know it.

Sigh! Dreamy wala sigh!

Why can't I ever be normal in her presence, the way I am with the rest of the world? Is there ever going to be a day when she sees me as a friend, at least? I feel dejected as I think about it.
Oh mannn! I want to half pat his back saying come on cheer up be a man, half of me want to go fetch a bowl of pop corn, for I am already seeing the storm that's gonna come

Please, please, please, please, please let her be my partner, is what I feverishly pray in my head. My breath catches in my throat and I can't believe it when it actually turns out that she is the one for me. My teammate, I correct in my head.

Okay this had me grinning like a bleddy phuul😆
Okay now that my stupid dissection is done lemme tell you my darling mayya mayya that this update is ammaazziinng. It is amazing how you had showed the right emotions of a person when his dream turns into reality. Just 24 hours before he was of the opinion she didn't know who he was and see, what's happening now. Though there's a tiny voice of mine which is misleading me with the various signs that are imbibed in the story. I admit first time when I read it, i got carried away with the beauty of the story and hadn't noticed few things, which on a second read looked conspicuous. 😕 I hope I proved wrong and they get their happy ending. Babaji!