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Posted: 12 years ago
Friday wala
thap thap thap
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: had2bu


Friday wala

thap thap thap


Ah.. Iss thap thap ka mere pass abhi jawab nahin hai.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13


Ah.. Iss thap thap ka mere pass abhi jawab nahin hai.

iss ka jawab ek hi hai...
update on the way...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: had2bu


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iss ka jawab ek hi hai...
update on the way...😆


Abhi I can't promise a specific day. Kuch khaas likha nahin hai and I won't get time enough to write in the next two days. :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow ... nice part!!!
I know I'm quite late in figuring it out that you've updated a new part in a new thread... Anways better late than never... 😊
Loved the way you gave a background to Maan's character, upbringing & all that makes him & has been instrumental in being so grounded yet holding his own mettle. The family's hardships, struggles & efforts to come out of all the trials life has made them to face was so well & subtly put forward by you... with not the least bit demanding for sympathy or feeling soory for, but admiring their guts, courage & bravery to face it all head on & in the face of the adversities being bombarded on them one after the other...
Oh ho!! Waiting to see how this team work turns out for these two souls. One being least intrigued & aware of his liking towards her & the other whose every task & doing is a reflection of his admiration, longing & awareness of her... So much so that even his Mom knows about it. That being said she is an integral part of his day-day thoughts yet he knows his standing in life & all that he needs to do for his family & in his life... not once even a bit wavering from all of it...
Continue soon...
Edited by Onir - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13


I'm both glad and nervous to have you here, Fozia! And I'm even gladder that you're liking it so far! Thanks! 😳


Oh no don't be nervous! As writers and readers we're all in the same boat 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir


Wow ... nice part!!!

</div><div>I know I'm quite late in figuring it out that you've updated a new part in a new thread... Anways better late than never... 😊
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Loved the way you gave a background to Maan's character, upbringing & all that makes him & has been instrumental in being so grounded yet holding his own mettle. The family's hardships, struggles & efforts to come out of all the trials life has made them to face was so well & subtly put forward by you... with not the least bit demanding for sympathy or feeling soory for, but admiring their guts, courage & bravery to face it all head on & in the face of the adversities being bombarded on them one after the other...
Oh ho!!Waiting to see how this team work turns out for these two souls. One being least intrigued & aware of his liking towards her & the other whose every task & doing is a reflection of his admiration, longing & awareness of her... So much so that even his Mom knows about it. That being said she is an integral part of his day-day thoughts yet he knows his standing in life & all that he needs to do for his family & in his life... not once even a bit wavering from all of it...
Continue soon...
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I'm sorry that it wasn't clear enough for you to know I've updated. If you want, I can send you a PM next time. 😊

The bold part is something important to the story which you've caught on. Or at least I plan to make it an important one! 😃

Thanks for being here Onir! 🤗
Edited by mayyo13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: palindrome

I read both the chapters{chapter 3 and 4} in one go...

After watching GHSP till Dec 14 2011, I kind of dislike "Eye locks" but chapter 3 made me desperate for locking their eyes once..It was cute in its own way..Cuteness was subtle yet prominent..and it was all because of magic of your words and character portrayal...

This is a big compliment I got from one of my favourite writers in the forum! I'm humbled!😳
If I'm honest about my opinion regarding eye locks after the fateful day, I'd say I still love them. Because after that day, I haven't watched any other show let alone a romantic one where there are eye locks. So my love for eye locks still related to the two who created history for us!

My favorite line from the chapter is.."As the professors praise her speech and her confidence, I feel like a proud parent who's child has just won a difficult competition."
I think maan's feelings for geet are beyond teenage attraction or infatuation..!!!😊

Perhaps his feelings are way above attraction. That might be a reason for why the still couldn't talk to her once.

Coming to chapter four,
I loved each and every relative of maan,his mother,his elder brother and ofcourse his best friends..
He is completely different from what geet thinks him to be..
Waiting for her to know him{atleast look at him once}..Wait she did look at him at the end but why that blank expression on her face..
I am little scared...


Yes. She did look at him. Why the blank look, that you'll have to find out in the next chapter!

Thanks Palin!🤗


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Posted: 12 years ago

I'm late this time!
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Posted: 12 years ago
mayyo, i really loved d way u hv portrayed both maan n geet character n their story is something different here, both r craving for each other but never mustered courage to open up their feelings. bus stop , speech scene n specially ayush's beahaviour knda brought me back in my own college days😆 kuch kuch aisa hi hota tha tab bhi😆n ohhh han i really liked that ayush dude😆 ,

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