If Only You Saw Me (2) - Page 16

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Seriously?! Tum is used in fights? 😕
So what do you want me to address you as when we use Desi language?

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Is this the final one? 😆

Good night! Main bhi jaa rahi hoon!

Originally posted by: Susegad

Good night girls

Mithe mithe sapne to you both.

Love you.🤗

Originally posted by: Susegad

Ok, first and foremost this Maan is a mithai ki dabba all by himself. He is the most adorable Maan I have seen in any FF. Hmm, can I keep him?😉

Mithayi ka dabba toh wo hai but I'm afraid you can't keep him to yourself. Iss mithayi ke dabbe ka owners koi aur hai aur wo sirf kuch pieces hi har kar sakta, pura box nahin.😃

He is such a normal kid, that i could relate to him at every level. As a son, a friend, and a youger brother. In fact after today's glimpse into his life and the roundedness you have given to his character I can now totally understand why he is so hesitant in approaching Geet or expressing his feelings.

We all have that normality in us in varying proportions, don't we? And it shows in the way we treat every relation we are tied to. And being hesitant in expressing feelings is also quite normal.😳

It's amazing how you have managed to draw characters with diametrically opposite faces and reflections. Yaar padhte padhte Geet Maan ke personalities kaise switch ho gaye samajh mein hi nayi aaya. He seems like an a confident and an exrovertguy, with all the requisite friends and an open realtionship with his mom and brother, But inspite of all this he is the real introvert isn't he?

And Geet who quiet, keeps to herself and has a tough time expressing herself to her family is actually quiet content with herself and very self confident.

That was really amazing Mayyo.👏

I love the way you've put this. And being honest, this is something I hadn't planned but as you mention it, I can see that it has happened!😊

And is he really caught, I wish. But somehow I have feeling aisa hoga nahi.

Right now, I'm feeling like Maan. Holding my breath and thinking will she wont she?

Par main janti hoon mere iss holding pe tu pin zaroor maregi.

Already anticapating th enext update really eagerly. And that is your fault. Why stop at such apoint and leave us on pins and needles.😆

Why, you have a great sixth sense! But in this, in with you, chanting will she won't she.😆

Isliye waitng wating waitng ...

And me thinking thinking thinking😆

Thank you Apa!🤗

Originally posted by: sweetkj

yeah because 'aap' se fight hoti nahi... 'tu' me cheapo ho jaata hai.. so tum!!

'tu'

whenever using desi lang.😃

Originally posted by: serialwatcher16

Congrats Mariam on the new thread.

Maan's background came as a surprise. The way you write about his insecurities as well is like a breath of fresh air.

Originally posted by: spvd

part 4
awesome part dear...
cont soon...

Originally posted by: shabnam22

nice part...

Originally posted by: kiran_rati

congrates on new thread dear

aww lovely update

i'm caught

oh no\

beautiful line

waiting for next part

cont soon dear

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

congo for new thread dear

update was awesome

maan is a fun loving guys and also a mumma's boy😆😆

so geet atlast caught him watching her