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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
updating and replying to the rest of the comments ss
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62


i havent finished replying yet ;(😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Long update kk I am too greedy ,
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Originally posted by: Nav2010

Long update kk I am too greedy ,




hehe... 😉
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'Repulsive'
Short Story
part 2

Maan walked in to his room, which looked different. His bedroom light was off and his wife was fast to sleep...
...

Geet woke up early morning and found Maan on the other side of the bed, sleeping peacefully. She quickly made her way to the bathroom and before Maan could even say a proper hello, she was out of the room. House looked resonantly empty, the decoration were still up, beautiful... Nice. She smiled and made her way downstairs, she found her mother in law, telling few servant what to do.

Geet slowly made her way, 'can I help with anything?' she respectfully asked Avantika.

'oh, you are up so early...' Avantika smiled, while brushing her hair back as a blessing.
'yea... I thought, you might need some help!'

' no-no beta. Your first day. Let me show you around the house.' Avantika walked around with Geet, showing each and everything to her, Geet was pretty happy with the huge place, it was truly beautiful. Everything were specially designed for different occasion.

'you have a very nice house!' Geet smiled.
'it's your now!' Avantika corrected. 'I hard you have to go back to London next Monday!' Geet nodes. 'I know, medicine, you are a bright girl, and I am glad I have chose you for my Maan. Specially he only have brain how to run his fathers business!'
'but that's a different talent and every person have hidden talents within them!' Geet smiled, unknowingly defending her husband, but she would say that in anyone's case.
Avantika smiled, first day of there weeding and already so defensive.

Geet later met her younger sister in law. Maans younger brother, dev's wife. It was love marriage apparently! It was nice to see that this family have open view however Avantika's attitude towards Naintara made her think again.

'Naintara, make sure you wake your husband up on time today. It's first day for Geet!'

Naintara gave one of the dirtiest look to Geet, she forcefully smile. She never in life experienced such dirty look! Let alone someone talking to her like that.

Geet walked in to her room after few hours, finding the bed empty... Little messy. She thought about cleaning the bed up, but before she could start the servant hurriedly came in and cleaned everything. Living in London she never had servant or servants, so the sight of them were making her feel little uneasy, and they were like human robots! Gosh!

Geet looked around while the room became tinkle clean, within ten minutes and empty, with her standing in the middle of the bed room. Maan walked out from bathroom, wearing only a Tracy, Geet looked at him once, he had proper 6 pack, she instantly spines her self. Biting her lower lips. 'I am sorry! Oh... I didn't realize-that!'

Maan observed her embarrassing back and hurriedly poped his top on, remembering, he is married now. & this room belongs to two of them.

He looked around than back at Geets back. Realizing, she had English accent! 'umm...- so -you-have English accent!' he looked around, wondering how to start a conversation. 'you are from England right!'



Geet nodes with her back.
'you can turn around. I am wearing cloths!'

'I have to go!' Geet tried to walk out of the long room, but Maan stopped her.
'I am Maan!... I don't even know your name!'

Geet looked back with little surprise! She wrinkled her forehead, thinking what this odd person is talking about? Should she take that as an insult. It was indeed a great start to this wedding.

Maan knew that conversation was heading towards wrong direction. 'it's traditional!-' he lifted an eye brow up... 'traditional that I only get to here my wife's name from her lips!'

Geet pulled an eye brow up, to question his weird tradition further, than calmed down, thinking, why did she say yes to this marriage?

'Geet! It's Geet-' she bit her lips for his sir name. She wasn't sure about her new sir name now. Even he probably have mentioned few minutes back or someone els...

'Khurana!' Maan corrected her.

Geet gave out a smile, before her phone started to vibrate in her hand. 'excuse me!'

Maan gently nodes, seeing a Geet disappear to there living room.

Geet took sit on the sofa, while answering her phone... 'hi..'

'where are you?' the phone screamed over in to her ear. 'for past months I had seriously no contact with you. What happen?'

Geet rubbed her head. She have been so busy that she almost have forgotten about her friends in uk.
'oh...'
'what happen? I hope your parents haven't forcefully married you off or something!'

'umm...'

'anyway, there is some early accommodation, and you have to be here by next Monday, so pack your bag, pack everything... And catch the flight for this Friday. You have to be here soon as possible, if you fancy getting decent accommodation. I seriously do not like to visit that old lady's house again. It was to clean man!'

Geet started to giggle, when Maan caught the glimpse. Geet looked at him. 'oh sorry... It's my friend!'

Maan smiled, saying its alright with his eyes and walked out for her privacy.

'who was that?' the phone spoke again.

'my hus...'




firstly thank you so much for all the lovely comments...
i only managed to reply half of you...
:) wil do the res now..
thank you thank you so much...
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Edited by FireSafireFiree - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: FireSafireFiree




A big thankyou to all the lovely comments below ;)


Edited by FireSafireFiree - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😔 Aww tat was a small part. But fantastic update. 😆 loved the introduction of maaneet on the first day aft marriage something new 😆 😆
Eagerly waitg for d next😉 plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😆 Me 1st for d first time 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Haila... Yeh Kya hain beech main Chod diya... not fair... waiting for another update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: FireSafireFiree

res for comments reply :)



lol.. yes u r fast.. and sorry... lol.. its only 18 parts long.. 16 to go.. i hope you all liking it.. and glad u found something new..
:D like that idea.. hehe😛




motivation... motivation... hehe sorry... as i divided it kinda divided in half to..😆
aww yes... one more part.. lets see ;)




A big thankyou to all the lovely comments below ;)


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