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Heartily thanks to those who read, liked and commented for me 😊

(Some flashback parts is given in Red)


Part 17


Dev who was sitting and watching everything since the time they started their conversation. He observed Maan expression while leaving his food in mid and then Geet, too left. Both faces were talking and giving something same in return, Dev noticed. He connected the events of day when he took Geet to office where Madhav did not let him met Maan and not even let stay there for a minute. "Kuch toh chal raha hai yaha!!'' his evil mind started working..

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Night At Geet room, She was not in peace since the time returned back from dinner. She was restless. The thought of her past, the painful days of hers yet most treasured moments were coming in her mind and was making her unyielding emotional. She was missing her home and the most.. her mother. "Kasi hogi Maa!!'' tears welled up in her eyes and started to come down in no time.

"Ma!!'' A 11 years old girl was calling her mother, peeking out from a grilled window of her big Haveli. She was locked inside room, had been punished by her Veerji for a smallest childish fault. She was afraid of dark night being all alone in room with no source of light from anywhere. "Maa!!!'' her meek voice again called out..

"Geet..I'm here Beta'' Her mother was stood outside of window, giving her voice to make her daughter feel of her warmth. "Beta tu ghabra mat.. mai hu yaha!!''

"Maa but I can't sleep. It's very dark inside. Mujhe akele dar lagta hai!!'' a innocent child's teary voice made a mother heart wrenched in pain. Rano composed herself. She wanted to run inside and hug her Geet but door was locked and key was with daarji.

"Geet do one thing Beta. You bring your bed here, below this window and sleep. I'll be here, outside of window. You'll not feel fear.. thik hai!!''

"you promise na Maa you'll not go from there?''

"Yes Geet pakka wala promise Beta.. I'll be here whole night, stand near this window. Now you do what I said and sleep Beta''

Geet did what her mother said and in next moment she slept, imagining her mother is there, across of wall to protect her from any night evil. Did not know that how her mother legs were paining feeling the cold bricked floor of a big Haveli.. And Rano winced "Ahh!!''


"Maa!!!!'' Geet woke up calling her mother name from her sudden sleep. She looked around where she was and found in same room of Mansion. She clutched her heart to make herself calm as she had dream of her mother. When she slept while thinking about her Geet did not know. But now her heart became more restless for her Mother. She was feeling a strange anxiety like something was wrong.. Something very bad had happened. Her hand started to shake in fear and begun sweating. She wanted to have someone hers close. She stood up and opened door. Looked out, it was dark with none presence there in hall. She with slow step comes to Dadi room and entered. Dadi was sleeping peacefully. Geet stood there for sometime thinking what to do and then took her seat on sofa, kept at corner of the room. The presence of an elder lady closer gave her little relaxation and she laid down closing her eyes slowly and got lost in sleep very soon.


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Maan came back in his room from dinner with heavy heart which had mellowing emotions for Geet. He could not sleep on bed but was stood near window to grab some fresh air in his lungs so that could breathe normally. Still he could see her dull face with grief written all over it. His heart filled up and in reflex his eyes became shut. In darkness of his soul again her face appeared but clad in her red bridal dress. "I-I'm Geet..'' The very first words from her lips had come out when he saw her after their marriage in room. She was scared, she was shaking in fear. His heart did not like it. It wanted to return her, her days back which she would have dreamed about. A happy life with a soul partner with her beside.



"I'll give her all happiness which she would have ever dreamed of. I'll give her, her life back which she had lost.. I will'' Maan self talked like this voice came out from his heart naturally. But this goal made him feel better. He felt revealed. With light mood and slight step he went back to Geet room, being sure that no one is watching him. Slowly he opened door and came inside to see, if she okay! But there was no one.. it was empty. He panicked. "Geet where're you''.. though he knew there was no need of being worried but yet, pervious experience was still fresh in his heart and it made him tensed. After giving a detail search in room he came to hall but still she could not be found. Maan became restless thinking where she gone at this late night. "per wo kahi jaayegi kyu!'' he debated.


While searching in whole floor he was passing from dadi room when found something on sofa in dim darkness. He went closer, bend down and recognized.. it was she!! It was Geet!! '' his heart danced in joy. He wanted to match his steps with it too but held back.

Geet was not comfortable on sofa, stirring now and then. Maan lifted her in his arm and started to leave. Geet snuggled more closely to him finding the same warmth which she was carving just few hours before. She clutched his collar in sleep, unknowingly as feared, someone will snatch it from her again. Maan looked her hand and then her face which had peace and a small smile; likewise she was playing in her dreamland, freely. He felt same peace in his heart. With some slow steps he brought her back in her room and settled on bed. She stirred, like did not want to leave previous comfortable place which was his arms. Maan covered blanket over her, making her feel warm and tried to stand up but found, she had not left his collar. He sat beside and softly slipped her hand from his shirt. She cuddled snugly in bed sleeping again quietly. Maan bend down and kissed her head with tender love, caressed her face with his warm hand. He was loving to see her relax. Her curved eyes were moving left n right that means she was having dreams. Maan became very curious to know whom she is watching in her dream! .. he guessed "shayad mai!!'' he giggled quietly on his own thought. " Maan tu pagal ho gaya hai!!'' he chided himself. The time passed but he dint want to leave her and go. It was best time for him which he was living in. But could not sit there for more and so with heavy heart he stood up and left.. closing door carefully and returned back to his room..


Precap : "What're you doing here Geet. chup chup ke ghar ki baante sun rahi ho !!'' Dev shouts while looking her strangely ..


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sona-rai

kal ki DELICIOUS spamming ka PHAL aaj mil raha hai...

hi sona😊
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me fist aftr so many dys🥳

hyee geet in maans arms ,yeh dono to going on fast speed ,bt i lov it😳,again lovely updt mona bt yeh dev kya karega😡
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Originally posted by: sona-rai

kal ki DELICIOUS spamming ka PHAL aaj mil raha hai...

Dekhaa mai sudhar gayi na 😆😆😆

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