MG~SS~ SAAWARIYA link to thread 2 pg/1 - Page 9

Created

Last reply

Replies

657

Views

120.7k

Users

164

Likes

3.1k

Frequent Posters

dreamyharika thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
#81
updating sachi muchi mein 😆
zaidi98 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Finalllyyy harikaaa madam updatng...
😛😛😛
dreamyharika thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: zaidi98

Finalllyyy harikaaa madam updatng...

😛😛😛



tu hai kaha?
dreamyharika thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
#84
sheetalvasa, swati2011, mishtikhurana, maaneet05, shruti_rai, parig123, gayathripriyank, mkd.70, TheSunShine, PoorvaArora, sonya2012, Sarah08, varu, nadia-arshad, rojalotus3, mitali10, rockingmishti, FARZANAQAZI, MISHAGOYAL, giaa5678, cutestarz, kabslocks, divyaraghani, sanj1905, PoonamT, ns.1, pixelflower620, Nihson, itzzdmg, thendral_111, saji-21, pamil, cutestar12, zaidi98, preet.harman, mansiahmed, gawjusangel, ...RIDDHIMA..., niki02, 01aaradhya, nishnal, preeti555, Parimishty, silent_whispers, metromasti, aashi14, dhakdhak22, zariya123, snehapriya, pari1689, anmirza, ar_art, vandana73, payal12, .lovemaaneet., KasiKasi, kingofme, gbhat, sridevi_n, d_sonia, keerthi90, mansi.tripathi, NH1971, Nav2010, shabnam22, amita5, fatema_007, anjalisen85, pingu.tingu, CrystalSaya, sree.maneet, -eiya-, ambeern, untamedtigress, ushankitvc, fantesy, nehakapoor7, love4all, masaf57, jssood, Angel-33, lovebapu18, kareena32, preeti.1, memyselfndI, harshithaaa, dreamymishti88, AIMAMSK, sweetsampa39, lenageorge, rsusmita, shri12, ManeetGurtiMG, trishadcute, valli30, lehr, tiakashyap, Sheen-Coolkiwi, Desigirls12, maaneetmaahi, lil.mizz.smexii, priyadarshini64, _AngelSonu_, gill123, impoojaverma, KINGKHANFAN, _MGArti_, --Ratna--, mandy15, Ash1991, maanmeet1, freya123, shruthiR, anjucool, smallville, kiran_rati, love2_soma, monika1992, Luv_Drashti, 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6, honeygrape, ammu5, Thesaurus, Remya_Pillai, Tyro, yoga23priya, zaara2212, -padma-, sdlife19, janu_2006, khwaishfan, -afsha-, prerna1, nahtani88, shah10, flowers4u, mitzi11, sona-rai, Sonia.KN, seemamary, meena.., MonaLovesMaan, Sri_Radha, punam2712, chavvi16, -AnushaGurtian-, dolly10, abinash079, yappingduck, PrithviSanyo1, --Neelam--, spvd, goldenmoon, Ru_21,
THANKS SO MUCH GIRLS😳
Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
dreamyharika thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
#85


PART 1:



Hey Mitti Pe Kheenchi Lakeerein Rab Ne
To Ye Tasveer Bani
Aag Hava Pani Ko Milaya
To Phir Ye Tasveer Saji
Hey Hasti Teri Dishaal
Kudrat Ka Tu Kamaal
Hey Man Mohini Teri Ada
Tujhe Jab Dekhle To Phir Ghata


She ran in the middle of the field, her hair tied into a plat which went beyond the waist. Her long hair made her look even more bewitching.


Barse Jhar Jhar Jhar Jhar Sarar Sarar Sarar
Naache Chamak Chamak Vo
Bijli Deewani
Hai Bemisaal Tu
Kori Kori Anchhui
Tujh Mein Hai Kudrat Saari Khoyi
Tujh Mein Hai Kudrat Saari Khoyi Khoyi
Tujh Mein Hai Kudrat Saari Khoyi Khoyi
Tat ta..


The red color ghagra choli she wore fitted so perfectly to her curves. The ghagra rested happily as her waistband danced along with geet's feet, the boys threw the ball to her and she gracefully caught it and tossed it on the series of seven pebbles making them fall all at once with attitude oozing out her eyes.


Mitti Ki Hai Moorat Teri
Masoomiyat Fitrat Teri
Ye Saadapan
Ye Bholapan
Tu Mehki Mehki
Tu Lehki Lehki
Tu Chali Chali
Har Gali Gali


The two teams separated completely into two portions, as geet was the one who started it she ran saving herself from the ball that the opponent team member aimed at her.


Tu Hava Ke Ghan Sang Sanana San
Tera Ang Ang
Jaise Jaltarang
Koi Leher Leher
Chali Teir Teir
Paani Ka Mel


Rajji caught the pebble and placed it in the centre, then followed the rearranging the pebbles in a stack.


Tere Tan Badan Jhar Jharar Jharar
Angaarey Jaisa
Tera Rom Rom Hai Dehka Dehka
Agni Ka Khel
Tu Agan Agan
Takir takir


But in no time the ball hit all the girls and they were out of the game, geet was surrounded by the boys while she escaped and fell down.


Zara Dhirak Dhirak Zara Lachak Lachak
Kabhi Matak Matak Kabhi Thumak Thumak
Khali Jhoom Jhoom Kabhi Ghoom Ghoom
Dharti Ko Choom Mach Dhoom Dhoom
Chanchal Badi Tu Natkhat Badi
Dehki Bahaar Ras Ki Fuhaar
Tere Teekhe Nain Tere Keshe Rain
Ye Balkhana Ye Itrana
Tat tat


She crawled to reach to the middle and placed the seventh pebble on the top to win the game!! Rajji rushed to hug her di who got up clearing the mud from her body... Thank you di, thank you thank you she said with excitement.


*******


Rano fumed seeing geet and rajji all dirty with their clothes. It was routine for rajji but geet?? Rano least expected her daughter to go out and play sitolia and then her sight fell on geet's waist which was red with rashes. And then the waistband which broke it was her favorite one ever but geet did not even feel bad for it. All she bothered about was rajji, she can do anything for her little sister. Rano did not say anything knowing geet had done all that for her baby sister.


Later at night geet sat down my the window looking at the dark sky thinking about the engagement the very next day. Everything was happening so sudden first her marriage being fixed and the next day her family decided that she will get engaged, not that she had a problem but that she feared that life will change her priorities. Her papaji!! Whom she loves beyond everything, who loves her beyond everyone, then the name GEET KRISHNA will change into geet... what?? How much she loves her name!! Whenever someone pronounces her name completely she feels so good to hear that Geet krishna mohinder!! She smiled closing her eyes as an unknown sensation came back to her when her father said "woh tujhe bohut khush rakhega gudiya meri baat maan!! He will be your honour, your pride!! Apni jindagi dedega tumhare liye!!" Her life was her papaji's till now.... Pagli aur ab?? She rested her head against the window to look down at the street where the baraat was going with the bridegroom on the horse.


Ek din tujhe bhi lejaane aise hi aayega tera hone waala woh... Rano smiled and sat beside geet to feed the food... Aise mujhe kaun khilayega mama?? She asked innocently, while her mother smiled, iska jawab main doon kya geet?? Geet looked away hiding her shy self.



Geet placed her head in her mother's lap as rano ran her hand on her back patting her lovingly after she finished her dinner... geet beta aaj toh gayi rajji ke liye phir kabhi mat jaa aise tu bade ghar ki bahu banne jaa rahi hai, you don't even know how rich they are. Yeh sab waha nahi chalega, tu gauri ko bhi dur rakh rano said fearing that geet wont be able to separate her knowing the love she has for the lamb. Geet did not reply, her eyes filled with tears understanding her mother's feelings too and she has to leave everyone and settle with someone who is a stranger to her but she trusts her parents who mean the world to her. She got up to hug her mother as if she was going to loose her..... mama kuch samajh nahi aaraha hai ek taraf acha lagta hai aur ek taraf aap logon se dur jaane ka darr. Papaji mere bina kaise rahenge?? Unke bina main kaise rahongi??


Pagli ek na ek din toh tujhe jaana hi padega na , ladkiyon ki jindagi aise hi hota hai humne toh sirf tujhe tumhare sawariya ke liye hi ladki banaya tha. Woh sawariya jo aage chalke saathi banega. You are destinated for him, bus kar yeh rona dhona yeh dekh teri saree hai kal ke liye, rano took out the red saree along with some jewellary!!


Mama please mujhe sona hai aap jayiye geet fell back on the bed faking sleep, rano smiled at her pagli who was trying hard to hide the blush which was coming out... mere jaane ke baad dekhlena she said kissing geet's forehead.


Geet placed the saree on her head ... "woh tujhe bohut khush rakhega gudiya meri baat maan!! He will be your honour, your pride!! Apni jindagi dedega tumhare liye!!" She looked at the envelope with maan's pic on the table resisting herself from opening it.


Woh tumhari jindagi mein geet banke aayegi maan, she will give you the most melodious moments of life jisse tum hamesha bhagte ho, naitara caressed maan's head who stood by the window staring at the dark sky. His life was pleasant ever since he was born but when his mother and father died, dev-tara brought him up like parents. He was the reason for the late birth of ayan, they have loved maan more than anything... Aapse bhi jyada pyar karegi mujhse?? He teasingly asked tara... jindagi dedegi tumhare liye kaafi nahi hai?? She retorted and left ,for god knows how long he stood that way stopping himself from looking at the envelope with the picture of geet.


The next morning,

Dadima!! Maan yelled again looking for the clothes in his wordrobe, it was getting late and his clothes were not in an order to choose for. Dadima handed maan with his shirt and waistcoat... thanks dadima he said making way towards the washroom to change... dadima nahi maan ab aapki hone wali woh ka naam yaad karlijiye jiska naam bhi aapne jaanne se mana kardiya, maan smiled feeling shy at his dadima's teasing words. Dadima immediately got some other clothes and placed them on the bed..... ab hum dekhte hai aap aaj ke din office kaise jaate hai you will have to stay back there for the whole day maan adha din nahi poora, she smirked.


*******


Papaji aap hamesha aise hi karte ho bhajan ke liye aise koi jaata hai kya?? You forgot your shawl, geet ran behind her papaji to cover him with the shawl, while mohinder smiled at his daughter.... Ab papaji nahi geet tumhare hone wale pati ka naam jaanlo kyunki iske baad yeh sab kaam tumhe uske liye karna padega he said while geet blushed crimson red ... Rano isse tayyar karo abhi bhi ready nahi hui main bus mandir se 10 min mein aajaonga


*******


Maan came back to check on the clothes his dadima got for him... Yeh dadima bhi na he whispered to himself setting his mind to do what his dadima would ask him for.


Hayo rabba meri beti ko kisi ki nazar naa lage rano put the kala tika on geet's earlobe as she stood watching herself in the mirror with the saree... Di yeh lo your waistband rajji gave it to geet while she covered her bare stomach with the pallo getting alert with its exposal. God these new feelings were making her even more scared, the feeling of being observed.


i guess you all might be thinking this story will be very slow NO!!! thoda naughty bhi hona chahiye na thats my forte at the end


dont have any estimation of likes tum logon ne likes dena band kar diya as its ok i dont deserve them too ill still do my work for my honest readers love you all

PREVIOUS PART:

PROLOGUE

NEXT PART:
PART 2

Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
tanvinangia thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#86
😆res

*EDITED*

me first...

yipppeee...🥳🥳

dil jumping japak jumpak jumapk
thumping thapak thumpak thumapak
gilli gilli aaa...🤣

Superb start...👏

it was like m watching a movie in which ACTRESS is being introduced in full filmy and desi style...🤣🤣

Awww...inn dono ne ek dusre ka naam b nahi pooch aur photo b nahi dekhi...😳😳

jaldi se dekh le toh acha hai warna ek dusre ko dekh k faint ho jayenge..😉

(hotness and beauty personified u knw 😉😆)

Maan is brought up by DevTara 😊😛

Maan yelling 4 his dadima and here Geet is used to be pampered by her parents..😃❤️

now both will take care of each other...

engagement k liye wait nahi hoing...😭😭

and moreover u didnt gave precap 😡

waiting 4 next update eagrly...

jaldi se update dediyooo😃😃😃 warnaaa...😡

"SILENT TREATMENT MILEGA" 🤣🤣

And last but not the least as u said Naughtiness b hogi story mei..i m wondering How much Naughty MSK will get ☺️😉😳

waise toh MSK Calm , sweet and caring lagg raha hai baaki dekhte hain😉😉 😆😆

and GEET is shy types hainaaa...????😳

Love you...❤️❤️

*pappiz & jhappiz*🤗🤗


Edited by tanvinangia - 12 years ago
sona-rai thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#87
waitinggg
awesome update yar...
another amazing new story by harika 😆muahhh loved it a lot😃
Edited by sona-rai - 12 years ago
zaidi98 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#88
mjheee 1st comment krna tha...
kitnaa w8 kr thii thii maii...😭😭
koiii baat nhii will try next tym.. agr stupid luck ne sath diya tu...😡😛
amazing cutee sweet strt...
love geet entry...
da song..
love each n every geet pov ... n totally agree.. y y girls has 2 leave dere home...😭
maan .. haayyee...😳😉 1st intro se laging sweet clam MSK haii.. w8ng 4 detail enrty of maan...😳
jaldii jaldii update krna...😉😉
Edited by zaidi98 - 12 years ago
lovesia thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#89
~~edited~~

i love it didu
u r too good
love u
geet is a simple innocent full of life type girl nd can do anything for he love ones
but at the other hand she is little bit scared of making new relation
nd maan woh issme sweet caring boy hai
he lost his parents when he was young but dev-naina brought up him as their own child
love dadi teasing nd maan shying
haayee mera maan sharmata bhi mainu toh pata hi nahi tha
waiting for maaneet meeting
apne precap nahi diya
Edited by lovesia - 12 years ago
sdlife19 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 12 years ago
#90
a sweet start with perfect emotions

they say tat marriage changes a everything and here geet is feeling the same

maan he to is in the same boat

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

11 years ago

Priya Fan fiction - Update thread /pg 120-27 july

hello friends... am not able do pm regularly... so please my all friend follow this thread... i post the link here... so you get link easily of

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

2 years ago

thread #2 Kuch Rang pyaar ke ase bhi/pt21/22/23 -pg31/33/34- 28 may

Concept This is story about two strangers which tied in sacred bond and one partner fall in love with another at first sight. Two individuals...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m

3 years ago

Maaneet New SS - Dillagi Thread 2 -Part 88 Page 49- 27/5/25

Dillagi Dil ki Lagi Jab Dil kho jata hai kisi aise mein Jo apna na hoke pe apna sa lagge. Jiski ek jhalak ke leye yeh nighein tarpati rahe Or...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m

3 years ago

Maaneet New SS -Dosti ya Pyaar Thread 2-Part 62 page 40 24/6/25

Prologue Zindagi ke kuch faisle hum lete hai or kuch yeh zindagi humse karvati hai.. kabhi hass ke to kabhi is dil pe pathar rakh kar!! but is...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

2 years ago

The Devil in the Dark Thread 2||Chapter 70 pg 24 Updated 26/01

As mentioned in the notes in the other FF threads that I had created the other ID at a time when I wanted to be anonymous and avoid raising...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".