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Posted: 12 years ago

#431

muskan i love all ur ff and so far it look like this is my favourite...

After reading last two updates I was almost in tears... look's like maan always took geet for granted and her silence as yes hope he realize his mistake sooner than later...

I feel so sorry for geet and some where feel it's her fault too why didn't she took the stand before why didn't she ever fought for her rights as a wife.

One more thing puzzel My mind will she ever be able to forgive maan for making her abort the pregnancy twice, or not standing up for her ever..

Pls do update the next part soon

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maanshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#432

superb👏👏👏update
maan is still same ... nothing changed in him ... ya he is thinking about everything now but not changed
please knock some sense in him

but this is much better situation from earlier

hope maan realize his mistake soon n most imp accept it

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valli30

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Posted: 12 years ago

#433

awesome update.

hope maan realizes his mistake.

poor geet

continue soon

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Ambibamby

@Ambibamby

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Posted: 12 years ago

#434

AMAZING UPDATE. i think he will come to realize his faults

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azaina

@azaina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#435

di very emmotional

i m literally crying reading dis ff

but awesome as usual

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Leenu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#436

plz geet why can't u just say u r feelings to maan plz say

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gem1606

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Posted: 12 years ago

#437

Pls continue soon. want to know rest of the story.

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640638

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Posted: 12 years ago

#438

First of all the poetry by both the writers was beautiful and perfect for this part.

This is rapidly becoming one of my fav stories by you Muskan. Of course puchki will always have his place for me but this story is totally totally so engrossing and at the same time intuitive. The typical male mentality, the inattentiveness and then the surprise when the marraige does not work captured very well.The female nature to suppress all hurts, to not speak or fight, something society has beaten into submission in some women leaving the only recourse of divorce.Looking forward to more soon.Thanks for updating.Love to bacha party...🤗🤗

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ninand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#439

wow.. super! Not only was Maan's restlessness and his over confidence on display in how he thought a single meeting and he'd lecture his errant wife back into his life, the incidents are triggering memories of moments he hadn't thought about even once ! memories of what might be perceived as his error in judgement- like the phone case..

The way he suddenly wondered with an ache why she hadn't responded back then, even when they were alone..

And the coffee shop gaffe.. yeh! so he smugly thought they must have done at least this together..wow!

These small indicators, him not knowing she doesn't drink coffee, that she doesn't want his help etc , I am just waiting for them to pile up and sink the ground from beneath his feet.

the counselor's questions were perfect Muskan.. so were his answers, so befitting a stereotypical smug-chauvinistic indian husband(yes some of us are lucky thank god! but i m talking about the mindset that's prevalent in rural and other conservative households. No big city or community is exempt from this.)

I am so , so damn eager for the next part! my heart breaks for her in new ways every time.. i hope she keeps being brave..

Love to the munchkins and their mommy:)

Edited by ninand - 12 years ago