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Posted: 12 years ago

Maan Tunnel Vision!


It sometimes seems all so simple

You make assumptions and act by them

You make them your truths

And stand by them day and night

You easily assume what others say

While making someone's life hell!

Where does it take you?

Nowhere! Nowhere at all!



Geet's heart's complaints!


You never bothered for even a moment

To take a second, to stop and to think

You never bothered for even a moment

To see life from within my shoes

My wishful thoughts are all that has ever reminded

Lying so deep within my heart and soul

It was so easy for you to assume others around you

And so hard to see what was in front of you

You only lived life the way you wanted to live

Without caring for me and my needs

You thought you were doing the best for me and all

Yet it was only what you could see through your own all

You come here today in front of me

Showing your anger and acting as if you care

I am not prepared to see you and face you like this

Because in the end it hurts me and only me

Everywhere!

Edited by Water. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
maan ab to samgh jaoo...my geet ... 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally done with it

what to say?

just that I will be waiting eagerly for the next update


Happy Makar Sakranti
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan still thinks that she has some guy in her life? 1 baar clear to kar liya hota?
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Posted: 12 years ago
HAPPY PONGAL TO YOU TOO
lovely part
waiting for the next part
change12 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan is just maan still thinks geet might have affair with someone who left her not... Though gld to c that he still cares about geet and is slowly realizing it
I think meera felt maaneet just need the way to converse that's why she aske judge for concealing.
Wonderful update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ufff maan ki kashmakash
whn it is going to end...
But this geet ie also arghhh..
Btw happy makarsankranti...
Enjoy...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update. I just loved the old lady who has closed the door on maan's face saying her parents left like u did. But again Maan beliving his mom's word about other guy and thinking he must have fooled geet. when will maan come to know that there is no other guy in geet's life.
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Posted: 12 years ago
ok dear
this time ,i want to write something more from maan point of view
as we all say

buddu,bevkoof jaisa bhi hai,par pyaara hai
aur hum sabko jaan se pyaara hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
poem

i will try from my heart to write just few lines
and stop
before it become essay😆
sacchi😉


jo chaha tha is dil ne
woh dua qubool hui
mein maanta hu ,
kahi na kahi hai mujhe se bhi ,
kuch bhul hui,par

aaj jab unnse mulkaat hui
bin kuch pucche,
bin kuch sunne bhi ,
hai kuch baat to zarur hui

usske har sahme kadam ne ,
sharm se jhuki nazar ne ,
khud ko sabse alag paaker ,
sahme se badan ne ,
mujhse hai kaha ,
ki woh bhi waha,utni hi hai tanha
jitna mein hu yaha

mein har pal ab ,
bas usse dekhta hi raha
kitna tha ,usse yaad kiya
yeh socha ta hi raha
ek usske samne aate hi ,
jag tham sa gaya
aur ,
aaj ussko yu , maayus saa ,
murjhai sa ,
khud mein hi simthi sa ,
dekh kar ,
mera bhi saans lena tham sa gaya

jab woh mud kar jaane thi lagi
usska mudna bhi ,
mujhe maar sa gaya ,
rokna hai usse ,
yeh mera dil,mere bin kahe
jaan bhi hai gaya

jab chua usse toh ,kuch hua mujhe
janmo ke pyaase ko jaise
amrit chue
woh saath thi ,toh alag har baat thi
usse alag hokar hai jaana,
oh pyaar ki barsaat thi

aur ab
usse alag ho kar jeeya
toh har pal lagaa ,
mujhe me thi laagi aag thi





Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago

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