MG FF-Winter Sonata-Thread3 - Page 6

rahul is a 🤬..Hope Geet lets go of the nervousness...and react soon..

superb update
and yes tat dargah scene it even my fav it shows the purity of love

grrr this rahul and i thank god tat i dnt work in such envt dear

I am loving this story.

plz maan ko wapis le aao

congrats on the new thread di...
may u hve many more...
am resing this post for my comment
a little disturbed ryt now..
so i will read later...
resing this place
btw the song u used is one of my favs...
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pheww...finally i read it...
and the entire dargah part...u actually made me speechless diii
just tooo beautifully written..his inner turmoils..and the song is one of my favs...
it gives u the real feel of the dargah/...but what caught my attention was this...

"He wondered why it always felt that God and Love were one and the same thing. Pure Love in any form is as ethereal and as reverent as the Lord himself. Maybe because that was the biggest gift he bestowed upon this earth – an emotion called Love. A mother's love for her child, a brother's love for his kin, a friend's love when they sacrifice their own dreams for a friend of their own….love between two souls uniting them into one…. "

only love has the power to change a stone into gold...and this was written sooo beautifully..how god loves all his children...aur kaise unhone duiya ke kne kone mein pyaar basaya hain...

and yes...the baba talk..seriously diii... hats off to you...u r sooo gud with words..emotions...i read and re read the entire thing and aisa laga bhi nahi ke ye aise hi kisi ne likha hain... it felt like koi expert ne likha hain...so beautifulll...

"Unse kya chupa…unhein kya batayein…mere har zare ka unhein pata hai….jo mujhe bhi nahi pata…woh tumhein hai pata"

Jise dhundati hai teri ruh, use tujhse milna hi hai

Khuda ki rehmat hai, usne brsayi hai toh tujhe bheegna hi hai"

Nazron se nahi, dil se chu use

Dil mein nahi, khud mein sama le use"

Yeh mat soch ki yeh rehmat hai ki teri kismet

Us khuda ka pyaar hai, woh dene ko deta hai…tu bas samet...bas samet"

ohh and the lines.. "bas samet..bas samet...' its strikes directly on ur heart diii
ohh am a bigger fan of urs now...i have so many things to say..but cant form words...
i loved this update sooo muchhh...

and rahul...🤬🤬
mood acha hain coz i am blown away by ur poem isiliye aaj tho kismat achi hain kamine ki!!!!

and am soo waiting for the next
continue super soon

Awesome

Loved the way you r taking the story

P.s. As I'm reading from phone not able to press like button

congrats for the new thread👏
Darga scene n the song was too good 😊
maan wants to give sometime to himself
this rahul😡

congrats on yr new thread... nice update