Ok so let me start now
Have a long list f complains and pressures for you
Stay tuned on to bear the pain to read me now
Starting from OS's of yours
-Tana Bana-
It was something I know close to you. And the persons who inspired you to write that I love them more than you! Winky! So yes this was flawlessly cute and adorable. A new way to show the readers, how a person feels when responsibilities and love come hand in hand.
-Hierarchy of Love-
Hate persons like Dev, but alas what we can do the society here do have such people and also they are born just because of the drawbacks our society have in them, something different yet close to reality, unfortunately we cannot do anything to change mentality of people. But really an impeccable work of yours
-Blessed to Have You-
It was really cute, sweet, lovely, attractive, endearing and what not, was highly delighted to read it and the way you expressed Maan's feelings with Geet's personified cuteness was something which took my heart away
-The Peppy Love-
It was oh-my-god! Actually telling why the hell you are SO VERY MUCH ADDICTED TO YOUR DEAR FACEBOOK. I mean it was too appeling they way you express everything how the teenage crush felt like, hoe they met on FB after long time and shared their first talk and then the date and then when Geet finally made him admit, actually confessed his feelings on behalf of him. LoLz
-A Day for You-
O Ma Ma Mia...it was lovely I wonder how Tich di might have reacted in real after reading it, I mean Paresh Raval, that is why she calls you devil right 😉 you deserve it anyways 😛
-Elated Adoration-
I have no words, I dint knew what the real people might have felt, I am a little small to say anything on that but yaa the person who have witnessed and lived it, her stories still make me shiver. You beautiful di and trust me the day she read it she will be more than happy to read it and that to by you.
-Ek Pal-
It was heart wrenchingly faultless, the way you expressed everything, they way you express how people react, how people make the already shattered life a more burden, and more how even the well known people draw their feet back when needed. It was perfectly beautiful to read but was painful to feel that. Really hats of for this OS di you flawless.
Now coming to completed works
-Maahi-
I don't know about anyone or any other person but yup I can personally say I loved the end, to die in your lover's arms and that to be with your lover till eternity is something worth it. I just loved it, and specially the tag, wafai kar gaye! Indeed when in love you are ready to bow your integrity down in front of the one you love the most. Just to keep him/her safe. Love you di for that work of yours.
-Life for You-
It was one of the work which actually made me cry the way you expressed the feelings of Geet and the similarly when he had to go through the same how emotionally and physically torn away he felt. It was just flawlessly amazing. I do think for a writer the best feedback for a throbbing ache in any chapter of his/her work could be the tears of the reader and trust me di you did gained a lot while I read it.
-it'tefaqiana Ishq-
Aowww! Di that was staggering, it was something full of shocks, surprises, confounding, confusing, overwhelming and as well as emotional. It was all just hard to believe yet many of us do live it. It was damn cute and loveable. The way he waited for his special someone and that to when he always had her. And the most loving was the end where she catches him on airport was ohh so good!
And the ongoing ones
-Heart of Heart-
It is one of those works which have the capability to make any sane or insane person adore a work which is so cute yet so warming. The way you expresses Geet's love and longing for him even without knowing will it end any day or not, is just perfect! I actually love this character of Geet even more than the real Geet Handa of Geet-HSP! I have no words which would be compatible for this
-Devil's Den-
Oo la la...! I love devils and this is a mysterious devil to be known by any unknown person. Indeed the negative personalities attract us and that is what happens every time I read your devil. Hush di don't regret writing this if your sister ever fall for a devil ever in her life now. It is done by you and only you, none else.
-Break Away-
It is actually difficult to break free yourself from the barriers of love and adoration of any person, and that to when it is the more cherished and the treasured person of yours so yes the escape becomes suicidal and that is what you expressing here. Geet has suffered a lot and the pain of everything so painful is just beautifully written with all your heart.
And finally the future tracks
-Parindey-
I AM DESPERATELY WAITING FOR THIS TO COME...!!! I am in love with the poem and that to the royal characterization of The Maan Singh Khurana with his ever so charming princess Handa...o mumma...!! I am already falling for it 😉
Finally in the nut shall I guess it is crystal clear why and how I fall for each and every work of yours, you making me love with your works more and more and more!!!!!!!
keep rocking and also
please update soon
I know you busy to come here 😉 but even than can we have some occasional updates please...!!!
Edited by Lavish_Liz - 12 years ago
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