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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats On Da New Thread !!

Awesome Update !! :) !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update
So dadima found out Geets plan.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 64
awesome part...
my God Vicky is really too much...
cutie pie...
whats his age?
he has been clinging to Maan for the whole day...
is he that short in height?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i love vicky yar.maan ko manake pura khosis kia.lekin MSK ko mana itna asan nahi hya.😆...poor vicky phas gaya...finally dadi went to invite maan.dekhte hay agay kya hota hay
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Posted: 12 years ago
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👍🏼 awesome...love vicky!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats on the new thread. Superb updates for Chapters 63 and 64. Love the way both were written. Looking foward to your next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Still 🤣
Imagine Vicky holding maan's leg den neck god...it's hilarious...hope he comes...he must knw dat geet wants him to b der...dadi is too gud...

Pls help dem to solve d prob...I knw his crime is not forgivable bt geet needs him...

Pls updt soon
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Anyone up for an update today????????😆😉
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yes ,plzz update both fanfic CL AND OW.
WAITING
Update soon
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Chapter 65

I can't believe I am surrounded by such wonderful people. I got the best Dadima in the world, it is as if am her blood. She takes good care of me, makes sure I am comfortable and get everything my daughter and I desire.

Vicky, that kid who is so attached to me. God, I love that kid. He makes me smile with his cute antics I am trying my best to give him the love that he craved for. The love that he never got. He is my pride and joy.

My dad, whom I had lost, was finally here with me. He completed the one thing that was missing from my life. It is so weird how everything works, world really can be really small.

If I hadn't met Yash or Meera than I would not have my father with me. Meera is like my sister and Yash my crazy brother-in-law, everything was perfect except for one thing, Maan.

The surprise, that Dadima was talking about was here. Yash and Meera. They had came here to see me and Anamika. I know they felt guilty for not coming earlier but I can't blame them. I know they mean well. Anamika has gotten so close to Yash. He keeps making funny faces while Vicky would join him. He could be such a man child when he wants to be. I smiled as Meera tried to push Yash out of the way so she can see the baby or even hold the baby but Yash won't allow her.

"its okay. I will catch up with Geet until then."

She slouches on the bed next to me holding my hand. I smiled at her. My foot was all better now. I could finally walk but still had to make sure not to put too much pressure on it. I still wonder if Maan watches us through his cameras. Is he there right now, watching?

"Geet we will talk later at night about everything, okay?"

I nodded. I was really glad that she was here. I needed to know what I was thinking or might be feeling is crazy or true. Am I going crazy? could it be crazy to think like this about Maan?

Meera joined in with Yash taking turns holding her. Dadima and my dad had gone downstairs to do some preparations. I wanted to get up and look out the window but knew everyone would yell at me for even moving an inch until my leg is fully recovered. I made myself comfortable before dozing off.
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My heart ached to see Geet and Anamika through the cameras. My hands reached for the remote but couldn't turn on the monitors. No. Its not right. Since I have decided to stay away than I can't see Geet anymore. I can't. Maybe lying to her about London wasn't a bad idea. It will do good if I move away from her and from everyone for a while. Yeah.

Adi was already make some arrangements for me. I had to go away. I had to move away before i do something crazy. She is so close to me and everyday is like living in hell.

What about the ceremony then? Should I go?
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I was happy to see that Geet is smiling again seeing Yash and Meera. All are so fond of each other. Meera and Yash were there for her when she was all alone. Both are such wonderful human beings. Vicky was chirping again like a little boy should behave and its all thanks to Geet.

There is still one thing that still bothers me. Why did she want Maan to come? Why did she hide it from me and everyone? I wanted to ask her but now it is not the right time. I will wait and see what happens during the ceremony. I don't know if Mana will come but I just hope he does. I need to get answers to my questions, only they can answer my question.

Vicky, tugged on my leg bringing me out of my thoughts.

"Dadima, why can't bhai eat dinner with us? He is always eating alone at the outhouse." (Now, how do I explain to a boy his age what is going on. How do I break to him gently the pain his brother caused us because of his anger and obsession?)

"Beta he is always busy that's why. Your bhai prefers to eat whenever he has time."

"Do you think he would be free right now? I will go invite him for dinner. We are having so much fun here."

I wanted to stop Vicky but knowing there is no hope. He won't change his mind, he is as stubborn as Maan. Goes in the blood of Khurana's. I looked back at Yash and Meera shocked faces. They heard everything. Of course, they would be shocked seeing the bond between the brothers.

I smiled at them and called them downstairs for dinner while I let Geet sleep. i know they had many questions but only Geet can answer them.

"Dadima, I will go check on Vicky. I don't want him to get hurt" (Yash said while going toward the door)

"Its okay Yash. No need. Maan and Vicky share a great bond with each other now. Maan won't hurt Vicky. You guys have a lot of catching up to do. Am sure Geet will answer your questions. For now, lets eat."

"Dadima, I would like to see what you said is really true. i can't eat knowing Vicky could be in danger. Please if you don't mind, I would like to see it for myself."

"okay. I understand. You may go Yash."
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I can't believe what I just heard. Vicky going to Maan? Since when have they improved so well with one another? Last time, Vicky was scared of Maan's presence. His voice was enough to make him shiver in fear. Now, all of that has been forgotten? Is that even possible?

Luckily, the outhouse door was open. It made it easier for me to listen to their conversation. I stood at the door trying very hard not to make any noise. I just had to be sure that little boy was going to be safe.

"bhai how come you live here and not with us in the big mansion? You know we have so many empty rooms. You could even stay in my room. We could have sleep over parties every night but we won't tell Di okay. Or else she will get mad."

I smiled listening to Vicky talking. I slowly peeked in and saw the most shocking thing in my life. Vicky was sitting on Maan's lap while Maan slowly fed him every time he stopped talking. Poor Vicky didn't even notice what Maan was doing. I wanted to laugh. I rubbed my eyes trying to make sure what I am seeing is true. Is this the same Maan?

"Vicky, you know that I am always busy right? I come and go out of the house so many times. That is why I am staying here. It will be easier for me to come and go without disturbing anyone especially your Di. You know she is always tired looking after Anamika, that's why."

"But still. We have so much fun there. I want to play with you all the time."

"But we play all the time here anyways."

"You eat here alone all the time. You know we have Yash uncle and Meera auntie here from all the way from London. You know how far that is? Its really far."

"Really? Well that's good. Here have some more daal" (he fed another spoon to Vicky)

"We all can eat together all the time"

"Just like now? I am eating with you aren't I?"

"NO. I want you to come there and eat with us." (He shouts. Maan puts the spoon down carrying Vicky in his arms towards the sofa. Vicky hugs him tight crying) "I don't like that you are here. I don't see you that much anymore. I think even Di misses you, that is why she wanted you to come to the party."

Maan makes Vicky look at him. He gently wipes his tears.

"What did you say? Your Di wanted me to come?"

Vicky nodes his head with fresh new tears again. "I am not suppose to tell you. Now, she is going to be mad at me and not going to talk to me." (He starts to cry again hugging Maan tight. Maan sighs as he tries to console his little brother)

"I didn't you my little brother is also a baby like Anamika?"

"I am not a baby!" (Vicky says while crying. Maan laughs)

"ohh really than what are these?" (he points to his tears)

"It is true. Everyone gets mad at me and than leaves me, like mom and dad, you, Di everyone. I am trying to be a good boy like I promised Di and now she will hate me because I ruined our mission"

"you didn't ruin it. Look, lets keep this secret okay? And look around" (Vicky looks around in tears) Is your di here? (Vicky nodes his head no) Okay then, she will never find out. Only if you tell her than she will find out."

"Will you tell her?"

"Me? No way. Now, stop crying and lets go to the gym. I will show you some new gym moves that we can do together as fun. You want to do boxing?"

"yeah. Like they do in the movies. I know some moves too bhai. See my muscles, girls go crazy over them at school. I am the only strong boy in my class"

Maan gets up putting his hands up in the air while Vicky blows some punches in the air. Maan backs up slowly scared.

"oh no. Vicky don't hurt me." Maan runs all over the living room while Vicky runs after him.

I can't believe that is the same Maan. He has changed a lot. I only hope this change is for good but even then will it change the relationship between Maan and Geet? Can they ever be husband and wife again? I left the place to talk to Meera. Geet is like my little sister. I have to help her in anyway I can. If Maan truly has changed then she deserves to know. Whether he deserves a second chance or not is up to her.

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