WS: the unlucky girl (comp) removed sorry

farzu3008

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

prakash is such an ass. but superb part loved it. dont want geet marrying dev so am sure there gonna be some twist... so waiting waiting eagerly for next part

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shabnam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

awesome...yar kese bhi karke maaneet ki shadi karvana...plz...dev aur geet ki shadi bardasht nhi hogi...

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snehapriya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Oh my god. So much mu & hatred.

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gbhat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

awesome update. this prakash is corruting maan's mind like anything, but please a big NO NO. for dev and geet marriage. a twist coming up. continue soon

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Downhill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

fabulous update..i love the way the story is progressing...i just hope this isnt a tragedy...coz this story is too good, and wudnt want it to end on a sad note... very convincing and nuanced characterisatisation which boldly portrays characters with flaws and feeling of insecurity gnawing them...keep writing...wud love to read more...

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Arthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: yappingduck
fabulous update..i love the way the story is progressing...i just hope this isnt a tragedy...coz this story is too good, and wudnt want it to end on a sad note... very convincing and nuanced characterisatisation which boldly portrays characters with flaws and feeling of insecurity gnawing them...keep writing...wud love to read more...

As of now I can let u this will not be a pure love story... as the title goes its abt geet and how unlucky she is... I really think u'd. Not say the same thing after another 2 or 3 updates... this not being a tragedy... 😉

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punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

GEET MAY BE HANDA PRINCESS OUTSIDE BUT INSIDE HER HOME SHE IS JUST AN ABUSED CHILD

MAAN IS IN LOVE WITH HER AND CANT STOP HIMSELF FROM IMAGINING HER WITH DEV

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gurudrishti

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I THINK NOW ITS TIME GOR HEARTBREAK OF GEET . WANT MAANEET MARRIAGE PPPLLLZZZ. DIFFERENT N BEAUTIFUL STORY. AS GEET IS THE UNLUCKY GIRL IN THIS FF SO NEITHER SHE WUD GET MARRIED TO HER LUV / FIANCEE DEV NOR AND MAAN WUD ALWAYS SEE HER AS ... OF DEV. ITS 10 JAN WHERE IS NEX PART BUDDY?

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Arthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: manisha259
<font color="#cc0099">I THINK NOW ITS TIME GOR HEARTBREAK OF GEET . WANT MAANEET MARRIAGE PPPLLLZZZ. DIFFERENT N BEAUTIFUL STORY. AS GEET IS THE UNLUCKY GIRL IN THIS FF SO NEITHER SHE WUD GET MARRIED TO HER LUV / FIANCEE DEV NOR AND MAAN WUD ALWAYS SEE HER AS ... OF DEV.ITS 10 JAN WHERE IS NEX PART BUDDY?</font>

Yaar dint u read the 2 chap in pg 3? I'v given it. Tomo chap 3 by 12 in the afternoon

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