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Posted: 12 years ago
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MAANEET~BROKEN PROMISES~



"They say a loving heart can't break you ... Its for you, it will live for you , it will care for you , it will breathe for you... It will only make you feel how special you areto someone .. Someone's life is attached to you., how you feel when she laughs , how your heart dances in joy seeing her lost it is always a bliss for that craving and always longing heart who wants to cherish each and moment with its beloved."..


she was no damsel in distress nor he was her knight with a shining armour.,.. But she was his saviour a promise that she always to keep.. She was GEET the light and a melody of his life... She changed him into a better person a guy who now cannot even think his life without her., it was her efforts and patience that bear the fruit ... He cant help praising her she is the sole reason of his life now ... But did he proceeded in a wrong way in forcing her in this relation.,.

maan came to his room its been ten days they got married ... And again a known aloofness a tinge of hurt he can see in her eyes standing near the window she was gazing at the wide sky which engulfes the dark shadow of night with the shine of moon..

maan was seeing her lost cocooning herself from the dark night like it was ready to take her in it...
maan came near her he himself was drowned in the grief of breaking the promise he had given to her... Slowly turning her to him seeing those pools of eyes having the hurt .. She smiled a little hiding her sorrow , his heartbleeded crying with the unknown pain he didnt knew that ever existed but the truth cannot be denied everything every passing emotion belonging to her affects him ... The hurt it feels always makes him to loose himself like that day ...

maan couldnt bear her silence anymore he fell down on his knees asking for forgiveness.. He had broken her trust the promise of not hurting her but his one deed had made him angry lost and torn...
maan : wont you shout geet , i have done a sin hurting my saviour .. You brought a lost soul drowned in the hell of alcohol and lust you changed a person who hated himself who just knew how to hurt and bleed , you are my life

he didnt knew why hurting her was affecting him but he didnt get that when two hearts starts to feel for one another then you does the things which you feel is right.. his tears were flowing hurting her she just closed her eyes for a second and asked him..

geet : why do you have to marry me why didnt you let this orphan to live by her own ... Geet was hurt she never wanted maan to pity her condition.. She was all alone like a flower between the thorns which is always toprick by its lust and dirty desires... She never wanted maan or anyone to stand for her... But he did .. He always had been a support to her unknown to him..
maan looked at her blank eyes he could see the eyes in pain he got up and looked into her eyes..

maan : you are not alone do you get this if not get this clear in your mind if someone will come to you i will be standing between and no one can bully or insult what belongs to me ...

geet was shocked surprised by his words the same feeling entered her the same emotions were there when the only son of a well renowed family maan khurana announced her to be his forever ... She always thought it was in a fit of anger he announced and married her but now she seems to be lost in those black diamonds..geet retorted
geet : you destroyed your life
maan : if this is destruction i am always ready to remain destroyed but i lost the promise of not hurting you ... Geet couldnt take it anymore and hugged him tight loosing herself in him...

geet : you never broke any promise you never... You can never hurt me maan ... Maan looked at her he didnt why everything is right now he took her in his comforting arms ...

maan : never say you are alone never i did broke my promise by marrying me who is not good enough for you
geet snuggled to him "yes you are more humble lovely and a dream for me just for me "



I KNOW I KNOW AGAIN A RANDOM STUPID THOUGHT ... Cant help it i am such an emotional fool when it comes to maaneet..



SUHAANA
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
that was an amazing story di
the emotions were portrayed so beautifully
the hurt, pain, guilt maan was going through was just beautiful
maan thought he forced geet into his life
his savior, his life
he was dying in guilt each day
looking at hurt n pain in geet's eyes
geet changed maan from a alcoholic to a person who cares now
cares about geet who is his life now
whom he can't see in pain
geet feels that maan destroyed his life by marrying her
so not true
geet was the best life partner he cud ever get
she thought he announced her his in a fit of anger
but maan was in love
maybe dint accept his feelings but still in love
maan is so angry to hear geet saying that she is alone
he can't bear hearing that
both can't bear listening to each other in guilt
there are no heights to their love
just pure unconditional love is flowing through their veins
the story was fab di
luved it thoroughly
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fabulous part dear
only these keep maaneet alive dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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okay this seems different form usual
whats the promise he broke that he would never hurt her
and by marrying her he did hurt her
okay am confused soul here then
how does marrying someone break that promise
hope we know more of it
cheers for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice one
maaneet married

bt wt promise
me 😕😕😕
waiting 4 more
plz cont it soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome
fabulous
liked a lot dear
happy new year
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
wow great os plz update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing OS suhi.
loved it so much dear.😳
thank u shank u for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice one dear liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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vow brilliant one
heart touched too
thanx for the pm dear

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