Life partner3,NEXT THREAD-PG154 - Page 77

Originally posted by: mayyo13

First of all I want to say that you chose the perfect title for this piece! It so perfectly summed up what the matter inside related to. 😊

The whole of this, I don't know what to say, story or chapter so beautifully showed the side of the negativity that often surrounds us in a totally different light. In a way that we normally fail to see. We curse, hate and dislike the ones who are bitter and show the same but we never think what caused them to become like this. I'm not talking about the crimes committed around the society. No. I'm talking about normal people having that little pinch of bitterness in them. If we are ever able to know how they had been before, what kind of circumstances they had had to face, how they coped up with it, I'm sure we cannot blame them for the lost pieces of themselves, the pieces that time and hardships eroded to make them rough, sharp and unbending..

This came from my life experience. I have a very wise father. When I was a teen there was this uncle that plagued the living daylights out of me. He always left me in tears. My Dad (my God) sat with me and explained the man's circumstances to me which were very heart breaking. He always told me that you will get praise for your actions but when you don't, try to improve from the criticism that you receive, try to understand the other person a bit and then you may see things differently.

After that day I was able to see the man differently and he never left me in tears again.

Avi, the way you wrote Maya's perspective of her life, I can never dislike her any more! Really well expressed! 👏

Two messages I got from this piece. One, love always conquers. No matter how badly you've been treated by someone, if you keep on showering love and care towards them, your love will win over their harshness! Two, never lose your faith in Almighty. If you just believe that whatever He does is for good, and if you believe that He'll always keep your loved ones under His protective hand, you're not going to be disappointed with what you get! Another message that I learnt is it's never too late to set things straight. One hug, a few loving words and a caring pat on the head can do wonders! This is all it takes to put past the hatred and anger you've held for years at a stretch and set you free.. Thank you Avi for putting across such lovely messages in an amazing way! 😊

I don't think I can say more than this Avi. In simple words, I loved every word of this piece, it brought tears to my eyes, it made me smile and then sigh with relief in the end. Thank you for letting us read this wonderful piece from you! 🤗 From super commenter Mariam, this is all I can ask for.

And I do want you to write more often and post it too but only when you feel like doing it. 😊

PS: Is purple your favourite colour? 😃

Am Am very busy lately, so barely having time to comment.

Originally posted by: Diva7

frst let me control my tears😭 ...damn they aren't stopping

Avi dear fabulous piece of writing ...as we say there's always a reason behind everything, we nvr tried to unndrstnd y Maya Aunty has so much hatred towards kiran n khurana's ...n aftr reading today's chapter it was all justified ...i mean evry single person has its own positive n negative traits ...its their nature n nature develops within your surrounding, how we nurture it...Maya ji is giving, what she got...

yeah we can say she shud be evn more understandable when she faced so much in her life n shud nt behaved d way she behaved wid kiran ...but dats d point...her perception was different n its her personality trait...all d while she knew kiran is a gem bt her motherly luv n anger is stopping her to accept d fact ...but now i am happy dat she accepted kiran n khurana's whole heartily 😃

nd m grateful to you dat we got to know more abt Raj...he's a lovely person

plz Avi dear do write more... i luvd ur writing😛

Pallu janeman issspecial shukriya tere ko fr pm😆🤗

Aviii

Hi Avi!

I have not caught up with this entire FF yet. I read Maya's portion of it that you had penned down. From what I can gather Maya has not exactly been holier than thou.

First of all, my question. Have you never even considered writing until now? Seriously? Come on get your fingers busy typing real soon. I want to read more from you. This is not a request. It is a demand. And I am sure others here will join hands with me.

Coming to your writing. It is very nice and heartfelt. It is so easy to be judgmental for all of us isn't it? When somebody says something caustic to us, we immediately overreact and scream murder. We think we have been greatly wronged. Most often than not people who are bitter seem to possess the knack of hitting people where it hurts most. For after all such people know what hurt really means. I have personally come across many such people and have been angry too. I cannot find it in myself to forgive someone who has been rude to me, easily. For whatever reason. Even if I am on the wrong side.

Thank you for bringing someone like that to light. And giving them a human face. Everyone has something good in them. It takes the right person and circumstance to bring out that goodness. Some unfortunate souls do not have that someone and are burdened with something called 'life'. I could understand Maya in this update. She is not evil for the sake of being evil or because it gives her sadistic pleasure. She is just beaten. It is a very nice addendum and suits this FF where all characters are basically good human beings who live for the sake of their family. Your update fits in like a perfect jigsaw puzzle in this entire FF. 👏

Originally posted by: glassdoor

Hi Avi!

I have not caught up with this entire FF yet. I read Maya's portion of it that you had penned down. From what I can gather Maya has not exactly been holier than thou.

First of all, my question. Have you never even considered writing until now? Seriously? Come on get your fingers busy typing real soon. I want to read more from you. This is not a request. It is a demand. And I am sure others here will join hands with me.

Coming to your writing. It is very nice and heartfelt. It is so easy to be judgmental for all of us isn't it? When somebody says something caustic to us, we immediately overreact and scream murder. We think we have been greatly wronged. Most often than not people who are bitter seem to possess the knack of hitting people where it hurts most. For after all such people know what hurt really means. I have personally come across many such people and have been angry too. I cannot find it in myself to forgive someone who has been rude to me, easily. For whatever reason. Even if I am on the wrong side.

Thank you for bringing someone like that to light. And giving them a human face. Everyone has something good in them. It takes the right person and circumstance to bring out that goodness. Some unfortunate souls do not have that someone and are burdened with something called 'life'. I could understand Maya in this update. She is not evil for the sake of being evil or because it gives her sadistic pleasure. She is just beaten. It is a very nice addendum and suits this FF where all characters are basically good human beings who live for the sake of their family. Your update fits in like a perfect jigsaw puzzle in this entire FF. 👏

Originally posted by: TheBrat

I've always believed that every person is so because of his/her circumstance. Easier said than done, is what I thought before when I was told to forgive and understand the other person. But some incidents, some lessons, some experiences made me see sense and I would give credit to my mother for this, who played a key role in making me learn this lesson, which I believe made me a better person.
When I was reading Maya's perspective, I felt as if reading someone's personal diary. A woman who had no person to love other than her own child, who had not known to show the love, or express it, how can the woman forgive when the happiness of the person she loved the most was snatched? Though Kiran was as much a victim of the ordeal, since she believed it was Kiran's fault, it was natural to hold a grudge, and it was natural to feel envious of the strong relations she saw between the Khuranas. Somewhere she craved for such a support, such love when she was all alone.
And the constant love of the Khuranas was what have made her introspect. But the beauty of this part was that, the realization knocked her when she saw Kiran's dejected face, with forlorn expression, the happiness long gone, her face all worn out. It might have reminded her of her own past. How ironic that the woman who started hating her daughter in law had snapped out of it when she saw the first sign of resemblance of herself in the girl. Maya probably wasn't heartless to even wish her greatest enemy to suffer her destiny. How can she hope Kiran's life to be ruined then?
The reaction of Kiran was icing on the cake, when she broke down but still chided herself for not being strong. And the last phone call was cherry on top. Woh kehte haina you know who your loved ones are only at the time of distress. I am glad to have the re union but am gladder to know that Raj is safe.
Avi, that was brilliant. 👏

Originally posted by: Susegad

And why why why were you not willing to show it to us for heavens sake.

To me the most amazing fact is that you picked out the most hated character in this FF and decided to give her a makeover. 😆

To reedem such a character is not an easy job. I was just not able to see the goodnes in Maya and I just loved hating her. To be shown the shown the psychology behind her behaviour was an eye opener to say the least.

All her life it's just been her and her son. Kiran was the intruder. However she acceptedd Kiran b'coz Kiran loved her son. But the moment Kiran put her families need before her husband's and in the process lost her child, all bets were off.

But then you reedemed her oh so beautifly, that it really brought tears to my eyes. Which I swear I thought was be impossible especially wheer Maya was concerned.

But when Maya finally really looked at Kiran not her son's wife but as another woman just like herself, the whole equation changed.

<font color="#6633ff" size="4" face="Times New Roman">It was like looking in the mirror of her past. Somehow her face reflected the same need that she had herself felt in her days of struggle. Kiran who had always taken care of her and all her demands looked on the verge of collapse.</font>

<font color="#6633ff" size="4" face="Times New Roman">Suddenly the years of anger against this young girl dissolved and the mother in her arose. </font>

<font color="#6633ff" size="4" face="Times New Roman">The soothing that she was doing was soothing her own shattered self. It is true that giving of yourself can heal you more than ever and she felt that today.</font>

<font size="2">These are the few liines which changed my outllook on Maya forever and brought tears to my eyes.</font>

<font size="2">Just superb writing Avi.👏</font><font size="2">Hum to aapke phan ho gaye.😆</font>

<font size="2">I am so very glad Palin convinced you to post it. </font>

<font size="2">Now I know, who the next person after Mariam is , jisko hume humare style mein protsahit(cough cough😉) karna hai.</font>

<font size="2">Loved the redemption of Maya meemsaab.😆</font>

Thank you for your kind words.

I loved it