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Posted: 12 years ago
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Changed d title...Wife changed to spouse.

Any specific reason????
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: crazydream

Changed d title...Wife changed to spouse.

Any specific reason????

Chhavi its a season 2...I made it a lil changement 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Tum ne pukara...aur hum chale aayien!😆

Thoda maaf kar do...aane mein thodi der ho gayi...😳
Edited by Water. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Water.


Tum ne pukara...aur hum chale aayien!😆

Thoda maaf kar do...aane mein thodi der ho gayi...😳

🤗 prologue past karti hoon 😆 sorry hindi is bad 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so here it goes,
My sorrows song,
A song that's short,
And not to long,
A silent pain, you'll never feel,
A broken heart, that'll never heal
How do you kill, A dying love,
One that you thought, was sent from above
One that brought so many lies and tears
One that you swore would last through the years
But now I lie here,
Broken in pain,
Clinging to life,
And whispering your name,
Now realizing you were never the one,
But now it's to late, 'cuz my song is done.




Prologue

Every time I close my eyes; your face keeps flashing like thunderbolts.

I feel current running through my body; but yet you're so far...so far, you're unreachable.

Alone, I lie, in the one of world's luxurious' place with the treasure of our lives; all alone...

"Geet" she called. She kept calling me; oh well; she needed me that's why I was here until I became officially a member of this family.

Just then I heard a squeaky sound, but it was not a squeak at all'it was my daughter trying to speak while eating chocolates; seriously; her grandmother pampers her a lot.

I wish...I wish that her dad would pamper her too. Thank God; she's only 11 month and a half year old. Dadi handed me her and smiled; I smiled back and she went away.

I hate to boast; but my daughter is very beautiful; she has an angelic face...

"Geet, can you come please"

I was called again, holding my little princess, I went away...

I changed the 'wife' to 'spouse'. Please hit like and do comment, in case of less response I will have to discontinue it unfortunately...I will try to update regularly with my school and everything; do like and comment.

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😆

Next Part: Part 1



Edited by music_girl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Will be waiting for the prologue!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Water.

Will be waiting for the prologue!

check above 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Ok I read it...

Seems like Maan is in a luxurious place somewhere and he keeps hearing Geet calling him...

Geet is with their child (m assuming) and is all alone with Dadima...

But whose dadi? Is it Maan's or Geet's

She already eats chocolate at that age...hmmm😲 I m guessing kids do eat chocolate early...

guess they are separated...Geet wishes that he pampers the child too...so does he know that they have a child? I believe so!

If he does, that means he does not want the child...or did not trust Geet and thinks it is someone else's child...

I guess will have to wait...
Edited by Water. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Water.

Ok I read it...


Seems like Maan is in a luxurious place somewhere and he keeps hearing Geet calling him...

Geet is with their child (m assuming) and is all alone with Dadima...

But whose dadi? Is it Maan's or Geet's

She already eats chocolate at that age...hmmm😲 I m guessing kids do eat chocolate early...

guess they are separated...Geet wishes that he pampers the child too...so does he know that they have a child? I believe so!

If he does, that means he does not want the child...or did not trust Geet and thinks it is someone else's child...

I guess will have to wait...



Boy, aren't you fast for the comment 😆😉

I like it, I like it, dear 😉

Well, I'm already typing Part 1, so be ready dear 😉😉

It's always Dadi, Maan's Dadi, will clear that in next part...

Separated track and child track, I'll clear that too!!! 😳

🤗 Love reading your comment dear 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Awesome prologue
loved the start quite different from others
geet has a 11 month old daughter
and maan is somewhere else remembering geet
waiting for the first part
please update soon

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