MG FF:A torn relation pt link to thraed 2 pg 1 - Page 26

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Posted: 12 years ago
aww.. how can Maan is going to Payal's room where she called Geet to meet there.. yeh hotel walo ne dono ko 1 rook allot kiya kya?

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Posted: 12 years ago
so maan nd geet r going to same room.ye payal vilian hain kya?
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n lovely update! Maan drunk! n going to same room wher Geet is! Oh no! well written! update soon
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~A TORN RELATION~



PART 8

maan's point of view continues...


His eyes were filled with disgust and a dirty smile playing on his lips… he knew maan had understood that he was asking for a girl.. or say a S*** for him … his mind was already freezed with hatred and remorse for her.. he could never forget that ayesha tried to cheat him and not only this she actually used his most sensitive tresured relation.. his friend who was no less than his sister arohi… and how can ayesha forget that maan can never forgive anyone who will hurt arohi… he was always a protective brother since the time she had actually saved him and always feel indebted to her …..

Maan tried to forget his words but right now his frustation and anger is on its peek which is needed to be unleashed on someone and better be it's a payed girl who wont even open her mouth with the anger that will be unleashed on her….

Maan entrusted a bundle of notes in his hands and asked him to sent her in his room…the man had a dirty smile … the filty and disgusting feeling that maan was having the movements of that maan already said that he is in this work for many years afterall he looked no less than forty plus…. He was not a man who will seek the comfort in someone's arm and now that to a S*** who actually is not loyal to anyone.. somewhere his mind knew no one could cool down his rage that he is feeling from the day itself he found arohi I that terrible state … till ow he had with arohi's request had hidden this truth from arjun but how long he will be able to he didn't know ..he is having full right to know aabout his wife's condition the miseries she underwent…..

Slightly tipsy maan ordered the man…

Maan: send her in room no 405

Here someone heared their talk… a disgusting smirk on her face….

Lady: pay back time now sweety…geet you think I will leave you for what you did to me… never payal never leaves her enemies and you are my friend.. but not anymore….

She quickly sent a message to geet …

" come right now geet waiting for you …."

Payal..

Geet had a small smile..finally everything will be resolved she will tell payal all the truth..she never tried to harm her or did anything that will be for her disinterest… she was excited to go in the room unaware what destiny had planned for her….

Geet st: payal aaj main tujhe sab sach bata dungi….. I was never at fault it was not my mstake it hope you will understand me..aur ye hi nahi I wlll ask forgiveness from you..kyunki maafi maangne se koi chota bada thodi na hota hai..hain na babaji.

.she looked at her saviour her babaji taking a slight assurance from him that today all the differences will be sorted out… but least she knew that her trust will be now broken into pieces by the man who is destined for her…

Since geet reached early than maan since she was on the third floor of the hotel … and it didn't take her time to reach the next one exactly to room no 405….

She was standing facing her self to the window… it was not that much dark..but still she was yet to know the darkest phase of her life… the door opened with a sound click ..it was loud enough for her..geet turned around only to see a drunk stranger there… she can say he was not in his senses but by looking at him she couldn't confirm if there is a mistake she was waiting for payal not someone else….

Maan first didn't saw anyonee…he was so much drunk… it was actually first time he had ever taken the alcohol that was taking toll on him , his senses making him fumble in his steps…. He closed the door.. that made geet to come quick

She clicked the knob but it was like locked… a sudden panic surged through her….

Geet : who are you..open this door, ..

Maan didn't listen to her..geet was just frantic with her moves in order to open the door…

She for a second pleaded him her eyes were already wet ..a slight fearful tears were just waiting to fall down… and he .. to say the truth he was practically not in his senses to listen or hear what the other person is saying .. he just saw a girl sanding and assumed her to be the girl he actually payed for … she again pleaded with the visible tears that were now flowing freely from those doe shaped eyes….

Geet: mujhe jaane dijiye.. I think I am in a wrong room..please let me go….

His senses , right thinking betrayed him completely only thing that was in his drunken state were the man's words about the payed W******E .. her cries were not reaching his ears..he would have let her go if may be the intensity of his hatred with the deadly alcohol was less.. his eyes were red like shooting glares..making her to move backward ….. the fear of getting forced was clearly visible in her eyes… though he never took any step towards her but the intimating glaze was enough to make her petrified…

Maan looked at her.. he had a feeling of pure disgust seeing her . the girl was standing just offering her self, her dignity , her self esteem to him…. He didn't know but why even in his totally drunk state …. He never wanted to touch a girl.. but to cool down his rage.. he needed something to leash his anger his demon on it..

And here she is his prey… that was the only thing that was in his mind… he never thought that someone will be mistaken of her path to his room… he was just seeing her as the girl who offered him herself in pretext of some filthy money..

Anger filled, hatred filled voice that made her senses numb his words were scaring her piercing her soul with the events that could follow in some time….. she didn't know what was happening….

Maan: strip right now….

The words were like poison filled thorns that he was throwing on her. Were made her numb..she stood rooted at her spot…. he just said and didn't even flinch on his demand.. that was completely unethical….

On seeing no improvement.. he looked at the petite figure that was now looking at him the anger, the fear ,the disgust ,the hatred, the pain that were visible in those eyes ..he couldn't even imagine.. his right mind of thinking and to work according had already left him once he was drunk.…

As soon as the girl (geet) tried to go away from him….

His anger reached its height with his steps that were following her ….

And this was the limit of annoyance…

He barked throwing her dupatta off her..and picking her in his arms…

Maan: I don't have full time for a filth like you his eyes were red and her closed with fear crying hysterically. Pleading him but nothing was in its right sense…..

Geet: chodo… chodo mujhe … leave me. She was yelling.. trying to free herself.. he had pulled her wrist with such a force that broke few bangles that were in her hands.. the glass pierced through her skin..making her flinch In pain… blood starting to flow from her wrist… but he was least bothered….

He pushed her on the bed with such a force that hurt her.. she was backing herself.. trying to free herself..ut her attempts were futile.. for once again he barked in his hoarse voice making her to sob quietly….

Geet was pleading again and again…

Geet: please mujhe chod dijiye…. Maan didn't looked at her pleading instead he gulped down the drink that room service had placed…. The dink further made him like a wild animal…. Now totally of his actual self….

He roughly pulled her zipper..and made her upper self bare….. he was actually not even looking at heer exposed self..which she was tryng to hide with her shivering hands..but his gaze was only fixed to her face which was clouded with tears…. He was having a utter satisfaction seeing her crying….

Maan murmered..

Maan: you deserve this ayesha.. the voice was low.. that couldn't reach her eyes.. but his next move made her pull beneath her … her body turned cold,… the hitting subdued knowing nothing can be done know…this animal wont leave her…. He pulled off her inners with the salwar making her complete bare.. the cold wind hit her body..making her aware of her position.. the eyes which were closed till now…opened only to see him hovering over her …. Again in an last attempt to save her she tried to push him.. but he pinned her hands above her head.. and roughly slammed his lips on her soft petals… he was biting sucking her lips.. he was all over her…his upper lip on her lower ..asking for its entry but she didn't opened…in order to seek its place he bit her on the corner only to see the blood oozing out…. He was not bothered of anything.. his lips were on her skin..making her to feel burning sensation..she was know loosing to a stranger….

" ek anjnabee ke haathon apni zindagi ko kho bethi …."

Suddenly she again open her mouth with constant sobs…



geet : Please no what are you doing .. I think that's a mistake .. She was crying sobbing , please dont do this to me ., her clothes was off he was kissing her like a hungry lion like telling her that today no one can held me back ... Fortunately his grip , his so called devoring was not so rough and not even soft but for her she knew what she is loosing his every word was making her to feel disgust on her he was highly aroused and drunk beyond limits... "today i will celebrate in the honour of destroying you " his words were so correct he was tormenting her voilating her in a sense he was speaking truth that was actually holding a double meaning ... She had stopped protesting wriggling just waiting for this to get finish ...

but nothing change or improvement was there…. Instead his lips started to devour her more carnally.. and the moment he entered her she knew now nothing can improve her condition she has lost everything to him…. He was rough on her the pain that she felt was unbearable ..he didn't left her until he was satisfied ..she was like a ghost under him..tears have dried out …..

with that he slept on her..she roughly pushed him… controlling her cries…. Leaving with her lost self ….

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Here comes the end of maan's past with his point of view….




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