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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update maaneet are married 😃 their first kiss😳
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome superb fantastic update ...lovely
ohh GOD geet is so innocent ..ab maan geet will b away from each other
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Loved the updates 18,19,20. Finally maaneet married and ofcourse they official kiss completed 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey ange...ths is ur frnd NISHA...finaly got tym 2 compliment u 4 a wonderful story...let me start wid characterz...they r amazng n perfct...GEET...maan ki deewani...MAAN...apni bashist ke pyaar mein khoya khoya...apni geet se sath...RANVEER...geet ka dost...bohot sweet bt i agree maan n his possesivenes 4 her...story ke bare mein hmm...its divine n pure love betwn MAANEET...a phase whr a girl agrees marry maan n maan to meet his bashit doesnt wait 4 mre n meet as a sales guy...n get to knw how sweet n lovely life partner he got0in the forw of geet...mjan gets knw geet's crazines tht she loves his songs n composes anthr song 4 her n send it to her...he didnt knew whn he s aqtd loving her so inensely n deeply...!thn al make a plan so tht mbneet meet...thr goes a turn in the story whr both confes thr feelngs n divine loue 4 each othr n get married in curch...ths type of love we dnt get to c always n0hankz to axpe 4 lovely story n lovely poems of divine love...hope u continue it as albyys waitng 4 nxt part... 👏 👏 😊
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Hey eza i finally finished this.. N it was sooo dreamy yaar... But precap :( add me in ur pm list
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have Read all your comments and loved it thats why Updating next part quickly



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(c) angelic_eza analyst 2012. All rights reserved

Dreams Beyond Imagination (love happens) 😳
part 21



Lollzz Supriyaa a Very Warm welcome 😉 on this Thread 😆

@Shradhha Good Bye sweets , All the very best and Do well ... and come back soon will miss u and ur cribbing 😆 and @Ananya aka anaan Congratulations Bada wala for the Good news 😊 May Allah bless u with happiness and success

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Geet need to go to HP with Ranbeer, without Him...

The togetherness of sometime and now partition, now separation till their wedding... The thought itself shivering her...

She feared to leave him... to leave him and go away, something strong urges stopping her, saying not to leave...

Was that health condition of Daarji which was making her scared or It was a feeling of being distanced from the she started loving more than her dear life...

Maan, Hum chaltey hai... jaldi pohunchna hai HP,

Abhi abhi toh mile ho
Abhi na karo chootne ki baat
Abhi abhi toh pasand aaye ho
Abhi abhi rootne ki baat


He looked at Ranbeer, and than at geet...

She was looking him... he gazed toa her... and she frozed for some moments...

What was residing in his two shelss of heart...fear, pain, sorrow...

He wanted her to stop ... to stop and to hud dearly, kiss her once again and say Jaan... don't worry everything will be fine... he wanted her to clutch his shirt and cry out what she was trying to hide in her eyelids...

She looked down and commanded ranbeer...

Mandu chal...

Abhi abhi toh roshni aayi
Abhi na karo muh chupane ki baat
Abhi abhi zindagi shuru hai
Abhi abhi tham jaane ki baat
Hum toh haare mahiya re
Moonde naina neend tihare

She left , his geet, his mishty, his bahisht left Him... the mere thought suffocating him... she turned a bit, looked at him with teary eyes...

What was there in her eyes... Hope, trust, anticipation, expectation, all beautiful memories of their togetherness, all cute giggle and sweet laugh of their love and all angry glare which they had gave to each other... more than anything it was their love... he closed his eyes tightly trying to get off from those moments and realization hit him and in next fraction he understood what she wanted that time...

What a girl will always admire and adore about her companion, "he should be with her in her best and her worst" so that geet, she was a girl with simple dreams, simple thoughts, Maano sapno ki gundhi hui ho, pyaar se bani, pyaar ke liye...Maan ki bahsiht, uska Pyaar...

She turned and started walking towards ranbeer who was waiting for her patiently, knowing her well, her state of mind and storm of emotions welling inside her...

Maan stopped her in mid and grabbed her hand, indicating ranbeer to wait for few more minutes...


Teri baazoo mein meri chahate samaaye
Teri dhadkanon ko meri dhadkane sunaye

He brought her in private sitting area, hugging her tightly, their heart met with each other, like the previous day, the sole difference was yesterday their heart were contented with happiness and glee of togetherness, today their heart were sinking in sorrow of being apart, its breakaway breaking them , yet somehow both were managing to control the urges and put strong face in front of another...

She clutched his shirt, and sobbed... she hugged him tightly as if he was her only possession, her priceless possession which was on stake...

Her sobbing were giving him tough time, her tears were only thing he had never expected to face, neither he wanted to ...

What destiny planning its game...they were brutually destined to desire eachother, maano unki khwaahishe bhi ek dusrey se judi ho, agar who hai toh sab kuchh hai aur agar who nahi toh kucch bhi nahi, lafzo me kehne ki shiddat nahi, aur aankho se bayaan karne ki himmat nahi...

Yeh Milan kucch pal kaa aur phir na jaane kitni sadiyo ki judaayi ... indeed it would be in centuries as a mili second away from each other isn't less thn a centuary...

Teri khwahishon se meri khwahishe riha hai
Teri karwato se meri daastan bayaan hai
Kya sukoon kya junoon
Hum nawa

She calmed down... her sob subsequently reduced and his hands were caressing her back and scalp, there was nt a desire, there was nt his physical need, his touch was depicting love, care, concern for her, The feeling she is pain and he ccant do anything angering him, being helpless was never a Maan Singh Khurana, nor now...

He shrugged off his thoughts and diverted his attention towards her, she was leaving now, when they will meet, she was his, his bahisht, they weren't separating just they are being away from each other... for the namesake of their family, They are in love, they are officially married, no one can separate them until and unless they want to...

Their heart just refusing each and every reason and wanted to be together, whereas minds were giving different reasons to reasoning the act of separation.


Abhi abhi dil ki suni hai
Abhi na karo zamane ki baat

They were in their own land, when Ranbeer called maan informing its time to leave ...its time for their separation, yet a sweet torturing journey to miss each other... They say, in arrange maariage the best part is from engagement till marriage, they were going to enjoy this phase, they were going to miss each other , the pain of missing another with happiness of hope they will be together soon...

Maan chalo chaltey hai, beer must be waiting ...

She said smilingly, trying to cheer up his mood, she started understading him bit, though she still souldnt claim him to know well, but atleast she understading his core nature...

He looked at her with complaining eyes..as if saying u want his company that's why u leaving me...


Abhi abhi baat rukhi hai
Abhi abhi dohrane ki baat

She looked him with puppy eyes...pleasding him not to make this separation difficult with such thoughts and actions...

She wanted him to go happily and come back soon happily in some time with full right and authority as her husband...


Abhi abhi aawargi aayi
Abhi na karo sambhalne ki baat

Ignoring her pleading gaze, he hugged her tightly and started kissing her neck, drugging her, forced her to moan his name with single touch of his...he had hold her waist tightly, and pulled her on him, her whole body was pastered on his...

He started kissing her madly, there was urgency in his kiss... passion, aggression , pain and love... that was his kiss defining...

All emotions at same time...


Abhi abhi zindagi shuru hai...
Abhi abhi tham jaane ki baat
Woh subah toh bewaja ho
Ki guzare bin tumhare jis ki raat

Looking deeply in her eyes, Seeing her plead to let go, he sighed, and left her, it was painful for him, he turned his back towards her, It was painful to see her going away, HE tought she left when two soft hands grabbed him from back,


Teri baazoo mein meri chahate samaahe
Teri dhadkanon ko meri dhadkane sunaye
Teri khwahishon se meri khwahishe rahi hai
Teri karwato se meri daastan bayaan hai
Kya sukoon kya junoon
Hum nawa

hugging him sweetly made him turned around, when he seen her innocent face was showing some beautiful glow, she opened her hand and took out something, he was curious to know what it was, when she cutely smiled and said , Yeh aapke liye... it was "keepsakes of love" for him, to remember their beautiful moments...

It was a heartshaped stone, which Craved maaneet beautifully in FOOTLIGHT MT style font, he smiled and kissed her hands and he handed over him that small heartshaped, he hugged her saying, We will be together soon geet, bass kuch din aur phir iss poori duniyaa ke saamne u will be my wife...saareey rasmo aur riwaajo ke saath, humaarey gharwaalo ki marzi ke saath ...

She smiled with tears brimming in her eyes, and nodded and he hugged her dearly as if trying to capture the moment in his heart, mind and feeling in his skin forever...

Hum toh haare mahiya re
Moonde naina neend tihare


Precape: Geet in HP, strange behavior of all and Maan in KM
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main toh kabse wait kar rahi...aur haan tumhe mera welcome karna hain...lol😉😉
kyunki officially yeh mera pehla comment hain "UPDATE PAR"...
nyc update..loved it...their first kiss...n geet's shy nature...
main comments arne main bohot buri hoon..toh sorry

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